Dragonball AF (my version and idea), Evil Saga

18. The Legendary Super Saiyan

Last time on DBAF
Goku transformed with the power of all saiyans and the dragonballs to a SSJ5 and wanted to fight with Evil in the space. Can he beat him?

In the space looked Evil in Goku*s eyes and Goku in Evil*s eyes.
Evil: Hahahaha, your powerlevel is amazing.
Goku: Would you like see a part of my power? AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Goku*s power crushed Evil to a other planet. The planet exploded and Evil started a new attack. They changed after every 5-10 min the planet because it was destroyed.
Goku fired a Kamehamehal, Evil dodged and wanted to punch him but Goku fired a Ki-Beam. Evil took damage and became angree.

Meanwhile on the Kaioshin Planet
Bulma: Why? Why Vegeta and my son?
Kaioshin: There powerlevel was strong enough to destroy 10 planets.
Kaioshin (15 G): And thats not all. I think Goku play with Evil. Why is he doing this? Did he forgot Evil*s power?

In the hell watched now everybody the fight between Goku and Evil.
Piccolo: Goku, you must beat him? Dont play with him?
Freezer: I think Goku will going to lose.
Cell: I do. This monster become stronger and stronger.

Goku dodged and blocked all attack from Evil. Evil became angreer and angreer.
Evil: Why you dont die?
Goku: Because I am stronger than you.
Evil: HAHAHAHHA! You are funny. Stronger than me? What a joke.
Goku: But its the true.
Evil: What? I think you forgot who I am. I will show you. HAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
Evil focused his power. Goku who knew Evil*s power didnt stopp him.
Evil: You idiot. My powerlevel is unlimited. HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
Evil fired many Ki-Beams and they hit Goku.
Evil: HAHAHAH! WHO IS THE STRONGEST NOW?
From the smoke saw Evil Goku*s shadow.
Evil: AAHA?!! AAAAAAAAAAA??????????
The beams didnt work agains Goku. He is alive and everybody who watched this battle were suprised, too
Goku: Is that funny for you?
Evil: How you ... ?
Goku: I did say it. I am stronger than you.
Evil: But my power is unlimited.
Goku: My power is unlimited, too. I am not only a SSJ5. I am the true Legendary Super Saiyan. HAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
Goku showed more power from him.
Everybody understrand now Goku*s destiny and Broly wasnt the LSJ.

Could Goku beat him?

19. Legend Kame Hame Ha

Last time on DBAF
Goku and Evil fighted in the space. During the battle everybody understood Goku wasnt only a SSJ5. He was a LSJ, too. Goku had more power than Evil.
Will Goku beat him?

Evil: You mean you are the LSJ?
Goku: I didnt mean that. Its the true.
Evil: HAHAHAHA, What a joke. I am the strongest in the univers. HAAAAA!!!
Evil wanted to punch Goku but Goku punched him.
Evil: AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! YOU!!!!!!!!!!
Evil became stronger and stronger but his fighter spirit became weaker and weaker.
Goku: Give up. You lost.
Evil: What?
Goku: You and I become stronger and stronger but your spirit become weaker.
Evil: HAHAHAHA! I show you who is the strongest now. KAME!!!!!!!
Goku: Hmm...
Evil: HAME!!!!!!!!!!
Goku looked to Evil and was ready to stopp the attack.
Evil: For all thing what your race do my family. DID GOKU!!!!!!!!! HAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Kamehameha crushed on Goku and its exploded.
Evil: HAHAHAHHA!!!!
But Goku was alive.
Evil: Whats happening? Your alive?
Goku: I said it. You cant beat me.
Evil: SHUT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!
He fired many Ki-Beams but Goku dodged all and punched him for every saiyan. And as a special kicked Goku him to the high.
Evil: Heh...heh...heh...Thats enough. AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!
Evil focused last time this power for a Death Ball.
Evil: DIE!!!!!! In this attack is unlimited power. You cant dodged or alived it.
Goku: GRRRR!!!!!
Evil: HERE FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!
The Death Ball came to Goku but he started a counter attack.
Goku: HERE MY LEGEND KAMEHAME-HAAAAAAAA!!!!!
The attack crushed another.
Evil: YOU FOOL!!!!!!!!!!! What?!!!!!!!!
Goku: My Legend Kamehameha had unlimited power after my shoot.
Evil: NO ......... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
The Legend Kamehameha crushed with Evil on the sun and exploded.
Evil: WHY?!!!!!!!!! WHY?????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The sun was destroyed now and the space became dark. Goku used the Dragonballs and made everything normal before he fighted with Evil. The earth was in this normal form and the sun and the other planets came back.

Kaioshin and Kaioshin ( 15 G): He did it!! He did it!!!!

Vegeta and the others waked up.
Gohan: Its over now.
Vegeta: I knew Kakarot win.
They flew back to the other world.

The peace returned to the earth. But not belong.

20. Trouble in the hell

Last time on DBAF
Goku did finaly defeated Evil with his Legend Kamehameha. After the battle did Goku returned the earth in the normal form with the Dragonballs.

In the hell Evil was sealed in a machine which block the unlimited power and hurt Evil. The most power was used to stopp Evil and the other hell guys made trouble again but in the hell. Piccolo hadnt enough power to stopp them all.

In the Dai Kaio Planet
Dai Kaio: Guys, the bad guys made bad things.
Paikuhan: I stopp them.
Gohan: I will help you.
Vegeta: I think you dont need me today.
So went Gohan, Paikuhan, Goten and Trunks to stopp the terror of their enemy.

Piccolo fighted meanwhile along agains the bad guys. Freezer and Cooler fused to Blizzard and beat Piccolo with a Death Ball.
Piccolo: AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!
Hell: Piccolo, are you aright?
Piccolo: Thats so many.
Gohan: Thats why we here.
Piccolo: Gohan.
Trunks: We are here too, Piccolo.
Piccolo: Trunks, Goten and the green guy.
Paikuhan: My name is Paikuhan, not green guy.
Cell: Enough. DIE!!!!!!!
Gohan stopped Cells punch and laughted.
Gohan: We are death. Did you forget?
Cell and Gohan punched another and Piccolo fighted again with Blizzard. Goten and Trunks beated the Ginyu Force and the Red Ribbon Armee. Gohan and Cell fired again a Kamehameha. Paikuhan attacked Cell with a Ki-Blast and Gohan won. The losers was closed in their cage. Piccolo was in trouble agains Blizzard but he defused and Piccolo beated Cooler and Freezer. Nappa, Turles and Raditz wasnt a big problem to beat. Everyone from the enemies were closed without Metamorph. He had this SSJ4 form and its looked like nobody can stopp him.
Metamorph: HAHAHA!!! I lost in the earth but in the hell, I am the king. AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
He wanted to start a new attack. But a shot stopp him.
Metamorph: AAAAA!!!?? HAAAAAaaa? aaa?
He fall to the ground and behind him was Vegeta.
Trunks: Father?
Vegeta: I though you cant beat Metamorph. I came to stopp him.
Gohan: Your the best Vegeta.
Vegeta: And where is Evil?
Piccolo: We sealed him in a undestrukable cage. He wasnt here.

Meanwhile Evil heard a Voice.
Voice: Evil, you must return to the real world. To end your mission.
Evil opened his eyes.

Whats going on? Who talked with Evil?

21. The true Evil

Last time on DBAF
Goku did finaly defeated Evil and the earth was saved. Evil was closed in a machine to stopp his powerlevel. But a somebody talked to him.

Voice: Evil, You are the strongest creature. Wake up!!!!
Evil opened his eyes and broke the machine. Piccolo and the other guys were suprised.
Evil: AAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Piccolo: Thats impossible!!!!
Evil made a hole to the other dimension. He flew to his planet Mecura. In the other world came an alarm. Gohan, Vegeta, Trunks and Goten must bring Evil back.

Meanwhile Evil was finaly in his own planet. He went to the shrine to talk.
Evil: Why my power wasnt strong enough to beat him?
Shrine: Unlimited power isnt enough. You need the fullpower of darkness.
The shrine sent Evil dark power.
Evil: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
He was transforming. He became bigger and bigger. He was bigger than a Great Ape. A 10 meter big monster with red eyes, three horns, a tail with a snake head and some other thing. Evil changed to a real monster.
Evil: GRAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!

In all planets came many insects and ate the people and all other thing.

Evil: GRAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
Gohan and the other came to stopp Evil.
Vegeta: Evil, thats enough.
Evil: I am not Evil anymore. My name is Darkness. HAHAHHAHAHA!!!! HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
He fired with his hands a big fire wave to the Saiyan who dodged that.
Vegeta: Lets start it.
Vegeta, Trunks and Goten ate the transfomation Capsules and transformed again to SSJ4. Gohan transformed to a SSJ4, too.
Darkness: Fools you never can stopp me. HAAAAAAAAAAA!
He made more fire and the destert burns.
Vegeta: FINAL SHINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vegeta used his strongest attack but it didnt work.
Vegeta: WHAT?!!!!!!!
Darkness: You insects never beat me. HAAAAAAAAA!!
He punched Vegeta to a rock and he transformed back.
Gohan: VEGETA!!!!!!
Gohan dodged, after calling Vegeta, an other attack from Darkness.
The insects came to Vegeta and wanted to ate him. But somebody saved him.
Darkness: Who are you?
It was Goku who saved Vegeta again.
Vegata: Kaka...Kakarot.... are you realy here?
Goku: Vegeta, I will beat him along.
He took Vegeta to the ground and looked to Darkness.
Goku: Evil, I never know how much evil you are.
Darkness: I am Darkness. Evil doesnt exist anymore. I took my power from him back.
Goku: What? Are you the guy who gave him this power?
Darkness: Yes, I am. I am the creator from Evil. I was sealed in this shrine but not belong. Evil, his real name was Naru, came and broke my seal with his rage to the saiyans. As a present I gave him unlimited power but he didnt know to use it. He was beaten three time and that from the LSJs.
Goku: The LSJs?
Darkness: Yes, but now I am here to end his. I understand unlimited power wasnt enough.
Goku: What do you mean?
Darkness: The insect who ate all people and animals gave me power, too.
Goku: You absorb them.
Darkness: Right!!
Goku: I never forgive you. HAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
Goku transformed to a SSJ4 and fighted agains Darkness.
Meanwhile the Kaioshin who teleported to planet Mecura recover Vegeta.
Vegeta: AAAAAAAAAA!! I must help Kakarot.
The Kaioshin stopped him.
Kaioshin: Vegeta, give him that.
The Kaioshin gave Vegeta a powerball.
Vegeta: What is that?
Kaioshin: Thats the power to transform to a SSJ5. Give it Goku.
Vegeta: Ok!
Vegeta flew to Goku.

Can he give Goku the power before he was going to kill?

Halt!!! Vegeta would NEVER give that powerball to Goku no matter what even if fanfictions. He is a character we can't change except give transformations. If you change who Vegeta is then you simply destroyed a great character in the Dragonball World and this story would mainly be destroyed as well...

thats all my plan
you will see why I make it in the next episode
I think I made the episode to fast

22. Rivals and Friends

Last time on DBAF
Evil transformed to a big monster named Darkness. After Darkness reborn, in all galaxy came insect who ate the people. Gohan, Vegeta, Trunks and Goten losed agains him. Goku came to save them and fighted agains the more powerfull evil. The Kaioshin gave Vegeta for Goku a Powerball to transform again to a SSJ5. What will be happen?

Vegeta flew to Goku who was going to beaten by Darkness. Goten asked the Kaioshin meanwhile about the powerball.
Goten: How works this powerball?
Kaioshin: The powerball had the power of whole univers. Only a person with a good heart can use his power for himself. Vegeta isnt enough good to use it. I hope he doesnt do anything bad.
In the same time Goku couldnt make any reaktion.
Darkness: HAHAHAHA!!!
Goku: I th-think its over.
Vegeta, who came to the place, heard what Goku did say.
Vegeta: I real saiyan never say that.
Goku: Vegeta?
Vegeta: I am here to help you, Kakarot.
Darkness: HAHAHA!!! What can you weak insect do?
Vegeta: Here Kakarot, with this thing you can transform again.
Goku: Vegeta, What is that?
Vegeta: I dont know. The Kaioshin give me it.
Goku: Its a power like the Genkidama.
Darkness: What?
Goku absorbed the powerball and began to transform.
Darkness: Forget it! DARK FLAME!!!!!!
Darkness fired Goku with one of this strongest attacks but ...
Gohan: KAMEHAME-HAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
Gohan stopped the attack with his Kamehameha.
Darkness: NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Goku did transform to a SSJ5.
Vegeta: Now show me the strongest saiyan form Kakarot.
Goku flew to Darkness and punched him many times in this body.
Darkness: Ouch ouch AAA UUUUUuooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!
Vegeta: Finish him!!!!!
Goku: Here my Dragonfist.
Goku used his Dragonfist Attack and its looked like Darkness was beaten.
Darkness: The evil cant beaten. REPLAY!!!!!!!!
Darkness turned everything back. Goku returned his Dragonfist and the punch. He transformed back and Vegeta flew to the Kaioshin back with the powerball.
Now the same things happening but now Darkness knew it all.
Vegeta flew to Goku who was going to beaten by Darkness. Goten asked the Kaioshin meanwhile about the powerball.
Goten: How works this powerball?
Kaioshin: The powerball had the power of whole univers. Only a person with a good heart can use his power for himself. Vegeta isnt enough good to use it. I hope he doesnt do anything bad.
In the same time Goku couldnt make any reaktion.
Darkness: HAHAHA!!!
Goku: I th-think its over.
Darkness: Yes, and that not all.
Darkness who knew Vegeta comes now fired to Vegeta a Dark Flame attack.
Vegeta: AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
Vegeta was hit and fall down.
Goku: Ve...ve ..vegeta...

In the Kaioshin world
Kaioshin (15 G): Damn it. This monster returned the time back.
Bulma: You mean he rules the time.
Kaioshin: No but he can replay everything to stopp the destruction.

Meanwhile on planet Mercura Darkness became bigger and stronger.
Darkness: HAHAHA!!!! You fools! If you make break, I become stronger. I havent only unlimited power. I gains the power of everything from my little insect friend. They absorb the live from everybody.
Vegeta opened his eyes.
Vegeta: I am the one who beat Kakarot. Why I bring the powerball to him? I can use it, too.
The Kaioshin heard it.
Kaioshin: Vegeta, nooooooo!!!!!
Vegeta absorbed the powerball and change.
Vegeta: HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Trunks: FATHER!!!!!!!!!!
Darkness stopped attacking Goku and looked to Vegeta. He was suprised.
Darkness: Whats going on?
Vegeta: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!
Vegeta transformed to a SSJ4 and change this colour. His hair, tail and coat became silver.
Vegeta: HIAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
After a big explosion became Vegeta a SSJ5.
Darkness: NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
Vegeta: I am the prinz of all saiyan. I am the only one who beat Kakarot. NOT YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vegeta was so angree he flew to Darkness and punched him many times and fired a Final Shine.
Darkness: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
He flew to the the rocks. Vegeta flew to Goku to heal him.
Vegeta: Kakarot, I give you the half of my power.
Meanwhile Darkness waked up.
Darkness: I am unbeatable HAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
He fired to the spaca many beams and destroyed 10 planets.
Darkness: HAHAHAHHAA!!!!!! Huh?
Goku was alive and now a SSJ5, too.
Darkness: How you transform again?
Goku: You never understand friendship.
Darkness: I am the oldest creature. I am older than the Kaioshins. You never beat me. HAAAAAAAAAA
Darkness wanted to punch Vegeta and Goku but they dodged and punched him in his body.
Darkness: AAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
Vegeta: Lets fuse, Kakarot!
Goku: I knew you say that, Vegeta.
Vegeta and Goku: FUSION-HAAA!!!!!!
They fused to SSJ5 Gogeta.
Gogeta: I am the real LSJ and will beat you.
Darkness: What?! Forget it!!
From the ground came the tail, which looks like a snake, of Darkness and wanted to bite Gogeta. Gogeta could dodge and catched it. The catapult Darkness to the all.
Gogeta: Lets make our last shot to see who is the strongest.
Darkness: OK. DARK FLAME!!!!!!!!!
Gogeta: FINAL KAMEHAME-HA!!!!!!!!!
The attack crushed another but Gogeta*s was stronger and won.
Darkness: Thats impossible!!!!!
They beated finaly Darkness.

In all planets wasnt any insect who absorbed people anymore.
The peace returned back.

Vegeta and Goku returned back to normal and wanted to fight.
Vegeta: Lets get start it.
Goku: Ok Vegeta.
In the all recover something itself.

Its that Darkness? Lets see in an other episode of DBAF.

23. One last wish

Last time on DBAF
The shrine fused with Evil and became Darkness. It was a very powerfull monster who absorbed power from everywhere and became stronger and stronger. Thanks Vegeta could Goku transform agains to a SSJ5 but Darkness had the power to return the time and beated Vegeta before he gave the power Goku. Vegeta used now the power to transform himself to a SSJ5. Thank the fusion of Vegeta and Goku, was Darkness beaten. Goku and Vegeta were now in the space for the final battle.

The Kaioshin teleported Gohan, Goten and Trunks to save them to the Kaioshin world.
Gohan: Whats going on, Kaioshin?
Kaioshin: After Darkness death came a time-space explosion. You are saved but your father´s are now in the ghost world.
Goten: Whats the ghost world?
Kaioshin (15 G): I will tell you. Its a dimension which you cant come back.
Trunks: What? Thats means....
Kaioshin: Goku and Vegeta are forever gone.

Meanwhile in the ghost world over planet Mecura. Vegeta challenged Goku for the final battle.
Vegeta: Are you ready, Kakarot?
Goku: I am ready if you are.
Vegeta: Than lets go.
They wanted to fight but they stopped because they fell a new evil power. Something recover itself.
Vegeta: Whats that?
It was Evil. He was back to revenge.
Evil: Thx for save me. The shrine made me pure evil.
Goku: You are pure evil. Thats your name.
Evil: Now I kill you. HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
Evil focused all his power.
Vegeta: We must stopp him.
Goku: No, Vegeta.
Vegeta: What?!
Goku: Look!
Evil*s power was now in his max modus.
Evil: Whats going on? Why I cant transform and why my power didnt become stronger?
Goku: We are in the ghost world. In this place nobody can chance his form and you lost the abilitie to become stronger. It was Darkness who made you stronger and stronger.
Evil: Grrrrr. I have enough power to beat you two.
Evil flew to Vegeta and Goku who dodged his first attack.
Vegeta: We have no chance if we cant transform.
Goku: We did beat more difficult opponent. He isnt a problem.
Evil used a Kamehameha and hit Goku and Vegeta.
Evil: Why you arent death?
Goku: In the ghost world can nobody die.
Evil: What?
Vegeta: But we cant beat him, too.
Evil: Damn it. I hate you saiyans.
Goku: You never beat us. KAMEHAME-HA!!!!!
Vegeta: THATS MY FINAL FLASH!!!!!!!!!!
Goku and Vegeta attacked Evil with their one of the most powerfull attacks.
Evil: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
Its looked like Evil lost the fight.
Vegeta: We did it.
Evil: Damn it.
Goku: He didnt lost.
Evil: I will kill you ones for all. AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
Evil wanted to attack Vegeta but a little dog protect him.
Vegeta: Whats going on? Why did Evil stopp his attack?
Evil: Thats my dog.
Every Mecurians were in the ghost world and Evil*s brother, too.
Evil*s brother: Little brother....
Evil: Big brother? Are you realy here?
Evil*s brother: Yes, lets come home.
The darkness in Evil*s body came out.
Goku: Thats the real Evil.
Evil: I will kill you all.
Vegeta: We will see. Big Bang Attack!
Goku: Kamehame-ha!
The attacks hit Evil in this face.
Evil: NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!
Goku and Vegeta did finaly defeated Evil and the Mecurians are lucky for the peace.
Old Evil: Sry, for this. I know not everyone is evil. Thanks for teaching me.
Evil*s brother: We send you back to the real world if you want.
Goku looked first to Vegeta and then to Evil*s brother back.
Goku: Can you bring us in a dimension without live.
Evil*s brother: Sure.

Goku and Vegeta teleported to an other dimesion and looked now for live.
Vegeta: Very well place.
Goku: The perfect battle field for us battle. What do you think?
Vegeta: I think lets fight.
Goku and Vegeta fighted now.

Who will win?

Dragonball AF movie 1

Its started after the Kaioshin of 15 Generation fused with the witch.
The story begin of a desert planet but with many oases. The name of the planet is Mecura. The people lived in peace but one day came three space capsules to Mecura. From the capsules came three saiyans who were rebels. They killed the people of Mecura. One boy ran from they away but one of the saiyans found him.
1. Saiyan: Where are you going?
Boy: AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!
Somebody punched the saiyan and the saiyan fall to ground. The other saiyans came to help him.
2. Saiyan: Are you ok?
1. Saiyan: Yes, I am alright-
Boy: BROTHER!!!!
It was the big brother from the boy who ran away from the saiyans.
Big Bro: Save yourself. I will fight along agains them.
Boy: But big bro.
Big Bro: What did I say?
Boy: OK....ok!!!!!!
The boy ran with his dog to one of the pyramids and saved himself. The brother wanted to fight along agains the three saiyans.
3. Saiyan: Somebody wanted to play the hero.
Big bro: Why you kill everybody.
1. Saiyan: We are rebel. We kill for fun.
Big bro: How dear you? AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
The big bro fighted now agains the three saiyans. He was strong but the three saiyans were much stronger. After minutes they killed him, too.
Meanwhile the boy heard it and cried.
Boy: Why? Why somebody do this?
Voice: Thats the saiyans. They killed your friend, your family and everyone who lived in this planet without you.
Boy: Where are you? Show yourself.
Voice: I am the shrine.
Boy: What? The shrine?
Shrine: Yes, I am. You are the last Mercurian on this planet. You must revenge them.
Boy: But how can I beat them?
Shrine: With the power of darkness. AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
From the shrine came a fog in the boy*s body and change him.
Boy: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
Dog: WUF WUF.....!!!
The boy*s clothes gone, his body became silver, he had golden hair, wings and a tail.
Shrine: Thats the new power. Your are now the ultimate warrior. You name is EVIL!
Dog: WUF WUF ....!
The boy who was Evil now looked to his dog. The dog looked lucky back but Evil killed him with a Beam.
Dog: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Evil: I dont need you anymore.
He flew from the shrine and showed all his power.
Shrine: Go Evil. Flew and kill all saiyans. You are the strongers and become everytime stronger. Nobody can stopp you. HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!


The First Legendary Super Saiyan

After this happening was 15 years over. Three other saiyans became great apes and destroyed some rocks. After the full moon they transformed back to normal. One of the saiyans looked just like Trunks as a SSJ but with black normal saiyan hairs like Vegeta. His name was Tornado because he destroyed something and flew like the flash. He went with his friends to fight with powerfull opponent or train in an other planet.
Tornado: It was a good full moon today. I forget the time on our planet Saiyanius was the last moon.
(In this time the saiyans didnt lived on planet Vegeta. Its came many years later)
1. Friend: Yes, the full moon make us saiyans 10 times stronger and more dangarous.
2. Friend: We are the strongest rage. We dont need to transform. Nobody can stopp us.
After his talking came Evil from the dust. He was now accrue.
1. Friend: Who are you?
Evil: You are saiyans, right?
2. Friend: Did you hear him? He asked something AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
Evil punched him and the saiyan fall to ground. The other saiyans ran to the friend.
Tornado: Are you alright?
2. Friend: Yes, but he is very strong.
Tornado: We will see.
Evil waited for the battle. Tornado attacked him but Evil dodged and hit him with his tail.
Tornado: Guys, I need you help.
Evil wanted to attack Tornado but the other saiyans protected him and fired with many Beams. And Tornado used his finisher to beat him one for all.
1. Friend: I think thats over.
2. Friend: Nobody can strand Tornados Finish Buster.
But Evil wasnt hurt. The saiyans were suprised.
Tornado: What? My finisher? It didnt work?
1. Friend: Thats enought AAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Evil killed him with a beam.
2. Friend: What? Thats a monster.
Tornado was going to become angreer.
2. Friend: DIE!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He attacked Evil but Evil dodged him and killed him with his claw.
Tornado: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
Evil: Whats going on?
Tornado became a golden warrior. He looked like future Trunks as a SSJ.
Tornado: GRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Tornado used his new power and punched many times Evil but his power wasnt strong enough to beat him. Evil became angree and wanted to destroy the whole planet.
Tornado: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
Evil: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
He used an explosionwave for it. But somebody teleported to the planet and saved Tornado. The planet was now destroyed and Evil flew to find more saiyans.

Meanwhile Tornado waked up. He was now in an other planet.
Tornado: Where am I?
Voice: Wont you thank for save your live?
Tornado: Who are you?
It was the Kaioshin of 15 Genaration. In this time were other Kaioshins here. An other west, north, south and east Kaioshin.
Kaioshin (15 G): Its the same thing with you young guys. We are Kaioshins the highest godness.
Tornado: A godness? I never see a godness. Huh?
Tornado remember himself to beat Evil.
Tornado: Where is this guy?
Kaioshin (west): He is gone. You are in another planet. We saved your live.
Tornado: I must back. I must kill him.
Kaioshin: This monsters power is unlimited. You cant beat him.
Tornado: Unlimited?
Kaioshin: Yes, you cant beat him. He go now to your home to kill the other saiyans.
Tornado: I must stopp him. I cant wait.
Kaioshin (15 G): You have a big power for a normal saiyan and I mean you last transformation not the great ape.
Tornado: I dont know what it is.
Kaioshin: You can use a name for it. I can help you to control the power.
Tornado: Realy?

Meanwhile on planet Saiyanius the saiyans lived in peace but the evil Evil came and killed every saiyan who he was in this way.

Tornado knew it. He heard the voices to the Kaioshin planet.
Tornado: I cant wait anymore. I must go.
Kaioshin (15 G): Its not over but I understand your rage.
Kaioshin (north): Here.
He gave Tornado a sword.
Tornado: I dont need this.
Kaioshin (north): Its for luck. I hope you can save you race.
Tornado: Thank you. I never forget you.
Kaioshin (west): I bring you back.
Tornado touched his shoulder and the Kaioshin teleported with him to his home planet.

Evil had kill many saiyans.
Evil: HAHAHAHHA!!!!!!
Tornado: STOPP IT!
Evil: HAHAH! Huh?
He looked to Tornado who did punch in his face. The punch didnt hurt Evil.
Tornado: Damn it. He is stronger than I tought.
The saiyans from his planet watched the fight. Tornado was going to lose but he countered he attacks after his transformation.
Evil: Damn it. Why you can transfrom to it?
Every saiyans were suprised about Tornados transformation.
Tornado: I am a Super Saiyan.
Evil: What? A SSJ?
He punched Evil many times and its looked like he could win.
The saiyans: He is a Super Saiyan. What a cool name and look.
But thats not for a long time because Evil became again stronger.
Evil: You never beat me. AAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Tornado: AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!AAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!AAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Evil kicked the many times Tornado who couldnt fight anymore. Every saiyans losed this hope but somebody kicked Evil in his face and Evil fall into a rock. It was the west Kaioshin.
Tornado: Ka...ka...kaioshin?
Kaioshin: I will recover you.
Tornado had his power again and the other Kaioshins came for help.
Evil: You are the Kaioshins, right?
Kaioshin: Right, we are here to stopp your terror.
Evil: HAHAHAHHA!!!!!!!!
Kaioshin: Saiyans, you must send all power to Tornado. AAAAAAA!!!!!!
Evil did punch the Kaioshin.
Kaioshin: We stopp him as long as possible. AAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Evil killed first the east Kaioshin and wanted to kill more.
Meanwhile the saiyans gave all power to Tornado who focused the power. Evil did kill the north Kaioshin. Tornado though * I will revenge you Kaioshins.
Evil killed the south Kaioshin and flew to Tornado. Tornado transformed again and Evil wanted to stopp him but the west Kaioshin used his last power to kill him.
Kaioshin: I will going to die with you. AAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
He exploded but Evil wasnt die.
Tornado became a new saiyan with blue hair and had a grain in his face.
Tornado: I am the Legendary Super Saiyan!!!!!!!!!!
All saiyans were suprised the legend was born and was going to the books. But first he must beat him.
Evil: My power is unlimited.
Tornado: I will never forgive you. AAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
Evil: What? His power is unlimited, too.
Tornado used the sword from the Kaioshin and cut Evil to 1000 pieces. But Evil recover himself.
Evil: You cant kill me. HAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
Tornado: We will see. HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!
They punched in the same time and the shockwaves made an earthquake. The planet was going to explode. All saiyans went to their capsules and flew without Tornado and another saiyan.
Tornado: Here take my sword to remember.
Saiyan: We never forget you Legendary Super Saiyan.
Evil wanted to kill the saiyan but Tornado stopped him.
Tornado: Hurry up. The planet going to explode.
The saiyan flew with the other saiyan from the planet.
Evil: You cant beat me.
Tornado: Yes but I can stopp you to kill more life. HAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tornado catched Evil, flew with him to the space and exploded. They flew to the ost galaxy and its destroyed.

Tornado died for save this race. The first Legendary Super Saiyan we will never forget you.

Dragonball AF movie 2

The story starts 1000 years after the fight agains Evil and Tornado. The saiyans who lost their planet lived now on planet Plant with the tsufurujins. The sword from the LSJ was in a rock. The tsufurujins were genius and helped the saiyans with their problems. The saiyans lived now in houses but their food came from the animals who was hunted by the saiyans. The tsufurujins made their food themself and didnt needed search and kill the animals. A man told the kids the story about the legendary Super Saiyan who saved them all and brought the peace back.

Meanwhile came a Meteor to planet Mercura. From the hole which made by the meteor came Evil. He went with his last power to the shrine.
Evil: Damn it. Why thats happening?
Shrine: Thats because the Kaioshin made him stronger.
Evil: I did kill them all.
Shrine: Yes, but not the Kaioshin for 15 Generation.

The Legend of Potato


The tsufurujins worked on a special machines named scouter. Its helped to know how strong somebody is.
In an other planet worked the tsufurujins for a new weapon.
Worker: For what is that?
Profesor: The monster who destroyed the planet of the saiyans can come to our, too. This new creature will help you to beat him.
Worker: It was 1000 years ago. Do you realy think he lifed?

But he was right. In the planet of Kaioshin read the old Kaioshin some porn.
Kaioshin: HAHAHA! Thats great. Huh?
The Kaioshin heard something.
Kaioshin: Who are you? Show yourself.
It was Evil who came back.
Kaioshin: What? How you came here?
Evil: With my teleport technique.
Kaioshin: Thats impossible.
Evil cast a sword to the ground and used all his power.
Evil: HAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! I will seal you forever and you cant never give more power.
Kaioshin: NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
The Kaioshin was now seal and the power destroyed the place.
Evil: You are forever sealed in this Z-Sword and nobody will find you. HAHAHAHHA!!!!
Evil teleported to an other place and search the saiyans.

A man looked like Raditz but a bit other face sat on his sofa. He heard something and opened the door. Somebody brought his son back to home. It was his friend Tairo.
Tairo: You must control your son. He did hit all neighbour kids agains.
Man: I show him. Thanks for telling.
Tairo: Here.
Tairo went home and the man (his name was Gherkin) talked with this son Potato. Potato looked like Gohan as he was a teen. But other clothes and a charakter like bad boy.
Gherkin: Potato, how many times I told you?
Potato: You dont know whats happening, dad. They called me punk and some other thing.
Gherkin: You never change yourself. Go in your room. You has house arrest.
Potato went to his room and sat to his bed.
Meanwhile looked Gherkin to the mirror and saw his grain.

Remembering
Its was a long time ago. Potato leared to went and fall to ground. He thought he never can go. His rage transformed to a SSJ and the power cut the face from his father.

Gherkin thought * I never told my friend about his. If somebody now it, the tsufurujins used him for their experiments.
He went to his friend. Everyone thought he is the strongest. In this time nobody was he saiyan king. Its came after the revolution.

Potato found everything boring. He hated not to show his power but he understood his father. He flew from his room to make trouble.

Gherkin saw his friend and talked with them but a beam killed his friends.
Gherkin: No, who made this?
It was Evil who destroyed the planet of all saiyans.
Evil: I finaly found you saiyans. This time nobody can transform to a SSJ.
Gherkin: You did destroy our planet? I will beat you.
Everyone were in panic and run away. The tsufurujins knew his power. The powerlever of the scouter showed the unlimited power. It was strong enought to destroy the scouter.
On the other planet the tsufurujins tested the new creature before they used agains Evil. The name of the creature was Metamorph. He was out of control and he wasnt strong enough.
Profesor: We lost. Only a wonder can help us.

On planet Plant fighted Gherkin along agains Evil but he hadnt a ghost of a chance.
Evil: Now DIE!!!!!!
Evil wanted to us the final attack but somebody kicked him in his face and Evil fall to the ground. It was Potato who saved his father.
Gherkin: Potato, are you realy here?
Potato: You didnt think I am here to help you. I kill fight with a strong opponent.
Gherkin: You can made with him what ever you want. He was the one who destroyed our planet. I dont know how he didnt die by the battle with the LSJ.
Potato: Thats interesting. I will kill him.
A man: What can you kid do again him.
Potato: Shut up. I am not interested about your argument. Come on lets fight, monster-reptile-dragon or something.
Evil: MY NAME IS EVIL!!!!!!!!! HAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!
Evil became angree and attacked Potato. Potato dodged the first attacks of Evil.
Everyone: What a speed and power.
The punch of Potato hit Evil very bad but Evil didnt give up and hit him with his tail.
Gherkin: Use your true power. Thats the only way.
Potato: What? My true power?
Gherkin: I knew what I had say to you but we need your help.
Potato: Then. HAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
Potato transformed to a SSJ and everyone were shocked.
Evil: NO, THE SUPER SAIYAN!!!!!
Potato: Right and your end.
Potato*s power was amazing and its looked like he could win but Evil*s power became stronger and stronger. He beat Potato who was on the ground. He could move anymore.
Evil: Now the finisher. DIE!!!!!!!
He wanted to kill him but ...
Gherkin: Nobody tought my son. AAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
He punched Evil in his face but nothing happening without the rage of Evil. He looked to Gherkin and fired a beam.
Gherkin: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!
He was now on the ground to but of the other side. Potato stood up and asked his father.
Potato: Why you do that?
Gherkin: You are my son. I must save you.
With the final beam killed Evil now Gherkin.
Potato: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD!!!!!!!!
Evil: Who is next?
Potato became angree.
Potato: He was the only one who loved me. YOU WILL PAY FOR IT?!!!!!!!!!! HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Potato*s aura became stronger and blonder. He transformed to a SSJ2.
Evil: Whats going on? Another transformation?
Potato: Thats my full power. HAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
He punched Evil who flew to a house and destroyed. They flew to each other and fighted for who is the strongest. Evil punched Potato to the ground, Potato stopped with his feet, Evil flew to him, Potato who didnt saw him kicked him and teleported to him. Potato used all his power to kill Evil.
Potato: Thats for my father. DIE!!!!!!
He fired a beam like a Kamehameha. Everyone thought he beat him but Evil didnt die. He beated Potato who was now on the ground.
Potato: Ff..Fa..Father....I am sorry....I gave my best.
He was aswoon now.
Evil: HAHHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!! Now I kill you.
He punched Potato but Potato stopped with new power his attack.
Evil: How you get this power? Huh?
All saiyans sent Potato their power.
Evil: DIE!!!!!!
He fired a beam to Potato but it didnt work.
Evil: NO, NOT AGAIN!!!!!!!
Potato transformed to the LSJ with blue hair, with a grain and his top force was break. He was now a new person.
Potato: I will beat you. ONE FOR ALL!!!!! HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!
He punched him to the air and kicked him many times.
A saiyan: Look out. Last time he destroyed our planet.
Potato flew as soon as possible and used the sword from the first LSJ to beat him. He flew to Evil who laughted about this.
Evil: What would you do with this? I can recover myself.
Potato used all his power and sealed Evil.
Evil: NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!
After that Potato cast him to his planet back who nobody can save him.
Everyone were lucky but the battle had a price. Potato losed his body and was a ghost now.
Saiyan: Whats going on?
Potato: I lost my body.
Saiyan: Why did you do it.
Potato: I will born with a new body and beat him in another day once for all.
He became an energy ball and flew to the future.

In the future got Chichi and Goku a kid named Gohan. He has his power and soul from Potato. A new saiyan who borned on the earth.

THE END

This and my Dragonball JR fanfic will be completely rewritten.

I really was a noob in grammar back then and still lack at detailing my stories. But this time it will be better.