Okage Script, Far from done, but so far....

[YamiLover13]

I am far from finishing my writings of the Okage script. I have a lot written I plan to eidit and submit to Gamefaqs as incomplete and then work on it some more. So far I have all of chapter 5-7 written out. (story stuff wise at least.) I have part of 4 as well. I did a bit on chapter 3 but its far from complete. I don't think I will ever do chapter 1 and 2 though. Thats just way to damn much for one person to do.

Anywhere, I have Chapter 6 all done. Its edited and ready to go since its the shortest chapter. I have no idea how long it will take me to do this. I have a lot to do and not enough time to fix all this. Its just so dang much!

Here is chapter 6 for your reading pleasure. (Note that the margins and such dont' look right here since its not in the proper font.)

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*Beginning of Chapter 6*
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Stan: Hmmm. Is this where Beiloune was bragging that he'll make an Evil King to
match me? My irresistible power will attack and overpower him and...

Kisling: Hold on, King Stan. I do feel that an Evil King is awaiting us around
here.

Rosalyn: It's kind of peaceful. I didn't know a village existed in such an out
of the way place...

Big Bull: I don't smell heated combat.

Mysterious Voice: Tis a shame, that a former Evil King can't tell,
evil's far more subtle, sinister smell. *Appears*

Stan: Hmm, Who are you!?

Former Phantom Evil King: Though defeated, I will not be denied, by a hero, a
party of an Evil King and a "not classified".

Stan: You! Didn't I already teach you a lesson?

Rosalyn: You! You want to do it again? I'll take you on, any time!

Former Phantom Evil King: Bide, hero! I have a proposal to make...I am here
neither for king or hero's sake. 'Tis for knowledge of Ari's power I ache.
Beiloune influences all, unabated! But whatever you possess makes Beiloune
frustrated...To the World Library, advance! That I may see. Though I admit,
its location is unbeknownst to me...Upon your arrival, awaits another Evil
King raised by Beiloune. Thy chances are slim, if thy go'est alone... A truce,
then! An alliance! Might I, your consent? Allow me to create a victory,
imminent!

Linda: Umm, that means, in short...

Kisling: You want to join our party?

Former Phantom Evil King: ............

Stan: Um, if that's the reason, it's fine! But, from now on, you'll follow my
orders! Got it?

Former Phantom Evil King: I follow no liege...no trick of the light. I am know
as Epros, by thy side I shall fight.

*Former Evil King "Epros" becomes a friend!*

Linda: I'll remember, Epros! Linda's so happy! Like, I'm totally psyched!

Epros: That name, a bell doth ring...Ah, yes, you are the former Teen Idol Evil
King...

Linda: No way! Don't label me with such a dorky name! If you dare to take me
away from my Stan, just call me Linda and gimme a cuddly and bubbly!

Epros: Wh-what...!? Um...Thy Meaning I fear I cannot chipher. Plus you're too
perky and overly hyper!

Rosalyn: I don't know why but I'm surrounded by former Evil Kings... Are you
okay? Are you really okay, Rosalyn?

Kisling: It's okay, Ms. Rosalyn. Ha ha ha ha ha.

*screen fades out.*
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*What Stan says at this point in the game.*

Stan: My entourage is now full of ex-fake Evil Kings. My broad vision allows
them to be here so that I might make best use of them. Mwa ha ha ha.
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*In Highland Village*

Man Staring at Sky: I cannot wait for night to come. The night dream. In the
ecstatic dream, it is as if all my agonies lift away from my body...

Linda: Oh cool! You can experience that with my song. Wanna listen?

Rosalyn: *something is said too quickly but I think it was a No.*

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*In Highland Village*
A little Weary Guy: I'm so depressed and I have no motivation to do anything.
Recently everyone in my family is like that.

Big Bull: It's due to a lack of fighting and your body not being hot enough!
Why don't you start a fight with me?

Epros: This lack of bliss, what's amiss?
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*IN Highland Village*

Unguarded Lady: Huh? Oh, you are a flatlander? It is just a village but we do
have hotels. I think you should be able to stay. Try them.

Rosalyn: Hmmm, I guess there are hotels somewhere.

Unguarded Lady: I'm surprised that you came here at such a time...
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*In Highland Village*

Skinny Young Man: Oh, flatlanders. It seems that the people of this village are
strangely scared of the night. I am living a healthy cliche existance...so I
sleep though the night. I'm don't know what's going on but everyone seems
haggard. What do you think from an outsider's point of view? About the people
of this village?

Kisling: But you, too, have dark circles under your eyes. Are you eating right?
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*Stay the night at the Highland Village for the first time.*

Stan: Hey...Hey, wake up, slave. Something's strange about this village.
I'll go out to see what's going on. Wake the others up too.

*Walk outside to the top of the village and see a red stain on the cliff.*

Rosalyn: ??...Hey, look at this stain!

Stan: Hmm. It has been a while since I've seen something like this. I was in
that cursed bottle.

Kisling: Why is this suddenly here?

Big Bull: Whoa, this is...It's coated with a dark red fluid.

Linda: Omigod, it's punkey!

Stan: Stop it!

*They all walk off. You walk down some stairs.*

Eerie Voice: Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

*Everyone comes back.*

Epros: Hark! Listen!

Stan: Where did it come from?

*Everyone leaves again, You walk across a bridge and everyone comes back and
stops in front of the house.*

Rosalyn: This building... Did you see this during the day?

Stan: Hmm, If anything should happen, it must be somewhere like this, correct?
Clearly, It is inviting us.

Epros: This strang phantasm even I cannot snare. Mind Beiloune's hand. On guard
, beware...

*Epros walks into the house and then the screen fads out. Everyone else is
inside the house now.*

Stan: A road that opens only during the night seems to be luring us.

Rosalyn: We have to careful. Anything could happen....

Mysterious Voice: Night provides the means for clever ambush...But as I am an
Evil King of honor, I would not surprise you as such.

Epros: A revelation, sir, your appelation?

Mysterious Monster: I guess I would call myself...the "Vampire Evil King"
self-contemptuously from the way I accumulate my power.

Linda: Ooo, someone has angst.

Stan: Bei what's-his-name was claiming he'll generate a great Evil King that'll
replace me... And is that you?

Vampire Evil King: Yes, it is I. I am an evil being who is "classified" as
evil and now...compelled by the power of "classification" to be the supreme
Evil King...and gather my power here.

Epros: Blood in sleep, it flows so sweet...

Rosalyn: What? Blood? What do you mean?

Kisling: Um, the ways of villagers...Probably it is because the Evil King
repeatedly sucks their blood. This village is for feeding.

Vampire Evil King: Correct, "party that threatens the "classified" world
headed by the fearful boy." Villagers are "classified" as "innocent and simple
people, easily controlled by my power". That is their existence. They have no
other function. Alas, there is no way to resist, regardless of whether one is
aware of the truth. What I cannot resist I shall thus embrace! I will become
as evil as I can be...and suck your blood to become the ultimate Evil.

Stan: Those are bold words, blood-sucker. But they are even more foolish. You
address the Great Evil King Stan! I'll suck your power to be mine! That's how
it's going to be! Slave! Squash this lipless parasite!

Epros: Wary be! He has strong magic. A clever means we must devise. Defeat
would be tragic...A direct attack 'twould be fatal to receive. Alas, we'd be
goners 'fore we had time to grieve!

*You battle Vampire Evil King and win*

Vampire Evil King: ............
...Oops, I lost. Oh, well, Whatever. But I didn't skimp.

Rosalyn: What is this? What happend to all that dignity you had a minute ago!?

Vampire Evil King: Cuz...You know, once the "classification" of Evil King is
gone, I don't need to strain myself at all. See, my Evil King power is
slipping away and soon I'll have "former" in front of my name.

Stan: Whoa! Ohhhhh! The power! I'mm regaining my power!
At last!............alas!

Rosalyn: ...Strange. You didn't change. I was going to get you as soon as you
gained your body and left Ari.

Stan: Don't bluff, you toad! But, I don't understand? I thought this Vampire
Evil King is the last fake Evil King who has my power!

Kisling: Well, there are two possibilities in this case...

Mysterious Voice: You don't need to explain, Mr. Scholar. Let me do the
talking.

Stan: Curses, this again!?

Epros: Ah, that voice I do indeed know. 'Tis Beiloune, our long-sought foe.

*Beiloune appears faintly*

Beiloune: You, Shadow Eivl King there. The reason why you cannot regain your
total power despite defeating the Vampire Evil King is... Simply because I
intentionally reduced the total power of the Vampire Evil King... When I
found out that you were on the way here, I came up with something.

Stan: What!

Former Vampire Evil King: I see!

Beiloune: If you want to go back to being the Evil King the only way is to
make me obey... Unmake your maker, little shadow, the only one who made you an
Evil King.

Stan: You, bastard!

Beiloune: Hero, you too. If you want to triumph as a hero, you must defeat me.
Otherwise, I will continuously release new Evil Kings until I completely clear
all of you out.

Rosalyn: Humph! I will go before receiving such a silly invitation! I am
completely irritated by you!

Beiloune: Hm. Good for you. Do you have the same opinion Ari?

*Ari nods his head*

Beiloune: Then, visit the "World Library" I will have you participate in an
interesting circus there. It'll be a really wonderful circus. Ha ha ha ha ha
ha! ............*He dissapears*

*Narrator talks a bit*

Former Vampire Evil King: Huh? The road to the World Library? Oh, I know, I
can show you. I can't go in with you, though. I wasn't invited. You're supposed
to ask for a permit and then a bridge will appear from this village. If you
wanna go, I can bring the bridge. Beiloune said you should come, too, so that
I won't be punished, right?

Stan: Why did you suddenly become so pathetic once you lost? It's worse than
the Chairman Evil King...

Former Vampire Evil King: What?... By the way, who is the Chairman Evil King?
Whatever, I don't know and I don't care.

Stan: What's wrong with you?
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*End Chapter 6*
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[Sweetsuzie]

That really good, I'll probably read the whole thing when your done.

but, hm I would probably be even more impress if you got the rough translation of the dialogue in the Japanease game(I always feel american version's change things allot when it comes to tranlating other than grammar and such.) But I'm odd so what your doing is fine.

[YamiLover13]

Without help, it will take eons for me to finish this.

And I can't do that since I don't speak or read Japanese. Sorry. I just played the game and sat there and typed all this out. Poor Marlene sat there being strangled for 30 min because I had to type out so much and go do the dishes. XD

As for errors...yeah there are some grammer errors from time to time in the game.

Rosalyn: We have to careful.

Phantom Evil King: Aggghhh......! That rhyming is infuriating!! Where'd he learn that? (Not sure if the he is error or not. THis whole line confuses me so.)

There are others too. Usually minor improper usages of to instead of too or I talk this.

[Tainted Rapture]

whoa... why are you making a script of Okage D:

[YamiLover13]

I did all this before I joined the fourm and the first and only time I have played though the game.

At fist I was just going to type out really funny scenes I like and everything Epros said. But then about midpoint of chapter 4 I just said f*ck it, I am going to type it all.

Oh how I regret it......but ah well. Someone has to do it right?

I TOLD you guys I did all this a long time ago. Did you forget? o.O

I do it because I want to. No one else has and I want to contribute to Okage fandom in some way.

[Sweetsuzie]

You know you can just write out the stuff by hand first then type it. For me writing is a lot faster than by hand but that could be just too time consuming.

'Contribute to the fandom" While I think that a nice way of justifing it you really should do cause you want to fandoms are not require fan contributions you know.

[Tainted Rapture]

Typing is WAY more effective in my own opinion lol

[Sweetsuzie]

LOL Well I suxs with the typing I prefer handwriting stuff better.

[Tainted Rapture]

to each his/her own as they say xD

[YamiLover13]

I needed to be slow anyway in order to type it all accuratly. So typing was better. I have a laptop so its ok.

It is also being done just for my benefit. OH and I do remeber some friends of mine that asked me to do this. I joked and said 'Not if you payed me.' Yet...here I am.

[Tainted Rapture]

xD lol make them pay you! lol

[Boogie Knight]

Impressive, good luck. I jotted down the two variations of when you meet Epros in the PosPos Snowfield. I'll type 'em up eventually.

[YamiLover13]

Thanks, and no worries. I already did that too. I told you I wrote EVERYTHING that invovled Epros.

And maybe I will find some kind of time next week to do some of this script editing. I don't know....ugh....its just so damn much. Its the whole margin thing that is making this take forever. D8

[Tainted Rapture]

margin thing o_O

[YamiLover13]

Yeah, see in order for your stuff to be accepted into Gamefaqs it has to be in the right font and be the right amount of letters per line. Otherwise we would have oh so much fun with scrolling horizontally.

[Tainted Rapture]

Can you not just use html to set it in a fixed table? then there'd be no scrolling it would autowrap...



plus I didnt know it was for game faqs lol

[YamiLover13]

No you cannot. All Gamefaqs stuff is in notepad. So you must accomidate it so.

[Kaydryn Tenelmacher]

I tried writing out the script as I went. Got as far as chapter one and started doodling Airy Bunnies all over the place.


If anyone can finish it, they have infinite patience.

[Ruka]

Actully, I tried writing a version of the script based on my memory(and changed it a bit) for my friends and I to actully make a fan-based movie. But I was idiotic enough to lose most of the script, and just recently, I lost the other bit. I think I left it at school, though... But I am amazed that others are writing the real script.

[Kaydryn Tenelmacher]

I would if I got the PS2 in my room next to my computer when I started the replay. Sadly, that may not happen, though.