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KoM.Messiah
Posted: Feb 21 2008, 07:39 PM


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Kush

Genre: Action-Adventure

Setting: Nile region

Plot: 1. An Egyptian boy ventures into an unknown temple belonging to the gods of Egypt. He discovers the amulet of Osiris, King of the Underworld. Years later, after keeping his discovery a secret, he is forced to use it in the heat of battle. Upon using its powers, the gods descend onto Earth bearing the army of _____.

2. A Nubian prince is lured into asking Egyptian gods for strength during battle. The Nubian god, Amun, will not give him the power to kill his fellow man upon request. Ra or Horus sends an army to Earth to aid the begging prince. The army obliterates his enemies, but Ra(or Horus) commands him to kill Amun to keep possession of the army and his life in return. He does this but is then tricked by Ra. He begins a long journey throughout Kush and worlds led by the gods to get revenge. He coincidentally has to use the power of Amun. (similar to God of War)

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Kid
Posted: Feb 21 2008, 09:11 PM


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Kanji we really got to work on making like..a graphic novel or some shit
put your skills to work and make some butta

FUCK nigga this is so ballin
Like I would buy this shit off the street....okay..lemme work with your ideas..ima try to write some shit up

Question though, are plots 1 and 2 different stories and you're deciding on which one?
Or are they the same story with 2 different plots?


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Posted: Feb 21 2008, 10:02 PM


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Iite so I'm lookin thru your deviantart page..which I keep losing..
And I havent seen most of your pics..These characters are sick

Your art style is so unique that it blends african style anatomies with a japanese watercolor style aura/background..
Thirst of a Warrior for example...It's like..The Prince of Egypt meets Mulan for all you stupid muthafuckas.

Rediculous..workin on some ideas..I'll post either tomorrow or sat..


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GAY NINTENDO SHITHEADS SLAPPlNG EACHOTHER LOLLOL
NINTENDO IS A FAGGOT COMPANY AND THIS IS A FAGGOT GAME
HALO IS BETTER CUZ HE HAS GUNS FAGGOT
SHITTY ASS GAME PLAYED BY WHITES
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KoM.Messiah
Posted: Feb 22 2008, 12:34 AM


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Iite that sound str8 wit me man! This stuff be poppin in my head so I just let it linger until I come up with something solid.
The plots are two ideas that I'm workin with atm. I'll either pick one of them or start a new one.


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KoM.Dragon
Posted: Feb 22 2008, 08:54 AM


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damnit shane


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Kid
Posted: Feb 22 2008, 06:23 PM


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Iite..so this is what I have so far...just to set the story up.

I did some researching and I keep changing my mind as to what period I want to draw from. This is an extremely difficult time to write about....I'll figure it out as a write it.

Amun chief deity of the Kush and god of life can fight an otherwordly battle against Aten-Ra-Horus (or all 3 spereately/just Aten) who is suppressing his people (Kushites or people of Nubian region in general).

The boy is chosen by Amun to be his vessel and gives him the ___ (object) that allows him to call upon Amun's power down into an earthly form.

I haven't really fleshed this out yet since this is an extremely difficult part of history to go on about without mixing a lot of gods and deities that have no business being with each other. Also, a really interesting this is that Tutankhamen was the next Pharaoh after the fall of Aten at 9-10 years old. However, Tut wasn't Kush and didn't rule Kush..so I'm searching through Kush pharaohs that could fit the bill.

Alara is a possible candidate.
Hmm... (As Uncle) Mooooreee researchh!!! Toru!! Bring me my book!

K so this is getting better and better..
Pharaoh Amenhotep IV, better known under the name he adopted, Akhenaten, apparently started Atenism which is the worship of the local sun deity Aten. It started as just Aten being raised to the status of Supreme Deity. However, after few years, he begins to grow the religion, making Aten a High God on the level with or above Pharaohs. Soon, Aten is not just a Supreme God (god over other gods) but the ONLY god. Amun's temples were then ordered to be defaced/destroyed. The Pharaoh became erratic and began to ignore the problems of his kingdom, plague, threats, warring..etc..etc..

It's also pretty shady that his brother, Thutmose was killed extremely late in their father's lifetime, and Amenhotep IV inherited the throne.

He was also removed from official Egyptian records of Pharaohs...Hell yeah...This is my shit. i got it..I'll write it now xD
The thing about it is..the Kush Kingdom started AFTER these historical events. Egypt had expanded down into Nubia, and used it as its gold capital. But as Egypt was thrown into chaos by a number of pharaohs (Ramses 5-10 or something) and the Nubians overthrew the government controlling them..But it wasn't until a few centuries later that they were actually unifed under the name Kush.


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GAY NINTENDO SHITHEADS SLAPPlNG EACHOTHER LOLLOL
NINTENDO IS A FAGGOT COMPANY AND THIS IS A FAGGOT GAME
HALO IS BETTER CUZ HE HAS GUNS FAGGOT
SHITTY ASS GAME PLAYED BY WHITES
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Kid
Posted: Feb 22 2008, 07:03 PM


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FUCKING ipbfree deleted my forum...this is nonsense..I'm gonna make another one..I need a place to post where i can just look at the shit.

http://manaarts.invisionplus.net/
Come there to read up on what Im brainstorming..I'll post final results here..


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GAY NINTENDO SHITHEADS SLAPPlNG EACHOTHER LOLLOL
NINTENDO IS A FAGGOT COMPANY AND THIS IS A FAGGOT GAME
HALO IS BETTER CUZ HE HAS GUNS FAGGOT
SHITTY ASS GAME PLAYED BY WHITES
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KoM.Messiah
Posted: Feb 22 2008, 07:22 PM


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Oh shizzle this is about to be a big break. All the time periods would make into solid plots but it's hard choosin one. I'll be on the forum u posted.


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Kid
Posted: Feb 22 2008, 08:31 PM


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Iite i summarized them up so check em out guyzzz


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GAY NINTENDO SHITHEADS SLAPPlNG EACHOTHER LOLLOL
NINTENDO IS A FAGGOT COMPANY AND THIS IS A FAGGOT GAME
HALO IS BETTER CUZ HE HAS GUNS FAGGOT
SHITTY ASS GAME PLAYED BY WHITES
~Nintendosucks232
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KoM.Messiah
Posted: Feb 22 2008, 10:06 PM


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drawn by myself
His gets a black headdress during the story maybe.
YAll treasure this. This is exclusive KoM. The next big console game b4 yo very eyes!


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Kid
Posted: Feb 23 2008, 09:02 AM


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GAY NINTENDO SHITHEADS SLAPPlNG EACHOTHER LOLLOL
NINTENDO IS A FAGGOT COMPANY AND THIS IS A FAGGOT GAME
HALO IS BETTER CUZ HE HAS GUNS FAGGOT
SHITTY ASS GAME PLAYED BY WHITES
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Kid
Posted: Feb 23 2008, 09:32 AM


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Here's some pics from Timeine 1
Nefertiti
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs16/f/2007/130...aszarkowski.jpg
http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs13/f/2007/022...by_mahmoudz.jpg
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs15/i/2007/059...y_Haliestra.jpg
http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs6/i/2005/050/...ntesInferno.jpg

Akenhaten
http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs20/i/2007/274..._by_xenite1.jpg
http://fc03.deviantart.com/fs20/f/2007/250...by_Netjeret.jpg
http://touregypt.net/featurestories/akhenaten.jpg
http://www.crystalinks.com/akhenatenhat.jpg

Amenhotep III
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/comm...menhotepIII.jpg
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/comm..._louvre_182.jpg
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/t...gyptarchive.JPG

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/comm...siMemnon.01.jpg
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Egypt.C...siMemnon.02.jpg
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Temple_...ep%2C_Luxor.jpg
Amun
http://www.farhorizon.com/Africa/eqypt_ima...d_pillar_lg.jpg


Nubian Landmarks of the 25th Dynasty
http://www.ask-aladdin.com/images/philai034.jpg
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/a...a_pyramids1.JPG (Meroe Pyramids)
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/1/19/Nub2.jpg
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/comm...ramids_2001.JPG
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/c/c7/Kermacity.jpg (Kerma City Palace Grounds)

Temple of Amada
http://www.ask-aladdin.com/amada.htm
http://users.skynet.be/igobau/egypt/eg_68.jpg
http://www.buten.net/max/Egypt/10LNasser/4229.JPG

http://www.ask-aladdin.com/nubia/temple_of_dekka.htm
http://www.ask-aladdin.com/nubia/temple_of_kalabsha.htm


I'll update as I go


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GAY NINTENDO SHITHEADS SLAPPlNG EACHOTHER LOLLOL
NINTENDO IS A FAGGOT COMPANY AND THIS IS A FAGGOT GAME
HALO IS BETTER CUZ HE HAS GUNS FAGGOT
SHITTY ASS GAME PLAYED BY WHITES
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KoM.Messiah
Posted: Feb 23 2008, 06:10 PM


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Nice picture drop

I'm guessing the walls were kinda high at the Nubian cities. The sand covers a lot so it's hard to tell what was what.


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Posted: Feb 23 2008, 08:15 PM


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Yeah. alot of the temples are decadent now too. But back when they were built, they were pretty immense. I mean, these were places that Romans marveled at, so we can really take liberties here and make them unrealistically large/grand.

Alright..so what I'm gonna work on is finding some information on how temples were built, what they looked like, layouts, etc..

You should probably find some info on what Egyptians wore.

Note on info to gather:
-Slaves
-Customs
-Workers (Farmers, Blacksmiths, Royal Servants)
-Common People
-Food
-Medicine


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Posted: Feb 23 2008, 08:54 PM


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Slavery

Some Egyptians were sold into slavery because of debts or sold themselves to escape poverty. As indentured slaves they did not lose all their civil rights; and sometimes the economic security they gained through their new status might seem to be worth giving up some freedoms for.
A remnant of these customs is seen in the demotic contracts concerning security, where grasping the hand refers to the warrantor's hand being held by the creditor symbolizing the debtor giving the creditor power over his person. Debt slavery was abolished in the Late Dynastic Period.

It has been proposed that the vizier had the right to impose perpetual forced labour on a convicted criminal, which would put him in a position of virtual slavery.

While there had been slaves in Egypt since the beginning of its history, their numbers greatly increased during the New Kingdom, when the pharaohs were committed to a policy of foreign involvement and conquests in Nubia, Canaan and Syria brought in many prisoners of war, seqer-ankh, who were enslaved, at times branded with the sign ki

Prisoners of War

I gave to them captains of archers, and chief men of the tribes, branded and made into slaves, impressed with my name; their wives and their children were made likewise.
Egyptians took Nubian archers and put them in their military after defeating Nubia

The least fortunate captives were sent to work as slaves in the dreadful gold and copper mines of Nubia and Sinai, where, according to the Greeks, water was rationed and men died in great numbers from exhaustion and dehydration in the desert heat. On the other hand not all the prisoners were enslaved: some were absorbed into the army, where Sherden for instance constituted a large part of the bodyguard of Ramses II.
Servant grinding corn Many slaves laboured on the estates of the pharaohs, the nobility and the priests. Seti I announced on the Wadi Halfa stela how he had endowed Min-Amen's temple at Buhen, so that his storehouse was filled with male and female slaves from the captivity of his majesty, L.P.H. Ramses III is said to have given 113,000 to the temples during the course of his reign.

They captured slaves from the lands all around their empire so they would have been a little diverse.
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