DragonBall GU, My upcoming fan manga

[Ratchetcomand]

Dragonball GU is upcoming comic that i have been planing out for a while and i think i have it got into works now. Dragon Ball GU stands for "Guyver Units". It basically takes place in another universe where the Sayains and Freeza exist in the Guyver universe. I have not begin to write it but i have a good idea about the plot. This comic has been on my mind most of the time then my AF fan fiction. I have rough drafts for the first 3 sagas!

Sorry for some of the typos, i'm was too sleepy to check them. I will do it in the morning.


Note: For those of you who don't know about the series then check out these links.

http://www.neoguyver.com/

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bio_Booster_Armor_Guyver

Background info: I'm a huge fan of the Guyver and i love it more then Dragon Ball/Z/GT. One day when i was watching the Out of Control OVA, i got the idea if the Sayains live in the same universe as the Guyver series and that Cronos was not the most powerfull evil force in the universe after all (This where Freeza comes along). The Guyver is pretty much about test type Zoanoid escapes from the Chronos Corporation with three Guyver Units. Chronos soldiers attempt to recover the units from the test type, but are thwarted when the test type detonates a bomb that he has concealed in his bag. The Guyver Units are scattered in the blast. Two young high school students, Sho Fukamachi and Tetsurô Segawa stumble across a lost Guyver Unit known as "Unit I." The second is retrieved by Chronos and merges with Oswald A. Lisker to become the second Guyver later on. The final unit falls into the hands of Agito Makishima, who merges with it at an unspecified time. Shô accidentally activates the unit which then painfully merges with him. Over time, Sho learns more about the Guyver and its abilities. The Guyver is virtually invulnerable with its only weak point being the Control Metal. With this part intact, it can rebuild the host from the data stored within. If this part is damaged, however, the host is eaten alive by the unit and perishes. This is disconcerting, and Shô starts to question whether he will ever be free from the Guyver. The Guyver series was a huge hit back in 1984 and it still popular today in Japan. The series had one OVA and a 12 episode mini series in 1988 and a anime that was 25 episodes long in 2006 - 2007.

You may want to check the series out on Youtube here at http://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=A7ECC6715A432C5F

Now i need some people to help me out on my series. I'm already workin on the front cover and i should have it done by Sunday. Here is the list of things i need (see at the bottom).

* People to color and shade

* Character designers

* Editors (People who can proff read the screenplay)

* Writers

* People who know about the Guyver series or Fans of the series

* A person can do the story boards

Staff of the project (So far):

* Ratchetcomand/Miki Phippi (Author)


If anyone who wants to join then please post. I really want to work on my first fan made comic and i love the help from you guys. I'm already geting some help from other sites. If your going to help out then E-mail me at Ratchetcomand@yahoo.com so we can talk and see your work is appectble enough to work with. I will also be helping out with some of the drawing as well .

Now i hope you guys have enough time and would love to be part of my comic. I need all the work i need .

Thanks and have a good night.

[Ratchetcomand]

Anyone going to help me out ? Sorry for the double post.

[Ratchetcomand]

Sorry for the 3rd post but i just have been working on some conpect art and the plot outline. I would want to join part of the project then please comment.

ABOUT THE STORY: I will post the fanfic soon. There will be 6 Guyver units in DBGU. Heres a background info about them:

Guyver I: Unit Holder: Sho Fukumachi. Gender: Male. Color: Teal. Height: 174cm. Weight: 261kg.

Sho Fukamachi is a perfectly normal boy but everything has change forever once he finds the first unit! Guyver I was called Guyver I because it was the first unit to be activated. The unit was found in the lake in the forrest of toyko a few months ago. Nobody really knows what activates a G-unit. Sho certainly did not, but he activated the alien symbiont. The control unit was triggered, unfolded and attached itself to the nearest host, and merged with him. Half through the mergance process Sho threw himself unconsciously into a nearby pond, thus when Chronos Troops arrived, who were looking for the Unit and included a transformed Gregole, all they found was Tetsuro, who naturally was very surprised at seeing Gregole. The order to eliminate Tetsuro was very quick in coming since no one who had seen a transformed Zoanoid at that time was allowed to live. The good news for Tetsuro though is that Sho completed merging with the Guyver Unit about then, and while Fukamachi was still in shock from bonding with the Unit it acted to protect Tetsuro and in very short order had killed Gregole. Seeing their companion killed so easily by a perceived inferior being, the other Chronos Troops quickly retreated. After Guyver I save his dad from Chronos, he later meet and became friends Ryoku (One of the main chacthers in DBGU). Guyver I was no match against Freeza and was killed but then something happen with Ryoku which has neven been seen before ever!

Guyver II: Unit Holder: Oswald.A.Lisker Gender: Male. Color: Yellow. Height: 210cm. Weight: 360kg.

Guyver II is the second unit to be used in the series. Lisker was sent by Chronos HQ which we now know is based in America, so Lisker is likely to be an American. He was sent by the headquarters to inspect the Guyver units. When Freeza became part of the Chronos HQ, Lisker train and became Hyperzoanoid so he can have full power of Chronos HQ and over throw Freeza. Months before Chronos became a part of Freeza allince, Chronos Japan recovered one of the Guyver units, Lisker was attacked by the malfunctioning unit and became Guyver2. As a higher trained fighter he fought Guyver1 and was about to defeat him when the malfunction of the unit stopped him from continuing. He was thought to be dead after Guyver I killed him with the megasmasher attack, he is body was lucky enough to recover from the attack. He got tired of Freeza rules and try to go over against him but he was killed under his rath.

Guyver III: Unit Holder: Agito Makishima. Gender: Male. Color: Dark purple/black with extra blades and spikes. Height: 191cm. Weight: 328kg.

Many years ago, he was just a normal child and had a good life before His father had a brother who wanted a protegé but could not be bothered to take a wife. He became a part of Chronos branch and force to destory all humans to complete Chronos ulitmate goal. But he had a better plan in mind and was to make the ulitmate down fall of Chronos. Makishima grew in power and knowledge over the years, until he overshadowed his stepfather, without the latter realizing it. Genzo Makishima was the local head of Chronos. He was not even a Zoanoid, nor was he fully aware of the scope of Chronos operations. He was lucky enough to recover one unit, which soon was destroyed because of structural damage to the control medal. The third unit was not found at all. At least, not by Chronos. When Freeza became a part of Chronos branch and the branch of Chronos became more powerfull then before. But he find out to over throw Freeza and Chronos was that Freeza was scared of the legend called "Super Sayain" which was why Freeza became a part of Chronos. So Guyver I, Guyver III and Ryoku team up to defeated Freeza.

Guyver IV

Unit Holder: Ryoku. Gender: Male. Color: Green. Height: 174cm. Weight: 261kg.

17 years ago, Frieza creates armies from the planets that he conquers, his most utilized race were the Saiyans. Frieza had heard about the legend of the Super Saiyan, a being with unrivaled power, but dismissed it as simple mythology; however, after several Saiyans emerged with rapidly evolving strength, Frieza began to fear that the legend would indeed come true, so as a result, destroyed the entire Saiyan race, along with their home planet. There was only three sayains that lived and they where Vegeta, Nappa and Ryoku. Freeza actions and lust for power eventually bring him into conflict with Chronos and Freeza found out the power of a Guyver unit and he send Nappa, Vegeta and Ryoku to earth to find all three units. Ryoku goal to find all three units but while on earth he became good friends with Sho Fukamachi and Tetsuro Segawa. He got tried of taking rules of Freeza and Vegeta then had no choice to go against them. Ryoku find a 4th unit which they though was a myth and no would never thought a Sayain would have the power of a Guyver unit. Later on in the series, Guyver I was killed by Freeza and Ryoku turn into SSJ while Bio Boosting into Guyver IV. Ryoku became into a SSJ Guyver and the power became something no one can seen before.

Guyver V

Unit Holder: Vegeta. Gender: Male. Color: Grey with extra blades and spikes on his arms. Height: 191cm. Weight: 328kg.

Info coming soon.


I will post more tommorw and i will fix any typos later as well.

[SSj3Gogeta]

oh i like guyver and dragonball z
if you need any help with drawing or anything else ill help

[Ratchetcomand]

Cool, final a replay. You can draw then send me some of your work in a E-Mail or show me at deviantart.com.

I just finish the front cover but i'm not good when it comes to editing. I will ask PGV on MSN if he wants to be become a editor.

[SSj3Gogeta]

ok what do you want me to draw

[Ratchetcomand]

You can be the background desginer. You can draw me the city layout of Toyko.

[SSj3Gogeta]

something like this

[Ratchetcomand]

Yeah something like that. It looks good, if it that WIP (Work in Prouress).

You now have the job as the Background artist .