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[arbiter]

Skills

Aura Manipulation(can turn his aura into a shield, etc.), Corruption Seal(if he can get close enough to stab enemy in heart w/ blade, it will corrupt them to his side)

Weapons

Blade of Damnation(Magic; allows him to perform Corruption Seal technique)

Equipment

None

General Info

Name:Scortex
Gender:Male
Age:Unknown(about 1000)
Race:Unknown
Height:6'5"
Weight:230 pounds

Specific Info

Relations:None living

Personality:Icy, bloodthirsty
Appearance:(if Kit or Raro get this, it was that guy I was working on that tried to kill Cleoy) However, if anyone else gets this, Scortex is a tall, sinewy-looking figure that is draped in a ragged cloak with a hood. Of course, this cloak is black.
The face underneath his hood is said to be that of Death itself, but for the time being, all you can see of him is his eyes, glowing red. His arms and legs are armored in dark steel, giving them a more muscular appearance. His sword is sheathed on the back of his waist, to allow for mobility.

Strengths:If there is any darkness around, he can draw from its energy and is nearly invincible.
Weaknesses:If exposed to pure light (for example, Celestial energy), he will be rendered defenseless.

Statistics

Ability: Cloak (can only be performed in an area with shadows) What he does is renders himself completely invisible and undetectable

Health:4
Attack:3
Stamina:4
Magic:3
Defense:4
Speed:1
Scout:1

Scrolls

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Story Info

History: Rumor has it that thousands of years ago, Scortex was an average person, with a wife and children. However, sometime during his natural lifespan, his family was brutally murdered by a gang of bandits. Enraged, he mercilessly slaughtered the bandits. Fascinated by the thrill of murder, he couldn't stop and eventually eviscerated his entire village, women and children included. Hideousley corrupted by these terrible deeds, Scortex has been sleeping in a cave that had a Dark Spring in it. Over thousands of years, he has been absorbing the spring's energy and has awoken. He now turns his desire for bloodshed to the peaceful shores of Trilland...

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[Sapphire_Flame]

Well, the personality seemed a little... basic. 2 words isn't exactly extensive. Everything else is fine, though. The history seemed just a bit odd. Maybe if you went into more detail it would seem less jumpy. You don't technically have to do that part, though. It's not quite ready for approval, so I'd work on the personality a little more.

[Raro]

yeah, additional what sapphire said. And the weapon is too strong for a beginner's weapon. When you reach level two, you get a better/ upgrade of your weapon. Then you can add on the effects.

And, as for the soul thing, again he's still only level one, so maybe it just drains the opponents energy (your second skill)

The [personality needs some working on and the history is jumpy at first, but the ending is good.