Dragonball AR

great!

Here I made you a logo because no offence but the One you have now pretty much Sucks.

Thanks VeggieXD, I like the one now, but i like this one better. Thanks!

Power Levels in Final Battle

Gohan MSSj2 - 1, 500, 000, 000
Gotenks FSSj4 - 2, 500, 000, 000
Cooler 5th Form - 1, 750, 000, 000
Goku SSj4 - 2, 750, 000, 000
Vegeta SSj4 - 2, 725, 000, 000
Cooler 6th Form - 3, 250, 000, 000
Gora SSj3 - 1, 250,000,000
Gora SSj4 - 4, 000, 000, 000

very nice as i said before great storyline
if you would like i give you authorization to use my character Gota

Thanks Ashter! and I'm glad everyone enjoyed it!

ok easy enough! i have a little AR special in mind. But i need Rage's character so i have to ask him.

Ashter could i make Gota a little older?


Broly Saga

Chapter XIII - A Dark Legend

It has been three years since Cooler was defeated. Gora is now dating a girl named Leeta, and a letter arrives for the family. Goku opened it and read it, " ' Dear everyone, I'm coming home! Se you soon. Rage.' "
"Rage is coming home!?" Chi-Chi grabbed the letter and read it over. Gora turned to Goten and asked, "Who's Rage?"
"He is your uncle." There was a loud crash outside and everyone ran outside. It seemed to look like a Saiyan Space Pod, that was sinking in the lake. The pilot jumped out and landed on the land.

"Okay, that's it for today." Gohan dismissed his class and began to pack up his stuff. He was about to live when he saw a bright green light and felt the building shake. "What was that?" He dropped his bag and took off his tie. He ran outside and felt an strange energy. He flew towards it, and powered up into his Mystic form. A green energy ball came flying at him, with much effort he sent it into the sky. "Man, that took a lot of energy." Gohan transformed into MSSj and flew to the source.

The cause of the blasts stood on the mountain south of the city. "KAKAROT!!" He screamed and powered up, he was Saiyan. "Where are you?!" He fired a third blast at the city, hoping to drive out his mortal enemy.

Nice!^_^ and
how much older?

Heh nice start, Rage been on a trip to train again eh?

Maybe like so he is in his 20s, Ashter


and yes Rage was gone again.

Training or scattering through Dimenions?

you'll see


Chapter XIV - The Legendary Super Saiyan/Brotherly Fusion

Gohan landed on the mountain and saw that cause. "Broly!?"
"Where is Kakarot!" Broly charged at Gohan and grabbed his head. He threw Gohan over the cliff and fired another green blast. Gohan deflected it and charged at Broly, they both began to throw a flurry of punches and kicks. Gohan got knocked away and stomped on. "You're pathetic! I haven't even transformed yet!" He picked Gohan up and threw him upwards, he flipped around and kicked at him. He leg was caught by someone else. "Geez, Gohan." He threw Broly away, "What is that form?" Rage was floating there, smiling at his younger brother. "Rage!" They both landed on the ground. "This is Mystic Super Saiyan."
"Really? That's cool." The brothers looked at Broly, who transformed into a False Super Saiyan. He charged at them, he kicked Rage in the stomach and Gohan in the head. Both stumbled back, and Rage transformed. "You're not Kakarot either!!" Broly threw ten blasts at them and jumped into the sky. Rage deflected them and said, "Gohan, do you know the fusion dance?"

The pilot of the pod looked similar to Goku, except his hair was more upward and was wearing a blue gi, with a green shirt underneath. He was carrying a sword on his back. "Kakarot? Is that you?" He walked closer, but that is when Mimi and the kids, Kakarot and Selena showed up. "Mimi!" Videl ran toward her sister in law and hugged her.
"Videl!" She looked at Gora, then at Goku. "Why are there two Goku's?" The kids ran toward there Grandpa and hugged him. They looked at Gora, then at Goku. "This is different..." Kakarot backed away toward Mimi and Videl. Selena kept looking at Gora. "Umm...this is awkward." Gora turned towards Goten and asked, "Who are they?"
"They are you're...um...your uncle's kids. That's the best answer you'll get." He ran up to Mimi and the kids. The pilot waved at them, "Hey,I'm still here."

Gohan looked at Rage, "I sorta know it."
"Kay, good."
"Where did you go anyway?"
"Went back to Mimi's dimension for a while." He moved his arms into postion. Gohan fallowed. Broly dropped down towards them, but was too late. "Fu-Sion-HA!!" The brothers fused into a new warrior, Rahan. His hair had silver and gold in it, as well as his tail. "Cool, Half Mystic, Half Saiyan!" He jumped at Broly.

Me thinks youve been readin mah story on fanfiction.net

Nice continuement, kinda speedy but its ok with me

then okay