maratek, from this world and beyond

[maratek]

maratek was once the leader of the greatest undead army in landscape raiding and pillageing all that stood in his way as he was near the capital erythorn the imperial army was outside the gates ready to meet him. the battle was furius and the imperials were losing whole companys of men to marateks might till maratek senseing victory sounded the charge striaght through the imperial lines were he met the emporer in just combat the battle was maddening the speed and finess of both fighters was amazing but the emporer was slowly gaining ground over his openent after a flurry that left maratek disarmed the emporer had declared victory.
seeing this marateks army losing whatever dark spells holdin them together crumbled. the imperials had won the day but at what cost.
being dragged from the battle field maratek was caged and put in the dungeons of erythorn for nobles with enugh money to see his armor stripped and burned all his items destroyed he was a broken vlaar on the 16th day of his incarceration the emporoer came to him with a proposil

"you were a great warrior and one day if this meeting goes well you will be again. i have had my mages look over you and you are healthy tell me why did you start your campaign" asked the emporer

maratek replied "i dont know" and then it hit him when did it all begin he cant remember a thing before the battle so what happenend in his life.

"so i guess you dont know well we have no record of you so here is the proposal you can stay here and rot or you can venture out into landscape to try and find your past i will arm you and declare you exiled for the time being but you will be watched so no more dark crusades and if any of my subjects need help you will assist them you leave tomorrow night be ready"

as the emporer leaves maratek asks him a question that he knew was coming but didnt want to answer "why are you doing this surly every citezen in this country wants to see me dead"

"they do but i made a promise once that i would save you"

"who made you make this promise" asks maratek

the emporer replies reluctantly "your brother before he left"

to be continued.........

[maratek]

unlucky not the update wat do you think of my story and wat do you think should happen next mail me with thoughts plz and if you were wondering wat i look like here is the unreformed maratek

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[maratek]

the next mornin maratek is released from his cell and is told to report to the quarter master as he walks down the corridor he gets a lot of strange looks from the guards but no stops

BANG BANG

maratek enters an extremely cramped room full of all kinds of arms and armor weapons lay every where

"hello anyone there" says maratek

"over here" says the quarter master "i never thought i would see you i already know why you are here the emporer has told me to kit you out for the field but dont think i like it" says the quarter master

"chose anything in this room not that it is any good that is we keep the good armor and weapons next door he he"

maratek strolls around looking for a scrap of decent equipment "this is all junk"
he says then he spots some thing

"wats that he asks "

"oh that sword has been here for years never been used but never will its all rusty" says the quarter master

maratek bends down and picks it up

"you know there is a strange aura about this sword" it has hidden power

BOOOOOOOOM

as maratek swings it a crash of thunder hits him the sword now released from his grip flouts about a foot from the ground and bellows in a comanding voice

"Who dares summon me"

maratek recovering from the blast picks himself up and answers me

the sword now silver edged turns and faces point at maratek

"you wish to use my power do you consider yourself worthy and how did you summon me i have been asleep since ragnos weilded me"

"i dont know you just struck me with a bolt though i did sense something about you thats why i picked you up wat are you"

"i am marthos the deamon slayer i was forged in the great war and now i will serve you cast off that lump of slag you call armor and prepare your self for a new title"

at that another bolt hits maratek sending his armor flaying in all directions
and as quickly as it hit it leaves maratek slowly looks at himself and finds he is wearing a whole new suit of plate mail but it is white the couler of good

"what have you done to me" yells maratek

"relived the darkness in your heart and transformed it into yuor new self"

"wat am i"

the sword booms his voice of all walls "THE LAST REMAINIG PALADIN YOU ARE NOW A DICIPLE OF RAGNOS AND YOU WILL FIND YOUR TRUE PAST now sheth me i want to rest and let us be gone from this place"

at that maratek picks up his pack fills it with some supplies and leaves the quarter masters rooms for the big wide world











thx for reading i will add more as marateks story progresses i now have a image for maratek the paladin you got any questions about wat i have writtan ask and i will answer and yes you have read it maratek is now a good guy

thx for reading

Maratek

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[Ace in the hole]

COOLL!

[maratek]

thx ace much apreciated the problem is i could go on all day but i need some ideas plz post with thoughts thx

maratek

[chriz]

very cool!lol!

[Ace in the hole]

i got an idea man try when you first met chriz

[chriz]

yeah add that

[maratek]

after being shunted out of the castle by the guards maratek heads into erythorn looking for work

3 months l8r

after doing a few jobs earning a bit of cash he decides one night to head to the local taven

"a i am bored of this" he mutters to himself

as the words leave his lips he relises the world around him slows down

"wat now martos" says maratek

"we need to leave i sense something in the west is stiring and we need to be there this is your new command leave erthorn by the third moon month and wait near the stream"

"why wat good will come of it"

"you will meet someone"

"k"

at that the world around him returns to normal

he leaves the tavern heads to his quarters and prepares for the journey

after a few days of travel he gets to the stream as he aprouches a ford in the river he spots a body he heads over to see wats hapenend

when he gets there he find an unconcios man laying by the stream after casting varios healing spells he sets up camp ready for the man to wake up

[chriz]

and more....???!!!

[maratek]

well it is a long story and i am considerung wat to write next besides i have a new story to write