Dragon Ball AF: Armageddon Fallen, My AF fan fiction.

Here is my fan fiction that i have been working for a while. I always wanted to do a fan fiction and i'm finaly done with it. This is my first fan fiction and please be kind as well . Suggestions are welcome, but please, no bad ratings and no bad comments. for no good reason and if you see any mistakes please let me know .

Dragon Ball: Armageddon Fallen

Chapter I: Arrival of the Unknown

Prologue: Planet Zuegach

The story begins to fade out into a purple planet looking similar to Earth. A planet with gravity 5 times lighter then earth and the planet is run by an alien race with purple skin and black horns called Zuetans. The planet is called “Zuegeach” and the planet is full of joy, harmony and peace. It a planet with luscious emerald green lands, large sapphire pink oceans, and the fluffy, ruby, orange, amethyst, and yellowish pink clouds that crept along the azure skies of the planet making the traveler stare in stupefaction. They don’t have to worry because of their high powerful technology and believing that there is no power in the galaxy that can attack the planet and there leader and there powerful technology can keep them safe from evil.

Meanwhile five space pods appear in space and are heading into the Zuegach and without warning, no one on the planet knows that one of the most evil of all forces in the galaxy have arrive and is heading to the planet. On the planet, five space pods appear out of the sky and fly into the ground, make a huge hole into the city of the planet. A female Zuetans walks into the crater then walking says “Say back everyone” but meanwhile a group of people say “What’s going on, what where those things in the sky”? Then the female mutant who is name “Princess Zuni” said “I’m not sure if they were shooting stars are not”. Then a wired white flash appears and the five space pods break into of millions pieces and five warriors appear. The Ginyu force appears, a large human like person name Reacoom pops on the top left then begins a pose then a little green man with four eyes telepathy named Gurd appears on the top right along with a blue alien with a brown spot on his head appears on the top left named Butta then a red human like alien with white long hair named Jheese appear on the top left. Then a green grayish alien warrior with a ridged head appears on top right at the bottom named Captain Ginyu. All at once, a big flash appears and the Ginyu force does one ultimate pose at once!

Reacoom, Gurd, Jheese, Butta and Ginyu: “WE ARE THE GINYU FORCE”!

Then a group of people just stand there without a sound and one of the person says “Umm…..They don’t look like a threat and the pose was sure lame” in a serious way. Then the groups of people begin to laugh at the Ginyu force bad pose.

Gurd later picks up a huge rock and smashes the group of people with his telepathic power. Then after throwing the rock, the groups of people remain in a smash pile then Gurd blast ki energy at the pile of people and the pile turn into ashes.

Ginyu: “Nice job there. That’s what they get for laughing at our pose.”

Butta: “So Ginyu, why did we come to this planet? It looks like another lame planet but only with purple horn freaks.”

Ginyu: “We came here as ordered from Freeza. Stop asking questions and let’s get this mission started”.

Butta: “Yes Ginyu sir!”

Then the Ginyu force fly’s off and heads to the main city of the planet. Mean while Princess Zuni was hiding behide a rock when the Ginyu force arrived and began to run off to the city. She runs off quickly without the Ginyu force sensing her power level.

Princess Zuni: “This is not good at all and I must warn Father and everyone before The Ginyu force arrives!”

When Princess Zuni arrives at the city. The city is huge and the buildings are big towers like the ones on earth and everyone rides on these wired ants like monsters instead of cars. Then Zuni arrives at the kingdom and runs inside as fast as possible.

Then Zuni runs inside into the king’s room and sees Lord Zeru on his throne sitting down drinking a cup of wine. The Lord Zeru looks just everyone on planet Zuegach and he is one the strongest fighters on the Zuegach. He sees his daughter running to his room and seems worried.

Lord Zeru: “For goodness stakes I told you not run in the hallways for once! Now tell me, what is going on?”

Zuni begins to bow down to lord Zeru and talks about the Ginyu force heading this way to destroy the planet. Zuni: “We must do something before they arrive and kill us all”.

Lord Zeru: “I sense there power level and there pretty strong, I doubt any of our weapons can take them down”. Then Zeru walks to the window and sees a big explosion outside of the window, and then in the city begins to burn into flames.

Meanwhile in the city the Ginyu force attacks the city and Reacoom fires a big red energy beam from his mouth, and attacks the army and destroys all the army tanks. Jheese launches a big red energy ball and throws it at the city, then all the buildings burn into flames and smoke.

Reacoom: “Piece of cake. These guys are weaklings”.

Ginyu: “From the looks of it, it looks like the only person who has the strongest power level on this planet is the king”.

Then Ginyu fly’s off and heads towards the kingdom. Ginyu: “Be right back guys, I’m going to have some fun with their king”.

After Ginyu fly’s off, the rest of the Ginyu force begin to destroy the rest of the city and then Reacoom begins to power up and launches a huge explosive energy wave that completely wipes out the city and leaving the city nothing but ashes and burning flames and smoke into the sky. At the kingdom, you see Zuni looking at windowing and seeing that the city has been burn into the ground and the sky is cover by black smoke and Zuni worries that the planet has come to an end. Then King Zeru walks up to Zuni and touches her on the shoulder and starts to talk to her.

Lord Zeru: “Leave now and let me take care of this”

Lord Zuni: “But why?!”

Lord Zeru: “Leave if you want to live and get out quickly as possible”

Then Zuni begins to hug her Father and cry over his arm. Zeru also hugs back and Zeru begins to walk back to his throne.

Lord Zeru: “I said leave”

Then Zuni runs to the window and flies off without the Ginyu seeing her then as she flies off into the sky fill with black smoke, Gurd all of sudden begins to fly towards her after sensing her energy when flying out of the kingdom just after the city was destroyed into ruins. Zuni looks behind her and then see Gurd, one of the smallest and weakest members of the Ginyu force. Then Gurd puts his hands together and started gathering power then launches a form of a beam called “Choubakuretsumaha”. After launches the attack Zuni fly toward to the ground and falls upon on a pile rocks.

Gurd: “I will just let her body rot into the ground and she can become a pile of dust once we destroy the planet and master Freeza will be proud of our work”.

Meanwhile Ginyu arrives at the kingdom then blasts the door with an energy blast then runs into the hallway which is big and black looking like a another normal looking palace. Then Ginyu begins to walk around the kingdom to see if anyone is home or not but suddenly his scouter picks up a power level in the lower floor of the castle. Then Ginyu opens the door and walks down the stairs and finally picks up a power level.

Ginyu: “So this is the king’s power level huh? Finally I can have some fun on this planet”

Then Ginyu kicks down the door with his foot and bashes into the room and sees the King Zeru already for battle. The room is yellow and the room is covered with a huge red rug that is covering up the floor.

Lord Zeru: “I have been waiting for you. You and your goons are going to pay for all the people you killed here on our planet”

Ginyu: “With that power level, you sound like fun and so let’s get this party started Ginyu style!”

Lord Zeru is powering up and his aura flaring out, pushing the windows way and they break into pieces. In frustration, he threw his arms out wide and screamed with all his might, his aura exploding in a brilliant flash of light. Then Ginyu changes up to Zeru and begins to punch and kick him but Zeru blocks it’s with his arms and deflecting the punches back to Ginyu.

“He is stronger than I thought and he may be stronger then I had in mind” thought Ginyu inside while fighting Zeru. He gripped the sides of his arm and pulled Zeru forward into the ground. Then Ginyu launches a huge amount of energy attacks at the Zeru but the attacks seems like it had a small amount of damage at Zeru.

Lord Zeru: “The attack did hurt but you’re going to do a lot more then that!”

Ginyu: “Damn!”

Ginyu kicks Zeru into in his gut then Zeru doubled over and flew back on his back on to the wall. Then Ginyu powers up and puts his hands together then launches a purple energy attack at Zeru face.

Ginyu: “MILKY CANNON!”

After firing the attack at Zeru, a big amount of smoke appear and Zeru walk out of the smoke and you see his head bleeding from the attack and making a mark on this head.

Lord Zeru: “Nice attack you got there. I have a few attacks of my own as well”.

Then Lord Zeru his purple aura flared and as he continues the fight righting his self, just as Ginyu cried “MILKY CANNON!” The attack fly’s toward to Zeru and he jumps over the attack just before it hits him. Then Zeru fires an energy attack back at Ginyu and Ginyu blocks it with his arm.

Ginyu: “Come on, show me what you got!”

Then Reacoom fly’s into the room and kicks Zeru on the head. Then Zeru right side of his head begins bleeding after getting kicked in the head.

Ginyu: “Reacoom leave now and get the ship ready because this should be over soon”

Reacoom: “Ok Captain, I was only trying to help you”

Then Reacoom fly’s out of the building and Zeru shoots out a long red energy attack at Reacoom then Ginyu fly’s at the attack and defects the attack at Zeru. Then Reacoom leaves and Ginyu fires more ki attacks back at Zeru.

Lord Zeru: “Now here is my ultimate attack! Hurricane Spin Orb”

Zeru raises his arm in the air and his aura begins to explode into a giant small ball of wind and the attack begins to fly at Ginyu. Ginyu gets stuck inside the ball then Ginyu’s body goes around and round, as the strong winds cut them over and over. Then Ginyu begins to scream and the attack becomes stronger and faster. Then the Hurricane Spin Orb attack and all of a sudden ends.

Lord Zeru: “Now stop! He should be died by now”

The attack stops and Ginyu’s body is covered in blue blood and he is wrapping his arm over his body not able to move at all. Then Zeru quickly swung has hands backwards and smacked Ginyu into the ceiling. Ginyu is too week and starts to fall on the ground barely moving then Zeru walks up to Ginyu and begins to kill him with his fist.

Ginyu: “Fool……I still have one more thing left up under my sleeve”

Then Ginyu stabs his arm into his body and Zeru stands there still without a sound, Zeru body can’t not move and his body has a feeling makes his blood run cold down his spine. Then Ginyu moves his left arm up and down then begins repeats to move his arm up down while his right arm in his gut.

Ginyu: “CHANGE NOW”

Then an energy beam comes out of Ginyu mouth going into Zeru body then a big purple flash appears making a huge light that and no one can see what is going on. A few seconds later, it appears that Ginyu has Zeru’s body and Zeru has Ginyu’s body. Zeru looks at his reflection in a broken piece of a window and see that his beautiful face is gone. Then Ginyu sneaks up behind him and knocks him down and Zeru lies down on the wooden floor while the kingdom is burning into flames.

Ginyu: “Thanks for the body and you almost got me killed from that attack. I would love to fight again but this planet is going to be destroying in five minutes. See you in Hell Lord Zeru!”

Then the planet explodes into pieces and the planet is nothing more than space rocks and ashes flowing around in space. The space ship later fly’s off and returns back to Freeze’s and report the mission was complete.

Narrator: The mission was complete success and Captain Ginyu got the ultimate body as he always wanted. No one had know how Ginyu got his body until now and The Ginyu force became one of the most power forces in the galaxy but years later until the Ginyu force was put to rest thanks to Vegeta with the help of Goku, Krillin and Gohan. (Then clips of Reacoom fighting Vegeta, Goku fighting Jheese, Butta and Ginyu switching his body with Goku from the Namke saga. Then we see a final clip of Ginyu switching his body with a frog at the end)

Moments later, we see an arm popping out of a rock and without knowing what is going on.

Lord Zeru: My….Body…..My planet…..Everything……It gone…Time for reven…ge!

Narrator: And now, several decades later time has passed. A threat unlike any before it has drawn near the peaceful Earth.

Nice work, though I think you're gonna have the same problem I have with my fanfic.

Lazy people....

nice job! congrats on your first fan-fic

awesome

Thanks. I wanted to do something different with a DBZGT fan fiction and i always wanted to do something on Ginyu origins.

I have will have the next chapter soon.

What do you mean?

i think this fan-fic will be one to get pinned! if you keep up the good work!

Thanks, i'm suprise that things work well then i thought. I hope the series (I have over 5 sags plan) goes well and i may make it into a comic soon.

well if you send your idea to Akira mabye he'll send it to Toei & they'll make it!..i'm gonna try & do that for my fan-fic!

Yeah right, Toei or AT will NEVER take a fan made idea. That like Lucas having a fan direct Star Wars Episode 7. I'm gald that everyone like it so far, i will have Chapther 1, 2 ,3 and 4 by this weekend. This is my first full fan fiction and i'm gald it work out great !

Thanks for the comments everyone.

as they say expect the unexpected! you never know what might happen! also how many
chapters are in a saga? i wish to be informed so i can help & read them! as for a(n) episode 7 i really don't know much about star wars! except for
Darth Maul,Darth Vader,Luke SkyWalker,Yoda,& ObiWon!

also Soul Calibur 4 has

PS3:Darth Vader
X360:Yoda

At the moment, the fan fiction series has over 5 sagas. If things go out well then i will do at least 10.

1) The New Beginning
2) Legendary Super Saiyan Four Broly Saga
3) Super Goku Saga
4)???
5)???
6)???
7)???
8)???
9)???
10)???

Those are the sagas that i have in plan. I'm almost down with episode 1 and i have it done by morning and episode 2 by later tommorw night or Monday after school (I have to go back to school on Monday ).

allright but save the ssj4 broly saga for something special!

What do you mean?

he means that people were too lazy to read his fanfic since its really long and you might have the same problem


by the way great start and nice first fanfic

That what i have in plan . Here is episode 1, sorry it took so long i was going to post it today but i had to go somewhere today. Let me know if there any mistakes or errors. And oh thanks for the comment Brolyrules !

UPDATE: I FIX ALL OF THE SPELLING ERRORS THAT WHERE LEFT OVER

Episode 1: Arrival of the Unknown

Narrator: Three years has passed since the battle with Omega Shenron and the earth is now in peace. Everyone has returns to their everyday lives and with Goku gone, nothing bad has happen since then and the Z warriors all have taken a break with fighting and training for a while.

The story begins on a sunny morning and the sky is clear blue and the birds are singing. You see some wild animals eating the grass and some trees are being cut down by some human workers. Now the story begins to fade at some houses and the story zooms onto a small round yellow house on the left. Then you see Pan walking out of the door and getting ready for school (She is wearing a red tube top and has no bonnet on. She is alot taller than she was in GT and she is wearing a pair of jeans).

Pan: “Bye Mom and Dad, I’m going to school now”

Then both Gohan and Videl walk out of the door and Gohan grabs his car keys out of his pocket and turns on the car which is a big red hover car. (Both Gohan and Videl look the same as they did in Dragon Ball GT).

Gohan: “Let me get the car warmed up and we can get ready for School”

Pan: “But dad I wanted to ride with my friends to school on the bus”

Videl: “We already talked about this and the answer is no. They've too far away from here and flying is a bad idea”

Pan: “But mom”

Videl: “No and that’s final”

Gohan: “Come on we are going to be late for school honey”

Pan: “Fine but do we have to drive in this lame car. People are going to laugh at us in this thing”

Gohan: “Yes and that final! Stop talking about the car and lets go”

Both Pan and Gohan step into the car and Gohan puts the keys in the car, and begin to drive up to the road ahead and Videl waves goodbye."

Videl: “Bye you two”

The story now starts at Orange Star High School which is a big and white gloomy looking school. Now we see Pan is walking down the hallway walking to her locker putting her books away when a female student with orange short hair catches up to her.

Student: “Hey Pan. Are you going to the festival tour this week?”

Pan: “I wish but my Dad will most likely not let me because there will be boys or something stupid like that”

Student: “Well it's going to be awesome, so call me if you can come”

Then the school bell rings and everyone goes to their classes and Pan walks to her next class. Pan waves goodbye to the student in hallway, tells her that she may go to the tour later.

Now we see a group of students sitting down at a group of desk in a large white class room with some pictures on the wall. Gohan is now writing on the chalk board but Pan is day dreaming at a male student with short brown hair and another student taps on Pan's Shoulder.

Female Student: “You should ask him out”

Pan: “Say what?”

Female Student 2: “The guy over there with the brown short hair. You know Jerry”

Pan: “What makes you think I like him?”

Then Gohan gets interrupted by Pan and the other students from talking and walks up to Pan Looks at Pan and the others annoyed.

Gohan: “What are you three doing? If you want to talk then do it after school or in detention"

Jerry: “Can you repeat the last thing that you said please?”

Gohan: “Well it looks like someone was listing to our subject more than other people, hey pan why don’t you answer the question?”

Pan: “Umm…….The answer is…”

Gohan: “Come on sweetie I know you know the answer”

Random Student: “Sweetie? HAHAHA!”

Then all of student laugh and point at Pan. Pan face turns bright and she covers her face with a book from embarrassment. “Why couldn't I have just gone to another high school?” thought Pan and Gohan continued his lesson. All of the sudden there was an announcement on the school broadcast and the person on the intercom begins to speak.

School Principle: “This is an emergency broadcast! There is a gang fight in West City and a massive robbery at the same time. All schools and business are now dismissed and everyone must return home safely”

Then a group of students run of out of the door and Gohan puts his stuff in his brown desk next to chalk board. Gohan sees Pan walking out of the door with her pink binder and Gohan walks up to her, and grabs her shoulder and begins to talk to her.

Gohan: “You know the drill!”

Pan: “Why? I hate doing this job and the outfit makes me look so lame”

Gohan: “Well I’m too busy with work and you’re the person who can stop the robbery in West City right now”

Pan: “But Papa why can’t Goten do it?”

Gohan: “Well you have been doing this job for a while and you never do it most of the time. Now go and do it now please before I have you take the trash out twice again this weekend”

Pan: “Fine!”

Pan walks out the door all angry and then go outside of the school behind a tree when a white flash of light appears then Pan pops out behind the tree as Great Saiyagirl (The Great Saiyagirl looks the same as Great Saiyawomen aka Great Saiyaman #2 expect for her cape is pink).

Then she does a pose and a group of people stare at her without a sound. Then Pan Looks embarrass from after doing a silly pose in from of a lot of people and she flies off.

Pan: “Behold I’m the Great Saiyagirl!”

High School Student: “That was lame”

High School Student #2: “I would hate to be that person”

Meanwhile at West City, we see police cars getting blown up and police shooting at other people and at each other. Then a group of robbers with a black rabbit mask jump out a window then fire a rocket launcher at the police men and they all catch on fire and they all die after getting on fire and burn into a ashes.

Robber #1: “We burned those police fools to the ground”

Robber #2: “Now let go in Capsule Corporation and get all of the money inside. Just picture all of the money, we will have. We will be heaven baby!”

Then the Great Saiyagirl arrives at the battle of the crime and begins to punch the robbers in the gut and she kicks them in the air. Then the two robbers fall on top of a car and the other robber runs off.

Pan: “You better run because hey, villains! Prepare yourself! The Great Saiyagirl is her.”

Then Pan does another pose and then a flashing light of color appears behind in the background after she does the Great Saiyamen/Saiyagirl pose. “Man I feel so stupid doing this every day, *Sigh*...” she said to herself. All of a sudden she hears a scream in the Capsule Corporation building which is an orange curricle building with a circle like symbol on the top of the building.

Pan: “Oh no a cry for help”

Pan runs inside in Capsule Corporation and see that Bulma is in danger. Since Trunks and Vegeta are nowhere to be found in the building, Pan runs down the stairs and that Bulma is tied up to a poll and a group of people with black rabbit mask’s are pointing a load of weapons at her head keeping her hostage. Pan begins to sneak behind the thugs knowing that they don’t see them and she can save Bulma without knowing.

Bulma: “What do you guys want? For some reason I've seen you guys before.”

Boss Rabbit: “Behold I’m Boss Rabbit and we are the Black Rabbit Gang. We hold you hostage so we can get all of your money if you don’t tell us where the money is it looks like we are going to have to kill you.”

Bulma: “Boss Rabbit? I remember you; you’re the guys that turn me into a carrot. You’re still alive?”

Boss Rabbit: “Yep I’m still alive. I have been stuck on the moon for years but I came back to Earth sometime after the moon got destroy years ago and I was lucky enough to be found by someone in space and send me back to Earth.”

Bulma: “I’m not getting you any of the money and just you wait someone will be here to stop you.”

One of the Thug turns, stares uneasily down the deserved corridor and Pan later show up then the robber puts down his box and draws his gun.

Robber: “Freeze or the Lady gets it”

Pan: “Really?”

Then Pan fires a ki blast at the Robber and the Robber gets destroyed and turns into dust. Then the other robbers begin to shot at pan but the bullets have no effect on the pan pan begins to run to the robbers and then the robbers throw a smoke bomb creating a large amount of black smoke and Pan can’t see where they’re going.

Boss Rabbit: “Now with that superhero girl with the lame outfit can't find us now and let’s get out of here”

Robber #2: “What about the money”

Boss Rabbit: “We will get it later”

Robber #2: "Why?"

Boss Rabbit: "Because we will get our butts kick if we don't get out of here."

They move cautiously towards the open container and sneak out of the door without anyone seeing them. They arrive outside of the building then all of sudden they hear a noise and they look around to see what it was.

Robber #3: “What the heck?”

Pan: “You guys are not getting away with it that easy”

The robbers begin to fire a large amount of bullets with a Machine gun at Pan, she fly’s up and one leg low to let the chain wrap around her left leg and the chain wrap the robbers into a circle and all of the robbers expect for Boss Rabbit where tied up. Then Pan does a roundhouse kick at Boss Rabbit and Boss Rabbit got kicked in the gut and fall on the ground.

Boss Rabbit: “Damn you! Now turn into a carrot”

Then Boss Rabbit points his finger at Pan and it begins to glow and the beam fires at Pan, the light flashed and it fires quickly at Pan but Pan created an energy circle like shield around her and the beam defects back at Boss Rabbit. Then a white flash appears and Boss Rabbit has turned himself into a carrot. Pan picks up the carrot and throw cross the yard and the carrot falls into a tree and was eaten by a squirrel on a big brown tree with light green leaves behind Capsule Corporation building.

Pan: “I’m glad that over and I can go to my life now, and take off this outfit”

Then the police come and throw the robbers that were tied up with the chains in the back of their blue truck. Pan fly's off and head back home, flew off into the blue sunny sky and as she flies off, and takes off her helmet.

Pan: “I hate doing this job, I want to be a normal person for once and not does this lame superhero job every day. I hate how dad always embarrasses me as a teacher and also treating me like a little girl”

Then Pan Fly’s off in sky like a sky rocket but meanwhile in the woods on some part of the earth, you see a group of kids and a hunter with a brown jacket and red pants trying to shoot a deer in a dark part of the woods.

Hunter: “Watch son and I will show you how to hunt a deer”

Kid: “This is boring. I want to get home and play my game system on the internet”

Hunter: “You can play your video games any day but hunting a deer like this is a once in a life time chance”

Kid: “If you say so”

Then all of a sudden a huge fire ball falls out of the sky and fly’s down then crashes into the ground, the deer runs always and a bunch of wild animals run as well. A group of birds start to fly across the country sky chirping away and then the ship crashes on the ground making a slight crater, the ship is at least the same size as the Capsule Corp. Ship and it has spikes sticking out of its sides.

Hunter: “What on Earth was that?”

The Hunter and the group of kids walk to the crater and see that there a weird space ship in the center of the crater. The hunter and the group of people have no clue what to do, so they say back and the Hunter begins to call the park rangers with his small black cell phone.

Hunter: “Darn, my phone is dead and I can’t call anyone!”

Kid: “That ship can be something bad inside of it and we should leave in case something happens”

Hunter: “I’m pretty sure it some government space ship”

Then all of sudden, the space ship opens and you can see a hand. It’s a human like hand that is green with a phallus shaped design. The alien being jumps out of the ship and it is shown but you cannot see him clearly, there is a shadow over cast on him, so you cannot see him, but he does look somewhat familiar.

???: "....This is Earth......?”

Kid: “What are you?”

Hunter: “It looks evil, run son and I will take care of him.”

Then we see a light green alien like human with a ridged head and bio-mechanical tubes on its back, it walks out the crater and begins to take a look around and see where he is and see if there are any life forms on the planet. Then he sees the hunter child running away and the unknown alien opens up his mouth and fires energy beam out at child then the child turns into smoke and is killed. The Hunter and starts putting more bullets in his gun. Then he begins to fire at the unknown alien begin.

Hunter: “Die! This is what you get for killing my son”

He fires a bullet with his shot gun at the alien chest but it has no effect. The alien begin to shoots a yellow ki blast at the hunter and the hunter gets blowing up into pieces. The other group of kids run away and the alien points his two fingers at them when they were running and his two fingers begin to glow and the two fingers launches two energy beams at the kids, the kids turn into ashes and nothing is left of them expect their clothes.

???: “So there is life on this planet huh? Good, I can finally get my body back and I shall get my revenge once in for all!”

Narrator: “Who is this guy and why did he or she came to this planet? With Goku gone can the Z-Warriors stop another enemy without Goku. Find out in the next episode of Dragon Ball AF!”


I hope you guys i like it .`

you have a gift for describing