Dragonball AF (my version and idea), Evil Saga

Its a story what I think before I know about Dragonball AF. The story started 100 after the battle with the evil dragons.

1. The nightmare is back

In the space flew some space bandits to the Desert Planet. They wanted to steal very popular materials like gold. They were in a pyramid and found a sword.
1. Bandit: That a sword it is?
2. Bandit: Lets see. It must be very strong.
The bandit wanted to cut a metall but its broke.
3. Bandit: Did you see it? You broke it.
From the sword came a dark fog. Its a guy.
Guy: Thx. You saved me and now I have a present for you.
He killed the bandits and flew from the planet.
Guy: Its many years ago but I remember anything. First I go to the Kaioshin Planet.

Meanwhile in the Dai Kaio Planet
Krilin, Tenshinhan and some others trained for the next other world tournament but the dark guy teleported himself to he Dai Kaio Planet.
Paikuhan: Who are you?
Guy: Thats not he Kaioshin Planet. I thing its a other one.
Krilin: Did you not understand the Question.
The guy showed all his power. All other Kaios died by the demonstration and the Nord Kaio laughted about the three Kaios.
Guy: I know where he is.
The guy teleported to the Kaioshin Planet.
Kaioshin (15 G): Thats impossible.
Kaioshin: You know him?
Kaioshin (15 G): Yes, of course. He is the most dangerous creatore in the univers. More than Freezer/Frieza and Boo/Buu. His name is Evil.
Vegeta: A evil guy named Evil. What a joke.
Evil: O the Kaioshin. Who saved you?
Kaioshin: Did he sealed you in the Z-Sword?
Kaioshin: Yes, but its looked like he is stronger than last time.
Evil: You not my power is unlimited AAAAAAHhhhhhh!!!!
Evil had a silver aura and he became stronger than stronger.
Vegeta: I beat him.
Evil: You are a Saiyan, right
Vegeta: Yes, I am.
Evil: A saiyan did seal me. Now DIE!!!!
Evil fired a Beam and beat Vegeta.
Evil: Its enough now I make your the nightmare real.
He teleported to the hell and broke the dimension seal. The evil guys came back to the earth and made terror.
Evil came to earth, too.
Evil: I feel the power of saiyans on this planet. Now my new friends kill them all. Muhahaha.

In the Kaioshin Planet
Kaioshin (15 G): We must stopp them.
Kaioshin: But what can we do?
Kaioshin (15 G): Not we. Goku and this friends.
Vegeta: We dont find Kakarot but we can beat them without him, too.
Gohan: Vegeta is right. Now let*s go.
The Kaioshin teleported Gohan, Trunks, Goten and Vegeta to the earth. They search the evil to brought them back.

Can they beat realy Evil without Goku? Lets find out in the next episode.

Hmmm not bad but make somethings longer not something like he shot a beam at vegeta vegeta was defeated not stuff like that ok?

2. Mars and Jupiter

The evil Evil was back and saved the guys from the hell. Now the old opponents from our friend was destroying the world. Vegeta, Trunks, Goten and Gohan returnt to the earth to save the earth. Could they beat the the evil persons?

Freezer, Cooler and King Cold destroyed some people of the earth.
Freezer: Thats boring.
Cooler: Why we not destroy this planet. If saiyans are in this planet they become die.
King Cold: Kids, wont you revenge?
Cooler and Freezer: Yes, Dad.
Goten and Trunks came to the place, too. They wanted to stopp the Cold Family.
Freezer: O no. Not they.
Goten: Give up, guys. You had no chance.
Cooler: We will see. Come on, brother.
Freezer: Yes.
Cooler and Freezer: FUSION-HAAAA.
Goten and Trunks: What?
Cooler and Freezer fused to a more powerfull guy.
Guy: I am your destiny, Blizzard.
Trunks: Then its our turn.
Trunks and Goten fused to Gotenks.
Gotenks: We can fuse, too.
Blizzard: DAMN IT!
They fighted and Blizzard used attacks like Super Nova, Death Beam or Death Blade but he had no chance agains Gotenks.
Gotenks: I finish this. Super Ghost Kamikatze Attack!!!
Blizzard: NOOOOOO!!!!!!!
King Cold: Thats impossible!!!!!!
Blizzard and King Cold died and Gotenks search a other opponnent.

Meanwhile Vegeta killed Nappa again. From the ambush attacked him the androids, M2s and the saibamans.
Vegeta: DAMN IT!!!!!!
But he was saved.
The evil from the ambush: NOOOOOOO!!!
It was Piccolo who saved Vegeta in the last minute.
Vegeta: Piccolo? But How ...?
Piccolo: I was in the hell, too. I came to bring all evil guys back to this cage.
Vegeta: Thx. We need any help we got.

Gohan beated the red ribbon army guys and searched the others.
Gohan: O man. Where are the others. I remember I feel Cells aura. Where is he?
Cell wasnt here anymore, he searched some energy drink. With energy drinks I mean People. He absorbed the Ginyu Force.

Raditz used his scouter to find Goku.
Raditz: Kakarot, I never forgive you. I trained day to day and become this.
He transformed to a SSJ.
Raditz: Hahahhaha.
Vegeta came to Raditz.
Vegeta: A SSJ thats nothing.
Raditz: Do you now a better thing.
Vegeta: Yes the ultimate transformation.
Vegeta used a little Laser Gun from Bulma and fired himself.
Vegeta: AAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Raditz: Are you crazy?
From the smoke answer Vegeta.
Vegeta: Yes, of course.
He became a SSJ4.
Raditz: O no.
Vegeta: O yes and now my Final Flash attack.
Raditz: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH.
He beat Raditz with the powerfull Final Flash.
Bulma (thx the Master Kaio from the other world): Why you used this form for a weakly opponent like Raditz.
Vegeta: I was only a test.

Evil looked in the sky and understand he couldnt beat the saiyans only with the death guys. He fired two Ki-Beams to the sky and created two new planets beside the earth. And beside him came two creatures. One of them is green and the other red.
Evil: You must destroy the saiyans.
Green: Yes master. My brother Mars and I kill them all.
Mars (red): Yes, we kill anybody who want to stopp as. Its that right Jupiter?
*Evil smirk

Can Vegeta and the other beat this evil creatures?

hmmm.... pretty good

3. Two more opponent

Last time on DBAF Vegeta and the others search their old opponents and brought them back to the hell. Its was difficulter than our friend think because they can used their power better. An example Freezer and Cooler knew the fusion technique. But thank Gotenks he was beaten. Evil summoned two creatures Jupiter and Mars. What creatures were they?

Goku Jr and Vegeta Jr trained by Pans Garten.
Pan: Would you kids like a cup of iced tea?
Goku Jr: Yeah. Thx grandma.
Vegeta Jr: Thx Mrs. Son.
Pan: Hehehe. Huh?
The glass with iced tea fall to the ground and broke.
Pan: What a power?
Broly came to Pan because he thought Goku Jr is Goku.
Broly: KAKAROT!!!!
He attacked Goku Jr and Goku Jr flew into the house.
Vegeta Jr: Goku, are you ok?
Goku Jr came back.
Goku Jr: Yes, but he is not normal.
Broly transformed to a LSJ and attacked once more but Goku Jr and Vegeta Jr didnt give up. They transformed to a SSJ and fired many KI-Beams.
Broly: AAAAAAAAA!!!!
Broly had many reserves left and he wanted to use it.
Pan: Come back, boys. I beat him.
Goku Jr: No grandma. He is to strong.
But Broly died by a other energy beam.
Broly: AAAAA!!!!! KAKAROT!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was Gohan as a SSJ.
Pan: Father?
Goku Jr: Do you mean he is my grandpa?
Gohan flew to away and didnt talk with his dauther or grandson.

Meanwhile Goten and Trunks transformed to a SSJ and beated Slug and Bojack.
They: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Goten and Trunks made a break.
Goten: I think thats all.
Trunks: Are you crazy? Thats never all evil.
Mars: He is right.
Goten: Who are you?
Mars: My name is Mars. I am a creature from Master Evil.
Trunks: What? This Evil is more trouble than I thought.
Mars: Its time to kill you saiyans.
He attacked Trunks and Goten. The two saiyans transformed to a SSJ and countered his attack. But they werent strong enough to beat him.
Mars: Its that all?
Trunks: Not realy.
They fused to become Gotenks.
Goten and Trunks: FUSION-HAA!!!!
Gotenks: Your finished.
Gotenks transformed to a SSJ and fighted agains Mars but he was realy strong. Gotenks used this Galaktic Donut Attack but he dodged and fired Red Energy Beams. Gotenks was very powerless.
Gotenks: He..he...he. Its time to use the ultimate tranformation.
Mars: Huh?
Gotenks became a SSJ3 and fired more Galaktic Donuts and seal Mars.
Gotenks: This technique I used agains the Majin Boo.
But Mars saved himself.
Gotenks: Damn it. I am to old for this technique.
Mars: You realy boring.
Gotenks defused himself to Goten and Trunks.
Mars: Your power was to big for your fusion.
Goten: Thats over for us.
A Voice: Dont think so.
Mars: What?
It was Vegeta.
Vegeta: Nobody touch my son and my friends.
Mars: Who are you?
Vegeta: Your greatest nightmare.
Vegeta transformed to a SSJ and fired many KI-Beam and Mars fall.
Vegeta: I finish this now.
Jupiter: Not so fast.
Jupiter saved his brother by punching Vegeta. Vegeta stood up.
Vegeta: What a other one?
Jupiter: You saiyans are realy strong but I am stronger than my little brother.
Goten and Trunks: What?!
Vegeta: Then fight with me. I am your opponent.
Jupiter: I see. Lets start it.
Vegeta and Jupiter fighted but Jupiters power became stronger and stronger.
He fired a Green Beam and Vegeta could dodge.
Vegeta: You are great. But I show you now my new transformation.
Goten: What?!
Trunks: Father, dont use it.
Vegeta transformed to a SSJ3 and fired a Final Flash.
Jupiter: AAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Vegeta and Jupiter were to weak to fight. Mars wanted to kill Vegeta but ...
Jupiter: Dont kill him. He is my opponent. Bring me back to my planet.
Goten and Trunks wanted to kill they but ...
Vegeta: Stopp you two. Let them go.
Trunks: But father we must kill them.
Vegeta: That was a great battle Jupiter.
Jupiter: Dont laught about it. Tomorrow I want to see you on the green planet in the sky.
Vegeta: What? Thats two new planets.
Jupiter: Yes, thats our two planet and I you dont come for battle me. I will destroy the world.
Vegeta: Ok.
Mars: And you two come to my planet and I will kill you.
Goten and Trunks: GRRR.
Mars flew with his brother and Goten and Trunks brought Vegeta to Dende.

Can Vegeta beat Jupiter tommorow? We will see.

thx

4. Last Chance

Last time on DBAF
Goten and Trunks fighted agains one of Evils slaves Mars. He was stronger than the fusion Gotenks and wanted to kill them but Vegeta saved him. Jupiter, the other slave and brother of Mars, came to fight with Vegeta. Vegeta*s Final Flash crushed to Jupiter and the shockwaved beat they. Jupiter wanted a rematch with Vegeta on this own planet. Could Vegeta beat him?

Cell absorbed day to day people the energy and became stronger. Evil, the new opponent, had a special power and became day to day more stronger than he was. Gohan killed Babidi and this evil Majin Fighters. Vegeta, Trunks and Goten made themself ready for flying to the planet of Jupiter and Mars.
Piccolo: I hope you can win. They stronger than every opponent we had.
Vegeta: I know but thats the only way.
Trunks: Yes. Goten and I will beat Mars. Right Goten?
Goten: Yes, he will pay for that.
The saiyans started their Capsules and flew. Goten and Trunks to the planet from Mars and Vegeta from Jupiter.

In the Kaioshin World worked Bulma on a new invation.
Kaioshin: Can Vegeta transform to a SSJ4 again.
Bulma: No, the generator had not enough power but he say "I dont need it for this battle".
Kaioshin (15 G): He is crazy. Jupiter and Mars arent fighter like the evil dragons. They are much stronger than Yixinglong/Omega Sherong.
Bulma: Vegeta trained hart for this moment. Vegeta, you can win this.

The saiyan came to the planets.
Goten and Trunks found Mars and challenged him for a battle.
Goten: We challenge you.
Mars: Ok but this time you lose.
Trunks and Goten: Grrr. FUSION_HA.
They fused together to Gotenks as a SSJ and fighted agains Mars. Gotenks punched him and fired many KI-Beams.

In the same time Vegeta fighted agains Jupiter. Jupiter fired a Green Beam but Vegeta dodged, transformed to a SSJ and kicked him back.

Gotenks transformed to a SSJ3 and fired a this new attack.
Gotenks: Thats my new attack. Finish Kamehameha!!!
Mars dodged but after the exposion on this planet he was hurt.
Mars: AAAAAAA!!!!
Gotenks: Huh? I see. Thats your weak point. If I destroy the planet what happening?
Mars: Hahaha, if you do it you die, too.
Gotenks: Realy? Kaioshin can you help me?
Kaioshin: Ah? Sure ...
Gotenks: Then ... once more again.
He flew to Mars and kicked him to the mountains.
Mars: AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! You will pay for it.
Gotenks: I dont thinks so. FINISH KAMEHAME-HAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!
Mars: NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
The planet exploded and the Kaioshin saved Gotenks with the teleportation.

Meanwhile Jupiter heard the explosion.
Jupiter: Thats impossible. My little brother .... death..
Vegeta: Now you havent a reason to life anymore.
Jupiter: You?! I destroy this planet and bring you to hell with me.
Vegeta: What?!
Jupiter: HAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
He used his power to beat Vegeta. The shockwaves hurted the planet and him but he wanted to beat Vegeta once for all.
Vegeta: I must beat him with my lastest technique.
The Kaioshin knew Vegeta*s plan and was ready for the teleportation. Vegeta transformed again to a SSJ3 and ...
Vegeta: Here is my strongest attack. The Final Shine!!!!!!!!
Jupiter: AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! You beat me but you will die, too.
The Kaioshin came to save Vegeta and wanted to teleport back but first.
Vegeta: Fool. You think so. Bye.
They teleported back and Jupiter ...
Jupiter: VEGETA!!!!!!!!!!!

Evil feel it.
Evil: What?! This saiyans are stronger as I think. One of them must be the LSJ.

What mean Evil with LSJ? Its not Broly the real LSJ? We will see

5. Ultimate Cell

Last episode of DBAF
Vegeta and Gotenks beated the brothers Jupiter and Mars and the Kaioshin saved them with the teleportation. Evil thought it was the LSJ. What did he means?

Super 17 destroyed a city with a beam.
The people: AAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
They all died and Super 17 laughted about it. He feel a power.
Super 17: Show yourself you insect. Cell.
Cell came and smirked.
Cell: It was a long time, right?
They began to fighting. Cell*s powerlevel was stronger than the last time.
Super 17: I know your skills.
Cell: But not from my little friends.
He cloned many Mini Cells and attacked Super 17. The Mini Cells griped him and Cell beat him with a punch. Super 17 fall and Cell catched him.
Cell: Its time to absorb you one more time.
Super 17: Aaa ... aAa.
Cell absorbed Super 17 and transformed.
Cell: AAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
The transformation was over and Cell became his strongest form.
Cell: Exelent! Hahahahaha. Huh?
From Cells tail came a new Cell. He looked like the clones but green.
Cell: Who are you?
Cell Jr: My name is Cell. I am your good side and want to play with you.
Cell: I dont need you.
He punched Cell Jr and flew away.

Meanwhile Gohan killed Zaborn and Dodoria.
Gohan: O man. How many evil guy were returnt.
Evil: Did I heard my name?
Gohan: You?!

Evil came and wanted to fight with Gohan.
Can Gohan stopp his terror? And whats about Cell? Did he become stronger than everybody?

6. The Guy named Potato

Last time on DBAF
Cell absorbed Super 17 and became this ultimate form. Meanwhile met Gohan Evil. Can Gohan beat him?

Gohan: Grrrr.
Evil: I know you but I forget it.
Gohan: Realy?
Evil: Thats 20.153.000 years ago. I remember I was beaten by the LSJ.
Gohan: Broly is the LSJ.
Evil: Did you see this powerlevel? Thats nothing. And now DIE!
Evil fired a Beam, Gohan dodged and transformed to a SSJ. Evil was stronger and had no problem to beat Gohan. Gohan became a SSJ3 and punched him in his face. But Evil wasnt hurt.
Evil: Thats the SSJ3, right?
Gohan: Where you know this.
Evil: I had see it by the battle of your friend agains my creatures. Thats the hightest form of your saiyans.
Gohan: You think so.
Evil: What?
Gohan jumped to the air and wanted to fire a Kamehameha but Evil was behind him and kicked him. Gohan fall to the ground but could stand up.
Gohan: Heh.. heh. .. heh. I think I lost.
Gohan became aswoon.
Evil: Hahahah, you saiyans my rage will be kill you.

Gohan saw the time which Evil came to planet Vegeta and destroy all. He saw a boy like himself as a Teen. He had other clothes and transformed to a Blue Hair Fighter and sealed Evil in the swords.
Gohan: Whats that?
The other Gohan: Thats you or better, it was I. I was the second LSJ who was borned and beat this monster. I used any energy and lost my body and you have my soul and now my mind.

Gohan waked up and talked to Evil.
Gohan/LSJ Gohan: You never change you, Evil
Evil: I know it. I think you died, Potato.
Potato: I was bored as a other person who beat you without the LSJ.
Evil: I am stronger than our last fight and my power is unlimited. And you are not the LSJ anymore thats mean your power is limited, Hahaha.
Potato: I give all last power this person.
Evil: What?
Gohan took back this tail and transformed to a SSJ4.
Evil: What is that?
Gohan: Thats the SSJ4, the strongest Saiyan Form.
Evil: Thats impossible.
Gohan: KAMEHAME-HAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
The Kamehameha flew to Evil but he stopped the attack with his own hands and catapulted in the sky. Gohan transformed back.
Gohan: Damn it. It was to weak.
Evil: Hahahaha, its my turn now.
Evil fired a energy beam to kill Gohan but the Kaioshin saved him.
Evil: Damn Kaioshins but not belong and I will destroy the world, hahahahahaha.

Could nobody beat this monster? We will see

nice very nice
i like how you made the planets real charcters

7. Metamorph panic

Last time on DBAF
Gohan fighted agains Evil and waked his true power or true person who had the power and tranformed to a SSJ4. Gohan didnt beat Evil because his power was to less and he returned to the Kaioshin Planet. Which plan had our friends?

Gohan told anything he knew about the fight as Potato agains Evil. The Idea with the sword was a start.
Kaioshin (15 G): He was seal many years. I think thats not work anymore.
Gohan: What can we do?
Trunks: We must kill first all evil guy before we can beat Evil.
Gohan: But if you dont stopp him, he become more stronger.
Kaioshin (15 G): Nobody without Goku could beat this monster. He is to strong and he become more power every day. But we must stopp the others first.
Kaioshin: I feel a other powerfull aura in the east city. Many people was death.
Gohan: Thats must be Cell. He absorbed all people.
Vegeta: No, thats a other aura. I know Cells aura. Thats much stronger and more difficult. Kaioshin teleport me to the earth.
Kaioshin: Ok!
The Kaioshin teleported with Vegeta to the earth.

Kaioshin: Vegeta, we dont no about this monster. You must be chary.
Vegeta:Yes, I know.
Vegeta flew to the city and the Kaioshin teleported back to the Kaioshin Planet.

Meanwhile Cell came to Evil and wanted to talk.
Cell: I am the strongest in the univers now. I am not one of your anymore.
Evil: You must kill first all saiyans. Than you can make what ever you want.
Cell: What do you think who you are?
Cell punched Evil in his face but nothing happen.
Evil: I am strongest in the univers.
With one punch he beated Cell.
Evil: You can absorb the energy from you opponent but my power become every day stronger and stronger and I must do anything. Did you understand it?
Cell: Yes, master.
Evil: Then kill that Saiyans.
Cell flew away.

Vegeta came to the East City but nobody is here. A taxi came and the driver came out.
Vegeta: What are you doing here?
Driver: Hahaha, I am the guy who make the questions.
He fired a energy beam.
Vegeta: What?
Vegeta could dodge the attack but the driver wasnt here anymore. A woman came and asked.
Woman: Whats going on here?
Vegeta: You must run away. A evil taxi driver want to kill us.
Woman: You mean like this?
The woman fired a beam to but ...
Vegeta: Not with me.
Vegeta countered the attack back. From the mouth of the woman came a slime and the woman died by the beam. Thats monster had many knives on this body and wanted to cut Vegeta. Vegeta could dodged the knives but not the punch. He crushed to the house and the monster wanted to kill him with a knife on this arm. Vegeta catched it and became a SSJ. He catapulted the monster back to the ground.
Vegeta: Who are you? You remembered me. Do you know a guy named Baby?
Monster: Yes, he brought me back from the death.
Vegeta: I though Evil did bring all evil guys back.
Monster: Evil is back? What a suprised day. I am a creator, creatured by the tsufurujins. I was built to kill Evil but I was a uncontrolable monster. Baby found my body and made a upgrade. Now I am strong and clever. My name is Metamorph.
Vegeta: Why Metamorph? Can you transform to a other creator?
Metamorph: Hehehe.
He showed Vegeta*s hair pair and absorbed it.
Vegeta: What are you doing with one of my hair?
Metamorph: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
He became a new monster. He looked like Vegeta with monster teeth, pink hair and eyes like Vegeta-Baby first form. He punched Vegeta to a car.
Metamorph: I kill you with your own technique. BIG BANG ATTACK!
He fired a Big Bang and Vegeta ...
Vegeta: AAAAAAAA!!!!!!
losed. Metamorph flew to a other City. Vegeta stood up and thought * Not with me.
He flew behind Metamorph.

What could Vegeta do agains himself? Our friend had one more problem than Evil. Can somebody beat this monsters?

thx
I did watch many animes to make own ideas

8. Metamorph transformation

Last time on DBAF
Vegeta fighted agains a monster named Metamorph. He absorbed some hair from Vegeta and became more powerfull. With his own attack was Vegeta beaten but not belong. Metamorph flew to an other city to absorb more people.

Vegeta: Why?! Why happen it by me?
Vegeta became very angree and transformed to a SSj3.
Vegeta: You cant beat me Metamorph. Forget it.
Metamorph feel Vegetas Aura behind him and flew faster. Vegeta understood Metamorph*s plan and called Goten and Trunks to help him.

Meanwhile Gohan searched Cell to fight agains him but he couldnt find him.
Gohan: Cell, I must stopp your plan. You think I dont know it.

The Kaioshin helped Bulma on a new saiyan transformation machine for the SSJ4 form.
Kaioshin: How works this machine?
Bulma: Its make many tranformation capsules. If you are a saiyan and eat them, you take a tail and become a SSJ4.
Kaioshin: Aha. You mean not for Goten and Trunks, too.
Bulma: Yes, we can need more powerfull fighter.

Meanwhile on the Tallant Town
Turles and his guys destroyed the city.
One of them: Why we dont plant the tree of might?
Turles: Because we dont have something to plant. I hate it. I must kill my own rage and after I did it. Grrr.
A other of them: Master?
Turles: Evil will kill me.
Turles was so angree and destroyed more houses. Metamorph came to the gang.
Turles: Who are you?
Metamorph: I am Metamorph and I want to absorb you.
One of the guys: Nobody talk so with our Master.
*Metamorph smirk
He attacked Turles who flew into a house. Metamorph wanted to beat him but Turles Gang had other plans. Metamorph killed them with the knives on this body.
Turles: Damn!
He became aswoon and Metamoph wanted to absorb him but Vegeta stopped him.
Vegeta: Our fight isnt over.
Metamorph: I had your cells. You cant win.
Vegeta: We will see. AAAAAAAAAAA!!!
He fired many Ki-Beams but Metamorph wasnt beaten. Vegeta losed his power and transformed back.
Metamorph: Hahahaha, you beat yourself.
Vegeta: I must learn to control this power.
Goten: We are here to help.
Trunks and Goten came to help Vegeta.
Trunks: You lost. We are to many fighter!
Metamorph: Are you sure?
He cut the way from Turles and absorb him.
Metamorph: AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
He became a monster with violet skin, one foot likes Coolers, knives on this body and Vegetos face but with violet hair.
Trunks: What?
Vegeta: Damn it.

Metamoph transformed once more. Could our friends beat him?

9. Metamorph flew

Last time on DBAF
Metamorph, a monster rebored by Baby, made many trouble. He absorbed first a pair of Vegeta*s hair and killed many people. Trunks and Goten came to help Vegeta.
Trunks:You lost. We are to many fighter!
Metamorph: Are you sure?
He absorb Turles and became more stronger.
Metamorph: AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!

Vegeta and the others saw Metamorph new transformation.
Metamorph: This saiyan was one of the weakest race. But I had now enough power to beat anyone of you.
Vegeta: GRRR!!!
Trunks: We will see.
Metamorph: Hahahahahaha. Hmm.
He focus his power. He had a pink aura and used one of Turles technique but the saiyans could dodge.
Vegeta: Trunks, Goten!! Transformation!
Trunks and Goten became SSJ and fighted with the powerless Vegeta agains Metamorph but he was more powerfull than our friends.
Metamorph: DIE!!!
He fired an energy ball but it was blocked.
Metamorph: What?!
Trunks: Thats Piccolo.
Piccolo came for help.
Piccolo: You monster your terror is over.
Metamorph: Hahaha, you dont know who I am. Then DIE!
He killed Piccolo with a Final Flash.
Piccolo: AAAAAAAAAA!!!

Gohan feel Piccolo*s aura not anymore.
Gohan: Piccolo!
He flew to the city which Piccolo died.

Metamorph: Hahaha, weak namenkians.
Gohan:Thats enough.
Metamorph: Huh?
Goten: Brother!
Trunks: Yes, Gohan is here.
Vegeta: You lost Metamorph.
Metamorph: What?
Gohan: You killed my best friend and now I kill you. AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
Gohan transformed to a SSJ4 and punched Metamorph. He became angree and fired a Final Flash. Gohan countered with Kamehameha.
Gohan: KAMEHAME-HAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Turles rent from Metamorph*s body and he transformed back to Vegeta Form.
He understood his rout and ran away. Gohan was to slow for him and lost him.
Turles: O man. I think thats over.
Goten: I dont think so.
Turles: AAAAAAAA!!!!!
Goten killed Turles with an energy ball.

Metamorph came to a capsule and flew to Planet Plant/Tsufuru.

Metamorph lost his battle but not the war. Can nobody stopp him?

Dude GRAMMAR mistakes... Yes I know I have mine too which I will change but the way you type is like this:

Turles: AHHH!!!

Goten killed Turles with an Energy wave.


When it should be like this:

Turles spun around to see Goten charging an Energy wave.

Turles: Oh Sh*t!

Turles tried to escape, but Goten fired the Energy wave and it went straight for Turles.

Turles: AHHHHH!!!!

Turles screamed in pain until he was put out of his misery by Goten.


There. That should help ya lil and make it a lil longer and understandable and a clearer image will be in your mind when reading...