first 2000 point army list, ADVICE please

OK this is just a raw armylist of units that I put together, I am very open to feedback with the list, as I don't know good this list would be in a game.
Lords
Bloodthrister with Immortal fury and AOK 490.
Total 490
Heroes
1* HOK+ AOK 140
2* HOK+ AOK 140
HOT + MOS(shadow) + WH 160
Total 390

Core
1* 20 BL with FC and IOEW 295
2* 20 BL with FC 270
1 5 furies 60
2 5 furies 60
total 685
special
0
Rare
3 Bloodcrushers with FC 250
5 Flamers of Tzeentch 175
total 425
Total points of armylist 1990
Open to advice at about this armylist.

I'd drop the Bloodcrushers and put two single fiends in, then with the remaining points beef up the two bletter units up.

I think Strykehammer's suggestion is a good one. I'd also definitely swap out Shadow for Light on the Tzerald. Not only is it an easier lore to cast, but it is more versatile and combos way better with the Bletters.

OK I haven't tried light yet, see how it works out.
Bloodthrister with Immortal fury and AOK 490.
Total 490
Heroes
1* HOK+ AOK 140
2* HOK+ AOK 140
HOT + MOS(shadow) + WH 160
Total 390

Core
1* 25 BL with FC and IOEW 355
2* 25 BL with FC 330
1 5 furies 60
2 5 furies 60
total 685
special
0
Rare
2 fiends 110
5 Flamers of Tzeentch 175
total 285

That looks a lot better IMO.

Not meaning to be a miserable git, but should the points for the troops be removed (GW get shirty iirc).

I'm new to fantasy and don't really know what "shirty iirc" is?

I would not worry about removing the points cost as you have them. Once you start breaking lists down and putting the points cost for each individual thing ( magic items, unit upgrades etc) seems to be when GW geet a bit annoyed by the fact you are giving away what is in the army books they are trying to sell.

Sorry dude; shirty is a British term (I think) for annoyed.

I'm pretty new to fantasy too and that list looks good to me. If you like the crushers perhaps field them as 2 singles (maybe champions).

Perhaps you should check the points cost again. Herald of Khorne with armour doesnt cost that much, so you would get some more bloodletters =)
Otherwise the list looks pretty ok.

Just a few changes that I thought I make.


Lords
Bloodthrister with Immortal fury and AOK 490.
Total 490
Heroes
1* HOK+ AOK+BSB
2* HOK+ AOK
HOT + MOS(light) + WH
Total 415

Core
1* 30 BL with FC and IOEW
2* 25 BL with FC

Total 745


special
0
Rare

5 Flamers of Tzeentch

1 fiend
1 fiend
1 fiend
Total 340
waiting for advice with this list.

ust a few changes that I thought I make.


Lords
Bloodthrister with Immortal fury and AOK 490.
Total 490
Heroes
1* HOK+ AOK+BSB
2* HOK+ AOK
HOT + MOS(light) + WH
Total 415

Core
1* 30 BL with FC and IOEW
2* 25 BL with FC

Total 745


special
0
Rare

5 Flamers of Tzeentch

1 fiend
1 fiend
1 fiend
Total 340
waiting for advice with this list.

Well now you got one fiend too much in there. You can only have 2 same rare units in 2k game. If you want extra derailer / war machine hunter you could pick 5 furies instead. I would also pinch few points to get spell breaker on your HoT or Thirster to help you out. Flaming attacks on one of your heralds could also be helpful but isnt neccessary. Overall this is pretty standard list and should do ok.