The First

[Skury]

Tatooine

It was a sweltering hot day on Tatooine, when Jack Zure was browsing around an old junkyard. he came across a boy, Salek Daath, and examined him with the force. His probing soon discovered the boys connectivity to the force. Upon finding this Jack too the boy to the gas planet Bespin. Later that day, he held a class training two initiates, Thon Rennd and Salek.

The Beginning
Commander Phex Vuul stands on the bridge of a Sith ship with the Sith'ari Darth Sanctum. They are discussing plans for the coming raid. As they enter Bespins atmosphere the ship enters into a flurry of motion, the Commander donning his helmet and checking his gear again. a few seconds later Sanctum barks a few orders and the ships lasers fire, destroying the doors of the temple. as they land, a squad of elite Sith soldiers and Warriors jump out of the hangar. Phex and Sanctum follow quickly behind them.

They rush into the Temple, catching the jedi by suprise. The Sith soldiers open fire, leaving scorchmarks on the wall and felling Jedi. in that instant a few jedi manage to block the shots and engage the sith, but the Warriors stop them. A fierce saber battle begins but Lord Sanctum ends it with a massive blast of lightning from his hand. The procede to the next hall meeting stiff resistance, but again Lord Sanctum pulls them on.

Phex takes the squad an 3 Sith Warriors down an elevator while Sanctum searches the temple with the rest. As they reach the bottom, they see many ways to go. They go room to room, ut many are empty.

Eventualy they come across a room with three Jedi, Jack Zure, Thon Rennd, and Salek Daath. As they entire the room 4 jedi drop down from behind, slaying many of the soldiers. All of the jedi perish, but the commander is left alone, to face a Jedi Knight.

The Battle

So it began, a epic stand-off, A skilled Sith Commander versus a Jedi Knight. They stared eahcother down. Phex leaps into action firing off a EMP grenade from his Repeater. Jack is stunned but quickly parries incoming bolts from Phex's repeater. They step out into the hall, every time jack gets near, Phex ignites his flamthrower sending Jack back. The fight appears to be equal though, Either Phex or Jack is backpeddling until Phex's repeater runs out of ammunition. Phex drops the weapon and takes a Golan-Arms Flechette from his back. the shrapnel is to spread out to dodge and quickly Wounds jack, the pain sending him into unconsciousness. Phex takes the wounded Jedi to Lord Sanctum, who had slain all but a Jedi Initiate.

The Betrayal

Jack soon awoke, staring into the cold dark eyes of Lord Sanctum. Sanctum whispered a dark encantation slowly gaining control of Jack's mind. Sanctum slowly broke jack down, Jack slowly became darker, his resistance was futile against Sanctum's dark energies. Jack rose again, consumed by the darkside. he then heard Thon calling out to him int the force and told Lord Sanctum. Sanctum sent the Commadner to the temple gates where Jack called Thon to him. Before Thon knew what happened he was unconcious, stunned by Phex. Jack carried Thon back to th ship, and layed him next to Salek.

The End

Jack slowly looks around, Sanctum seemed delighted. jack watched as Sanctums tone suddenly changed and he asked Phex a question. Phex just pointed at Jack, who was swiftly grabbed and carried to the Main Hall of the temple. There Phex explained to jack what wass about to happen. He was to be executed for his weakness, for his lack of honor, and the ease at which he fell. The sith couldn't use him, he was to risky. Phex raised up his wrist, and a jet of flame flew out from it. Suddenly jack was writhing on the ground screaming in pain. his skin blistered and boiled. the flames burning him to the bone. Sanctum watched as Jack squirmed, then exstinguished the flames. He loomed over jacks burnt body, watching jack breath slow ragged breaths. Sanctum moved his into into the shape of a shovel and lunged downwards. Jack's eyes widened then glazed over as Sanctum lifted his still beating heat into the air.

So ended Jack Zure, Jedi knight, Traitor to the Jedi Order.

[joey]

indeed. pala was right when he said that made his death epic :S

[Kroenen]

If your the first to get permad, you gotta have a sweet way of getting permad. Sakuri, you are a good rper glad it didnt come between us.