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Title: Dragon Ball ZGT


vegataSSJ6 - March 21, 2008 01:54 AM (GMT)
Season 1
Area 61 Saga
Chapter 1
It's been 10000 years from when Goku beat Shenron. Today,The sayin race has expanded greatly and now,1 million sayins expand all over the world protecting but,in this story only some will be in it. Kevin:Ugh boring schoolwork it want it to be night already. Ms.Carmel(this is a last-minute name):Kevin, i thought i told you to be quiet. Kevin:Ok Ms.Carmel. Kevin wispers to Taylor and Tiffany: No really,when is it going to be night? Taylor and Tiffany:A couple more hours ok Kevin? Kevin:Okay already sheesh. Ms.Carmel:Ok class, today we will be going to space station 77. Now everyone go into the bus. Everyone:ok Ms.Carmel. A couple minutes later.... Ms.Carmel:Ok class, were here.(Everone looks at example)Kevin:OH GOD!!!!!!!!!!. Ms.Carmel:Ok who's first? No one raised their hand. Ms.Carmel:Ok i pick..... Kevin. Kevin was terrified to go. Oh BTW the person was getting his legs cut off. Kevin:No! Ms.Carmel:Yes! Kevin:No!! AHHHHHHH!!!!!!! (Kevin goes SSJ!!) Ms.Carmel:Go NOW!!!! Kevin:Fine. But they used fake legs. Kevin:OH THANK GOD!!!! A couple minutes later.... Ms.Carmel:Ok time to go class. Kevin, Tiffany, and Taylor:Oh thank god!! We were scared to death!!! When back, it was free time so Kevin used his free time for training.(luckly, there was a couple dozen fighting dummies and some people willing to fight. Kevin choose the people first.)Ok first round,Kevin SSJ Vs Triton SSJ. Kevin:Im ready. Come and get me!!! Triton:Die!!! Punch,Kick,counter attack,punch combo,kick combo and to top it off, a kamehameha all from Kevin's side. Kevin:I told you,id beat you!! Triton:Oh Kevin, its not over let. Ka.... Kevin:Ok i'll play your game. Ka....... Triton:Me.... Kevin:Me.... Triton:Ha....Me..... Kevin:Ha......Me..... Kevin and Triton:Ha!!! X5!!!! Its a intence fight only one will win. Huh? A burst from Kevin's side!!! WTF!?!?!?!?!? Kevin:Just kidding, Times 10!!! WOOSH!!!! A big dust cloud appears. Who won? Tiffany and Taylor:Hey guys, Kevin won!! Everybody but Kevin and Triton:YAY KEVIN!!! HOW DID YOU WIN!!! ARE YOU REALLY SSJ2??? Everyone was silent from that. Kevin:Maybe. Maybe for a second there. Fighton:AAG!! IM NOT GONNA FIGHT YOU!!! Kevin:Now what am i gonna do? Oh well... I guess i'll just rest. So he slept that whole rest of free time. There were no bells so he slept through the rest of most of the day. Ms.Carmel:OOH KEVIN!!!!! (goes over and kicks Kevin) Kevin:What the hell was that for??? Ms.Carmel:You were sleeping through most of the rest of the day!!! Well, in Kevin's dream he became a little more wreckless. Kevin:Yea Whatever.... Ms.Carmel:Ok you homework assignments are pages 667-687 in your math jornal and Kevin,dont put 1 for all the questions just because its a full moon tonight. Kevin:Ok Ms.Carmel. Tiffany and Talyor wispers to Kevin:So now are you going to study like the rest of us? Kevin wispers back:Nah. Im just gonna put 2 for every question. So he did and he got an D-.



Next time on DBZGT!!!
Ms.Carmel:Midnight Tonight!

What will happen? Find out next time on DBZGT!!!
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So what do you think of it so far?

Hamachi - March 21, 2008 02:29 PM (GMT)
Well I do have to say this can u think up with some anime names and not americian.

Also it looks good so far. Just think up of Japanese names. So it looks like a Dragonball (Z,GT) fanfic and not something u typed up on mirosoft word. 'Kay. Also if ya need help ask around other users (people) will be glad to help u.

SSJ4Bardock - March 21, 2008 03:04 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Hamachi @ Mar 21 2008, 02:29 PM)
Well I do have to say this can u think up with some anime names and not americian.

Also it looks good so far. Just think up of Japanese names. So it looks like a Dragonball (Z,GT) fanfic and not something u typed up on mirosoft word. 'Kay. Also if ya need help ask around other users (people) will be glad to help u.

I was about to talk to you about that. Japanese names... err are like they DON'T fit in with Dragonball. Excpet for the Characters that were originally there already, you could see most of them are NOT Japanese. So yeah, the names you use and all don't really fit in IMO. But well you can't force anyon to change the names or use anything they don't like. Its their rights and freedom.

Hamachi - March 21, 2008 03:13 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (SSJ4Bardock @ Mar 21 2008, 03:04 PM)
QUOTE (Hamachi @ Mar 21 2008, 02:29 PM)
Well I do have to say this can u think up with some anime names and not americian.

Also it looks good so far. Just think up of Japanese names. So it looks like a Dragonball (Z,GT) fanfic and not something u typed up on mirosoft word. 'Kay. Also if ya need help ask around other users (people) will be glad to help u.

I was about to talk to you about that. Japanese names... err are like they DON'T fit in with Dragonball. Excpet for the Characters that were originally there already, you could see most of them are NOT Japanese. So yeah, the names you use and all don't really fit in IMO. But well you can't force anyon to change the names or use anything they don't like. Its their rights and freedom.

TRUE! Just trying to help. ^^;


But that's why most Anime Shows suck

because of Americain names (Like one show not going to mention that has been running for 10 years 1997-2008).


But anyway just trying to help ^^; ^^; ^^;


Also explain what happened in those copule of minutes ^^; ^^; ^^;



Gota - March 21, 2008 03:49 PM (GMT)
IMO its not great

why would he turn ssj that is just imposable he doesnt have enough exp and i agree with them about the Names but like Rage would probably say ,"Its his fanfic let him / her do what they want."

Hamachi - March 21, 2008 03:50 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Gota @ Mar 21 2008, 03:49 PM)
IMO its not great

why would he turn ssj that is just imposable he doesnt have enough exp and i agree with them about the Names but like Rage would probably say ,"Its his fanfic let him / her do what they want."

I agree with u Gota :ok: :sure:

vegataSSJ6 - April 18, 2008 11:19 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Hamachi @ Mar 21 2008, 10:50 AM)
QUOTE (Gota @ Mar 21 2008, 03:49 PM)
IMO its not great

why would he turn ssj that is just imposable he doesnt have enough exp and i agree with them about the Names but like Rage would probably say ,"Its his fanfic let him / her do what they want."

I agree with u Gota :ok: :sure:

To awnser all your questions,no its not perfect and to awnser another,Kevin's power level,he is a sayin isn't he?He is.And you know what that means.His power level is extremely high.Here's a preview of his power.

Kevin's in the first saga:(The one you read)842532

Kevin's power in SSJ form:1375957

As you can see it's pretty high.So don't underestamate the power of Kevin!
Note:This is my fanfic not yours.

dbzsupertrunks12 - April 18, 2008 11:41 AM (GMT)
So in SSJ his power level is just over 1 million? That isn't enough to beat Frieza, seeing as is second form is over a million. -_- So that isn't even as high as Goku's first transformation into SSJ.

AsianSaiyan - April 19, 2008 12:39 PM (GMT)
Is the Kevin super saiyan as he ist rubbisch.

I hated it. Je deteste le Kevin man. Keep it up.




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