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Prologue Discussion| Nex Terren |
Posted: Oct 28 2004, 10:57 PM
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 The Vanos of Earth  Group: Vanos Posts: 924 Member No.: 8 Joined: 9-August 04  |
Two things;
First of all- Wow. That. Is. Good. You HAVE to become a writer when you grow up. Great job. Wow. <!--emo&:o--><img src='http://209.85.12.234/html/emoticons/ohmy.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='ohmy.gif' /><!--endemo--> ...And I'm not just saying this. Great job. Second of all- "But again if the world was without any evil, hatred and suffering, we wouldnt have the opportunity to show love, courage, tolerance, compassion and kindness." Ummmmm... I'm sorry- but this is opposite of every grain of my being... Over all- a spectactical (is that a word? I don't think so... oh well!) job! Keep it up! --------------------  |
  
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| Esy |
Posted: Oct 30 2004, 09:28 AM
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 Vanos of Ice Group: Vanos Posts: 1044 Member No.: 1 Joined: 14-May 04 |
Terr - Thanksies! I'm so happy you like it that much! I was afraid people won't like it cause it's a bit philosophical...
About that sentence you pointed out: I think I haven't expressed myself correctly. It should be like this: "But again if the world was without any NATURAL evil and suffering, we would never be taught to love, courage, tolerance, compassion and kindness. Actually we would, but without any opposites to nobility of our hearts, would we know that good is actually good? It may sound confusingly but we need that natural evil cause it makes us appreciate love and kindness more..." Do you understand a bit better what I tried to say with that sentence? I forgot to write natural in that sentence and that changed the whole contest me thinks! *grins* Anyway I hope you see my point of view better now when I fixed that! *huggles Nexy* Should I go and fix it in the Prologue aswell? -------------------- "I don't suffer from insanity but enjoy every minute of it."
Έ.'΄(Έ.'΄**`'.Έ)΄'.Έ *(¨`.΄¨)* `.Έ.΄ .* *. .* *. |
  
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| Nex Terren |
Posted: Oct 31 2004, 11:04 PM
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The Vanos of Earth Group: Vanos Posts: 924 Member No.: 8 Joined: 9-August 04 |
How does that change it, I know it does, but I just can't think of how...
Also, philosophy is good- as long as you don't go on, and on, and on, and on... Or that you don't get so deep that people loose you... -------------------- |
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| Firea |
Posted: Nov 1 2004, 04:28 AM
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 Vanos of Fire Group: Vanos Posts: 802 Member No.: 5 Joined: 4-August 04 |
I love the new prologue Es, bloody awesome. And as Nex said, philosophy is good in small amounts and you have perfected the amount right there.
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| Esy |
Posted: Nov 2 2004, 08:18 PM
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Vanos of Ice Group: Vanos Posts: 1044 Member No.: 1 Joined: 14-May 04 |
Yeah, I know what you mean! A lot of philosophy causes headaches! *grins* I don't mean to go to deep with the philosophy questions and stuff...
Firea - Thanksies! i'm glad you like it! *huggles* -------------------- "I don't suffer from insanity but enjoy every minute of it."
Έ.'΄(Έ.'΄**`'.Έ)΄'.Έ *(¨`.΄¨)* `.Έ.΄ .* *. .* *. |
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| bobthesilverdonkey |
Posted: Dec 16 2004, 09:51 PM
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 Moderator  Group: Moderator Posts: 36 Member No.: 23 Joined: 16-December 04 |
>spectactical (is that a word?
well it darn well should be  -------------------- |
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| Esy |
Posted: Jan 26 2005, 03:42 PM
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Vanos of Ice Group: Vanos Posts: 1044 Member No.: 1 Joined: 14-May 04 |
Thanksies Bob!
 -------------------- "I don't suffer from insanity but enjoy every minute of it."
Έ.'΄(Έ.'΄**`'.Έ)΄'.Έ *(¨`.΄¨)* `.Έ.΄ .* *. .* *. |
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| Blua |
Posted: Apr 21 2005, 11:11 AM
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 Vanos of Water Group: Vanos Posts: 232 Member No.: 12 Joined: 11-October 04 |
This is the second time I've read the prologue, and I must say...LOVELY!!!
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| Esy |
Posted: Apr 22 2005, 08:47 AM
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Vanos of Ice Group: Vanos Posts: 1044 Member No.: 1 Joined: 14-May 04 |
Thanksies Blu! I'll post the first chapter very soon, hopefully!
 -------------------- "I don't suffer from insanity but enjoy every minute of it."
Έ.'΄(Έ.'΄**`'.Έ)΄'.Έ *(¨`.΄¨)* `.Έ.΄ .* *. .* *. |
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| turquoise_draka_15 |
Posted: May 20 2005, 09:25 PM
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Youth  Group: Members Posts: 3 Member No.: 32 Joined: 7-April 05 |
There is no cure for birth and death, save to enjoy the interval.
This is very true. I read the prologue and It was Fantastic! -------------------- I tried to kill the pain
But only brought more I lay dying And I'm pouring crimson regret and betrayal I'm dying praying bleeding and screaming Am I too lost to be saved Am I too lost ~Evanescence: Fallen: Tourniquet |
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