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. Here is episode 1, sorry it took so long i was going to post it today but i had to go somewhere today. Let me know if there any mistakes or errors. And oh thanks for the comment Brolyrules
!UPDATE: I FIX ALL OF THE SPELLING ERRORS THAT WHERE LEFT OVEREpisode 1: Arrival of the Unknown
Narrator: Three years has passed since the battle with Omega Shenron and the earth is now in peace. Everyone has returns to their everyday lives and with Goku gone, nothing bad has happen since then and the Z warriors all have taken a break with fighting and training for a while.
The story begins on a sunny morning and the sky is clear blue and the birds are singing. You see some wild animals eating the grass and some trees are being cut down by some human workers. Now the story begins to fade at some houses and the story zooms onto a small round yellow house on the left. Then you see Pan walking out of the door and getting ready for school (She is wearing a red tube top and has no bonnet on. She is alot taller than she was in GT and she is wearing a pair of jeans).
Pan: “Bye Mom and Dad, I’m going to school now”
Then both Gohan and Videl walk out of the door and Gohan grabs his car keys out of his pocket and turns on the car which is a big red hover car. (Both Gohan and Videl look the same as they did in Dragon Ball GT).
Gohan: “Let me get the car warmed up and we can get ready for School”
Pan: “But dad I wanted to ride with my friends to school on the bus”
Videl: “We already talked about this and the answer is no. They've too far away from here and flying is a bad idea”
Pan: “But mom”
Videl: “No and that’s final”
Gohan: “Come on we are going to be late for school honey”
Pan: “Fine but do we have to drive in this lame car. People are going to laugh at us in this thing”
Gohan: “Yes and that final! Stop talking about the car and lets go”
Both Pan and Gohan step into the car and Gohan puts the keys in the car, and begin to drive up to the road ahead and Videl waves goodbye."
Videl: “Bye you two”
The story now starts at Orange Star High School which is a big and white gloomy looking school. Now we see Pan is walking down the hallway walking to her locker putting her books away when a female student with orange short hair catches up to her.
Student: “Hey Pan. Are you going to the festival tour this week?”
Pan: “I wish but my Dad will most likely not let me because there will be boys or something stupid like that”
Student: “Well it's going to be awesome, so call me if you can come”
Then the school bell rings and everyone goes to their classes and Pan walks to her next class. Pan waves goodbye to the student in hallway, tells her that she may go to the tour later.
Now we see a group of students sitting down at a group of desk in a large white class room with some pictures on the wall. Gohan is now writing on the chalk board but Pan is day dreaming at a male student with short brown hair and another student taps on Pan's Shoulder.
Female Student: “You should ask him out”
Pan: “Say what?”
Female Student 2: “The guy over there with the brown short hair. You know Jerry”
Pan: “What makes you think I like him?”
Then Gohan gets interrupted by Pan and the other students from talking and walks up to Pan Looks at Pan and the others annoyed.
Gohan: “What are you three doing? If you want to talk then do it after school or in detention"
Jerry: “Can you repeat the last thing that you said please?”
Gohan: “Well it looks like someone was listing to our subject more than other people, hey pan why don’t you answer the question?”
Pan: “Umm…….The answer is…”
Gohan: “Come on sweetie I know you know the answer”
Random Student: “Sweetie? HAHAHA!”
Then all of student laugh and point at Pan. Pan face turns bright and she covers her face with a book from embarrassment. “Why couldn't I have just gone to another high school?” thought Pan and Gohan continued his lesson. All of the sudden there was an announcement on the school broadcast and the person on the intercom begins to speak.
School Principle: “This is an emergency broadcast! There is a gang fight in West City and a massive robbery at the same time. All schools and business are now dismissed and everyone must return home safely”
Then a group of students run of out of the door and Gohan puts his stuff in his brown desk next to chalk board. Gohan sees Pan walking out of the door with her pink binder and Gohan walks up to her, and grabs her shoulder and begins to talk to her.
Gohan: “You know the drill!”
Pan: “Why? I hate doing this job and the outfit makes me look so lame”
Gohan: “Well I’m too busy with work and you’re the person who can stop the robbery in West City right now”
Pan: “But Papa why can’t Goten do it?”
Gohan: “Well you have been doing this job for a while and you never do it most of the time. Now go and do it now please before I have you take the trash out twice again this weekend”
Pan walks out the door all angry and then go outside of the school behind a tree when a white flash of light appears then Pan pops out behind the tree as Great Saiyagirl (The Great Saiyagirl looks the same as Great Saiyawomen aka Great Saiyaman #2 expect for her cape is pink).
Then she does a pose and a group of people stare at her without a sound. Then Pan Looks embarrass from after doing a silly pose in from of a lot of people and she flies off.
Pan: “Behold I’m the Great Saiyagirl!”
High School Student: “That was lame”
High School Student #2: “I would hate to be that person”
Meanwhile at West City, we see police cars getting blown up and police shooting at other people and at each other. Then a group of robbers with a black rabbit mask jump out a window then fire a rocket launcher at the police men and they all catch on fire and they all die after getting on fire and burn into a ashes.
Robber #1: “We burned those police fools to the ground”
Robber #2: “Now let go in Capsule Corporation and get all of the money inside. Just picture all of the money, we will have. We will be heaven baby!”
Then the Great Saiyagirl arrives at the battle of the crime and begins to punch the robbers in the gut and she kicks them in the air. Then the two robbers fall on top of a car and the other robber runs off.
Pan: “You better run because hey, villains! Prepare yourself! The Great Saiyagirl is her.”
Then Pan does another pose and then a flashing light of color appears behind in the background after she does the Great Saiyamen/Saiyagirl pose. “Man I feel so stupid doing this every day, *Sigh*...” she said to herself. All of a sudden she hears a scream in the Capsule Corporation building which is an orange curricle building with a circle like symbol on the top of the building.
Pan: “Oh no a cry for help”
Pan runs inside in Capsule Corporation and see that Bulma is in danger. Since Trunks and Vegeta are nowhere to be found in the building, Pan runs down the stairs and that Bulma is tied up to a poll and a group of people with black rabbit mask’s are pointing a load of weapons at her head keeping her hostage. Pan begins to sneak behind the thugs knowing that they don’t see them and she can save Bulma without knowing.
Bulma: “What do you guys want? For some reason I've seen you guys before.”
Boss Rabbit: “Behold I’m Boss Rabbit and we are the Black Rabbit Gang. We hold you hostage so we can get all of your money if you don’t tell us where the money is it looks like we are going to have to kill you.”
Bulma: “Boss Rabbit? I remember you; you’re the guys that turn me into a carrot. You’re still alive?”
Boss Rabbit: “Yep I’m still alive. I have been stuck on the moon for years but I came back to Earth sometime after the moon got destroy years ago and I was lucky enough to be found by someone in space and send me back to Earth.”
Bulma: “I’m not getting you any of the money and just you wait someone will be here to stop you.”
One of the Thug turns, stares uneasily down the deserved corridor and Pan later show up then the robber puts down his box and draws his gun.
Robber: “Freeze or the Lady gets it”
Then Pan fires a ki blast at the Robber and the Robber gets destroyed and turns into dust. Then the other robbers begin to shot at pan but the bullets have no effect on the pan pan begins to run to the robbers and then the robbers throw a smoke bomb creating a large amount of black smoke and Pan can’t see where they’re going.
Boss Rabbit: “Now with that superhero girl with the lame outfit can't find us now and let’s get out of here”
Robber #2: “What about the money”
Boss Rabbit: “We will get it later”
Robber #2: "Why?"
Boss Rabbit: "Because we will get our butts kick if we don't get out of here."
They move cautiously towards the open container and sneak out of the door without anyone seeing them. They arrive outside of the building then all of sudden they hear a noise and they look around to see what it was.
Robber #3: “What the heck?”
Pan: “You guys are not getting away with it that easy”
The robbers begin to fire a large amount of bullets with a Machine gun at Pan, she fly’s up and one leg low to let the chain wrap around her left leg and the chain wrap the robbers into a circle and all of the robbers expect for Boss Rabbit where tied up. Then Pan does a roundhouse kick at Boss Rabbit and Boss Rabbit got kicked in the gut and fall on the ground.
Boss Rabbit: “Damn you! Now turn into a carrot”
Then Boss Rabbit points his finger at Pan and it begins to glow and the beam fires at Pan, the light flashed and it fires quickly at Pan but Pan created an energy circle like shield around her and the beam defects back at Boss Rabbit. Then a white flash appears and Boss Rabbit has turned himself into a carrot. Pan picks up the carrot and throw cross the yard and the carrot falls into a tree and was eaten by a squirrel on a big brown tree with light green leaves behind Capsule Corporation building.
Pan: “I’m glad that over and I can go to my life now, and take off this outfit”
Then the police come and throw the robbers that were tied up with the chains in the back of their blue truck. Pan fly's off and head back home, flew off into the blue sunny sky and as she flies off, and takes off her helmet.
Pan: “I hate doing this job, I want to be a normal person for once and not does this lame superhero job every day. I hate how dad always embarrasses me as a teacher and also treating me like a little girl”
Then Pan Fly’s off in sky like a sky rocket but meanwhile in the woods on some part of the earth, you see a group of kids and a hunter with a brown jacket and red pants trying to shoot a deer in a dark part of the woods.
Hunter: “Watch son and I will show you how to hunt a deer”
Kid: “This is boring. I want to get home and play my game system on the internet”
Hunter: “You can play your video games any day but hunting a deer like this is a once in a life time chance”
Kid: “If you say so”
Then all of a sudden a huge fire ball falls out of the sky and fly’s down then crashes into the ground, the deer runs always and a bunch of wild animals run as well. A group of birds start to fly across the country sky chirping away and then the ship crashes on the ground making a slight crater, the ship is at least the same size as the Capsule Corp. Ship and it has spikes sticking out of its sides.
Hunter: “What on Earth was that?”
The Hunter and the group of kids walk to the crater and see that there a weird space ship in the center of the crater. The hunter and the group of people have no clue what to do, so they say back and the Hunter begins to call the park rangers with his small black cell phone.
Hunter: “Darn, my phone is dead and I can’t call anyone!”
Kid: “That ship can be something bad inside of it and we should leave in case something happens”
Hunter: “I’m pretty sure it some government space ship”
Then all of sudden, the space ship opens and you can see a hand. It’s a human like hand that is green with a phallus shaped design. The alien being jumps out of the ship and it is shown but you cannot see him clearly, there is a shadow over cast on him, so you cannot see him, but he does look somewhat familiar.
???: "....This is Earth......?”
Kid: “What are you?”
Hunter: “It looks evil, run son and I will take care of him.”
Then we see a light green alien like human with a ridged head and bio-mechanical tubes on its back, it walks out the crater and begins to take a look around and see where he is and see if there are any life forms on the planet. Then he sees the hunter child running away and the unknown alien opens up his mouth and fires energy beam out at child then the child turns into smoke and is killed. The Hunter and starts putting more bullets in his gun. Then he begins to fire at the unknown alien begin.
Hunter: “Die! This is what you get for killing my son”
He fires a bullet with his shot gun at the alien chest but it has no effect. The alien begin to shoots a yellow ki blast at the hunter and the hunter gets blowing up into pieces. The other group of kids run away and the alien points his two fingers at them when they were running and his two fingers begin to glow and the two fingers launches two energy beams at the kids, the kids turn into ashes and nothing is left of them expect their clothes.
???: “So there is life on this planet huh? Good, I can finally get my body back and I shall get my revenge once in for all!”
Narrator: “Who is this guy and why did he or she came to this planet? With Goku gone can the Z-Warriors stop another enemy without Goku. Find out in the next episode of Dragon Ball AF!”
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