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| Eaglesong |
Posted: Dec 24 2007, 02:02 AM
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![]() Newbie Group: Validating Posts: 1 Member No.: 18 Joined: 24-December 07 |
Name:Eaglesong
Age:4 Gender:Male Breed:Gray wolf Physical Description (*2 paragraph min):Eaglesong is a large black wolf with a pure white chest and underbelly.He is not as fast as other wolves. The chest is deep and broad. He had a strong jaw but a bit shorter. His feet are large but silent. Eagle has a long body and is quite tall and muscular built. Personality (*):Eaglesong is a friendly wolf. He cares alot about his family and pack.He has a short temper and will attack when tempered with.eaglesong is a gentle giant. He is a self-confident, watchful, and patient dog who is gentle-natured to wards his family. Intelligent and dignified.He is gentle but he can fight he willing Brief History (*):After their mother pass away. Eaglesong and siblings lived with their father ulfang.Ulfang was a horrible wolf evil wolves would say and he wanted EagleSong to be the same.After i while eaglesong fought his father and was lefted with a horrible scar on his face.Months went on he had become a skillful hunter.He had become very confident after living as a lone wolf for so long. Relatives:b]Mother (dead) Mai (sister) Zak(brother) Ulfang(father) [b]In the event that your account becomes deleted due to inactivity would you be opposed to this character being put up for adoption for another member to play? Yes Your email address Fenris_@hotmail.com Referred by:Songdog |
| Xenos |
Posted: Dec 24 2007, 04:11 AM
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Advanced Member Group: Loner Admin Posts: 61 Member No.: 2 Joined: 13-June 07 |
Well this is nice and all...but you need to make everything 2 paragraphs minimum...so please fix that, and then you will be accepted.
Also black wolves are rare, so we have a problem with that, please find a way to edit your character, or use a different to oblige to our rules. Also please correct your spelling, grammar and puncutation please. I had trouble reading what you had to say, even though there was little. Thank you, Xenos -------------------- ![]() Xenos||female//3 springs\\ |
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