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 [oneshot] A Little Too Late, ft Donghae & suju
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Posted: Mar 20 2008, 09:52 PM


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A little too late

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After super junior practising they dance, the entire members have fun with their self. Fooling around, dancing, and talking. Heechul bring his cat into the studio and play with her.

“Hyung, you bring your cat here? Are you nuts?” say Yesung who not really like a cat.

But Heechul ignore it and keep playing with his cat. While everyone fooling around, there is one person who has been silence all day. It was Donghae sitting at the corner mournfully. But he keep looking at someone, then he thought..
“Damn she so pretty..”

It was someone that donghae always watching all day. Super junior Personal assistants, Kim Eunhye. The girl who make donghae feel nervous and sweating. Everytime looking at her there is something he needs to tell her. But donghae didn’t dare to. Because there is something, make him not to tell her. Donghae than looking at Hankyung, who starting his dance practice

“YA! Donghae-05.GIF!” Eunhyuk snapped him, but donghae didn’t move at all. His eyes really concentrate at Hankyung.

“YA! LEE DONGHAE!” he shouted even louder and pushing donghae hand.
“Omo! Hey what that for?” rubbing his hand.

Eunhyuk sit beside him but donghae back to look at hankyung. Eunhyuk look at Hankyung then donghae repeatedly till.

“Oi, Lee donghae, you cheating on me!” then he pretending crying, Others member who hear it already burst out of laughing. Donghae hear it and his face turn to shock and turn to Eunhyuk.

“Bo? Cheating on you?”
“Oh now you don’t want to admit that we have been together huh” He crossed his arms over the chest.

“Donghae-ssi, how could you do this to him?” Sungmin cut in then hugging eunhyuk.

“Huh? What did I do?”

“You have looking at Hankyung hyung all day! You like hyung right. Just admit it.”
He continues fooling around with sungmin. Saying that he have been dating with donghae since they in training with SM.




“What? (looking at hankyung) I did not. And one more thing, since when we have been dating?”

“Ya!” Eunhyuk hit Donghae shoulder.
“How could you say that?” making his girlish voice.
“But I guess you’ve got a point there. Since when we have been dating?. ” He continues
“If do? Sorry, you are not my type at all.” He ended

“Oh yeah?” Donghae give his sympathetic stare at EunHyuk.

They are joking around till the dancing practice end. Then they go back home.



“Hyung, do you see my note book?” donghae asking Eetuek about his missing notebook.

“Notebook? Nope. Try looking again may be you put somewhere else.”

“I know I put it here last night.”

“then it should be there.” Eeteuk help looking for the notebook.

Then Kangin appear from the kitchen looking at donghae and eeteuk.
“What are you doing? And why you two didn’t get dress yet. We will be late.”
“Looking for my notebook, it missing.” Said donghae.

“Ya, you are right. Let’s go get dressed we will be late. We fine it later ok.”

Donghae didn’t happy with it, after they left the house he didn’t talk to much as usual. Looking at the outside from the van window and keep yearning.

Arrive at photoshot studio, Donghae sitting at the sofa waiting for his turn to take photos. Ryeowook saw donghae sitting at the sofa and looked quite crestfallen, then he walks toward donghae and sit beside him.

“Are you okay?”
“Ya, I think. Why you asked?”
“Well you look unhappy. There must be something wrong happen.”

At first Donghae wasn’t sure to asked Ryeowook about love. But since Ryeowook the one really romantic and know about love the most. So he dare his self to asked Ryeowook.




“If you like that girl, just go straight and get her. If not, you what I mean.”

“I must too?”

“Of cause you silly, you like her. Tell her that you love her and so whatever you wanna said.” Then Ryeowook keep bubbling at donghae.

“I think you were right.”
05.GIF? Really? Right about what again?” Ryeowook blurring..

“Thanks for the help, you the best dongsaeng ever.” He kiss Ryeowook forehead.
“Eeeuuu.. that’s disgusting.”

I must tell her, i can do this. Donghae already made his decision, today, this time he will go face to face with Eunhye and let it our his feeling to her.
He go out side to super junior wardrobe van, looking for Eunhye, coz this time she always there to get the members dress.

When he was there he saw Eunhye picking the dress. He walk toward her, but suddenly he stop walking. His heartbeat getting faster and he feel nervous, because he just heard a man voice talking with Eunhye.

“Eunhye, saranghaeyo.!!”


That word makes him feel so weak and shock. His face is pale, he cant say a word, cant move, he just cant believe what he just heard. Even worst he hear the reply
“ I love you too.”

Donghae tears falls slowly. He try to look who was saying that to her. He really shock when he saw that the person who say ‘I love you’ and kissing eunhye actually is hankyung.

He walks back inside the studio, and go to the toilet. Looking at the mirror, his face wet after washing it. Now he really feels broken heart his tears fall hardly.

That moment he realize. He just a minute to late, if he go early and act fast. May be Eunhye already belong to him. Not hankyung. but now he losing her...
because he a little too late.

-END-

credit to: shin_yun (from bww2 forum)

this is shin_yun´s first story and her massgae for that:

this is my fist Oneshot story..
i'm not good doing drama or long stroy but i love fanfic..
so i wanna share with u all here..
sorry for the grammer...

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i, eesung, love her story! and hope you guys will love it, too^^ and support her in her work!^^

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