Same Time, Next Year

The moment our eyes met,
I've fallen in love, I bet.
I hope I'm not sick,
Thinking my mind was tricked.

Though she's in front of me,
You're the only one I can see.
The lights flickered as you blink,
Making my little heart sink.

I knew loving you was wrong,
Then I guess I don't want to be right.
I know, you're in the arms of another,
But I still want you by my side.

I hope we meet same time, next year,
Coz this moment for me is dear.
And when the right time is here,
I have something to say for you to hear.

I hope you'll blush,
Coz I won't rush.
Now, I shall tell,
My secret that fell.

I LOVE YOU

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Note, this is a poem. =3 Feel free to give suggestions/comment, thank you.

oooo I like this one too! You are very good at poetry Duchess! :D I know Hira writes some poetry tooo *can't remember where I saw it* you guys should chat about it! ^^

Oh, that's in the Writer's Unite thread, just saw it. ^^

And thank you.

Note that is a guy's POV, not a girl okay? Lol XD

Nice Poetry :D
Especially with the guy & girls POV's =]

Thank you. ^__^
Oh, that's a guy's POV, not the girl's. :]

Awww, I really like this poem :D You are really awesome at writing poems!!! :D
I don't think there's any suggestions I can make, since it's sounds great just as it is :P
Keep up the awesome work :) B)

Ah, thank you. ^___^

I feel really happy with your comment. =3
I'll post some of my works too. ^___^