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Title: Dragonball : The Tuffles reign
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dbzsupertrunks12 - February 5, 2008 07:16 PM (GMT)
Meh, I got bored, and decided to make a fanfic.

Chapter 1 : Mysterious new arrival

The time machine landed with a crash. It seemed that there was no-one in the vehicle, as no other sound was heard. Suddenly the large door of the time machine slammed down onto the planets surface, footsteps were heard, and what seemed like a human stepped out. Of course, this was no ordinary human, in fact, this wasn’t a human at all. He sighed.

“So this is my home planet,” the person thought, “It’s not really worth the trouble of saving, but...”

He took a few more steps forward, and paused. “Oh,” he said,” so you came also. You won’t stop me Vegeta.”

The Saiyan Prince descended from the skies, “Okay punk, so who exactly are you, stealing Bulma’s time machine, and even modifying it to travel through planets.” He said, “My, my, quite the genius aren’t we... TUFFLE?!?”

“You never were the sharpest tool in the box Vegeta, but you aren’t bad, considering you figured out what I was and managed to stow aboard the time machine without me knowing,” he paused and suddenly stopped smiling, “but this is as far as you get, Princey.”

Vegeta stepped forward. “What are you trying to do Kid? You know you can’t defeat me,” He sighed, “but, you’re free to try...”

The tuffle removed the fur cloak around his body to reveal metal-plated saiyan armour underneath it. He then took his stance.

Vegeta smiled, but just stood there as if to mock him. “Your move, Punk.” He beckoned for the tuffle to come forward. The Tuffle flew forward, suddenly he teleported in mid-air. Vegeta was taken by surprise and barely dodged the beam that the Tuffle sent towards him.

“I’m gonna finish this real quick, Vegeta.” He said coolly. Reaching behind him, the Tuffle removed what seemed like a Katana from his back. He smirked, “I call him Kakuzo.”

The tuffle dashed towards Vegeta, slashing at him wildy, Vegeta dodged with ease, slapping the sword from the Tuffle’s hand and shattering it. The Tuffle just kept smiling, and held his hand out, suddenly, Kakuzo appeared again.

“What’s with that sword?” asked Vegeta.

“Oh, did I not mention, everytime Kakuzo is destroyed, I can bring him back a lot stronger than the original. This is his 15th transformation, which means he is now the strength of my strongest punch.”

Vegeta cackled. “Well, I have nothing to worry about then.”

“We’ll see,” said the Tuffle, placing Kakuzo in his sheath.

This time, Vegeta moved first, only to find the Tuffle behind his back. Vegeta snarled, and unleashed a series of punches in the Tuffle’s direction, none hitting. The Tuffle then attacked, planting his fist in Vegeta’s stomach, forcing him to cough up blood.

“UNLEASH THE TIGER!!!” the Tuffle screamed. Suddenly, in the eyes of Vegeta, it seemed the Tuffle was everywhere.

Vegeta heard multiple voices, “Is something wrong down there, Princey?” the Tuffle dived forward, using his legs to unleash many attacks on Vegeta, eventually slamming him through the ground.

Vegeta got up, barely able to move. “What the hell was that?” He questioned.

“My Signature move, Unleash The Tiger.” The Tuffle answered.

Vegeta limped towards the Tuffle, “Who are you? And why are you here, On planet Plant?”

Who is this Tuffle? And why is he on Planet Plant? Find out on the next edition of “Dragonball : The Tuffle’s Reign”.



What do you think?

Ashter Yuki - February 5, 2008 08:35 PM (GMT)
nice :D

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 5, 2008 08:49 PM (GMT)
Thanks,

Chapter 2 : The Saiyan Prince Unleashed

In the last edition of “Dragonball : The Tuffle’s Reign”, a strange Tuffle landed on the Planet Plant, followed by Vegeta. The Tuffle made short work of Vegeta, but the Saiyan Prince, wasn’t going down just yet. Just who is this mysterious character, and what does he want?

“Who am I? You’re in no position to demand personal information from me.” Said the Tuffle.

Vegeta smiled, “Oh well, I tried Kid, but the Saiyan Prince does never forgive!” A burst of light appeared, and Vegeta’s hair was now a shining gold. “I suppose you know about the Super Saiyan transformation, Kid?”

The Tuffles eyes widened. “Yes! I’ve been waiting for this!” He yelled.

“I wouldn’t get so excited if I were you. Gyariku Ho!” Suddenly a large purple beam shot from Vegeta’s palms. The Tuffle seemed determined not to move and when he had the chance, slapped Vegeta’s blast aside.

“You’re right, I shouldn’t get excited, you’re nothing. Saiyan Prince.” He sighed, “Time to end your life...”

“No... it isn’t possible, A lowly Tuffle such as you can’t block my Gyariku Ho...” Vegeta’s eyes widened. “Unless...”

“Speak up or die Vegeta.”

“Are you somehow related to the Tuffle Bebi, I mean it can’t be possible but-"

“Yes. Your intuition isn’t bad. I am the grandson of the great Bebi. I wouldn’t have minded getting revenge on you for that, and luckily, I now have the chance.”

“No... I must know, what is your name?”

“My name is Yutaka... why do you ask, It will not matter.”

“Because I love to know the names of the people I kill.”

“But you’ve reached your limit, how?”

“Like this... HRAAAAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHH!!!!!!” The golden aura around Vegeta began to widen.

“What the hell... is this?” Yutaka screamed.

Vegeta stood before Yutaka, covered in red fur, with long black hair. “This, my Tuffle friend, is known as the Super Saiyan 4.”

Yutaka’s eyes widened with fear, he couldn’t speak, he couldn’t attack, he knew Vegeta’s strength was beyond him at the moment.

“It’s alright to feel fear,” Vegeta joked, “But before I kill you, what are your intentions?"

What are the Mysterious Yutaka’s intentions? And will Vegeta beat him, or does the Tuffle have a trick up his sleeve? Find out on the next exciting edition of “Dragonball : The Tuffle’s Reign”.

SSJ4Bardock - February 6, 2008 10:24 AM (GMT)
Heres some of my guessings again LOL! I'm thinking this tuffle dude will posses Vegeta like Baby did and he will take over Planet Plant!

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 6, 2008 04:31 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (SSJ4Bardock @ Feb 6 2008, 10:24 AM)
Heres some of my guessings again LOL! I'm thinking this tuffle dude will posses Vegeta like Baby did and he will take over Planet Plant!

Nope, I'm not gonna spoil it but He doesn't take over Vegeta or Planet Plant.

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 6, 2008 05:05 PM (GMT)
Chapter 3 : Goodnight, sweet Prince

In the last edition of “Dragonball : The Tuffle’s Reign” the Tuffle, who revealed himself as Yutaka, blocked Vegeta’s Gyariku Ho with no trouble at all. However, now that Vegeta has transformed into a Super Saiyan 4, is this the end for the mysterious Yutaka?

“My intentions, are not to be revealed to the likes of you, Vegeta.” Yutaka explained.

“Look Kid, you’re going to die, so just give it up already.” Vegeta’s face darkened, “Tell me.”

Yutaka sighed. “Oh well, but once I tell you, I must kill you.”

“Okay Kid, cut the crap and tell me.”

“I have come to Planet Plant for a reason.”

“To conquer it?” asked Vegeta
.
“No fool, to stop the oncoming Saiyan invasion.”

Vegeta’s eyes widened. “You’re trying to change history?”

“No. I will change history.”

“Oh, and I suppose you’re going to defeat me?”

“No, I’ll kill you, and make sure not even a trace of your body remains.”

Vegeta laughed. “You’re mad in the head, kid.”

“We’ll see, Saiyan Prince, now take your stance.”

Vegeta refused to even stop folding his arms and Yutaka flew towards him. Using a variety of kicks and punches and even swings with his sword Kakuzo, Vegeta looked as though he was being pushed back. Until suddenly Vegeta stopped dodging his attacks, and went on the offence, breaking Kakuzo again and causing serious damage to Yutaka’s left arm. Vegeta kept on, pounding away until he was bored and finally threw Yutaka to the ground.

“You’re no fun, honestly.” Vegeta joked.

“Vegeta, you Saiyan scum, why do you force me to kill you?” asked Yutaka.

“Oh come on, you’re in no position to make jokes, are you?”

Yutaka stood up and grinned. “Did you know, the legend of the Super Saiyan originated from tuffles?”

Vegeta looked surprised. “Even so, nothing like that ever happened.”

“Oh?” Yutaka began to power up. The ground below him began to shake and crack. An orange aura appeared around him, which darkened to red. Yutaka’s power level kept on rising. His hair began to flash red. He stopped.

Vegeta’s eyes widened with fear, blood began to trickle down his chest. He looked down at his chest. Yutaka’s hand was through it.

“It’s over, Saiyan Prince,” he explained, “I am a Super Tuffle.”

What Is this Mysterious Tuffle transformation? And what will happen to Vegeta? Find out on the next edition of "Dragonball : The Tuffle's Reign".

Ashter Yuki - February 6, 2008 05:47 PM (GMT)
I like how he transforms!Very nice
^_^

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 6, 2008 05:53 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Ashter Yuki @ Feb 6 2008, 05:47 PM)
I like how he transforms!Very nice
^_^

There's more to come, mostly from Bardock.

Ashter Yuki - February 6, 2008 05:58 PM (GMT)
Sweet

SSJ4Bardock - February 7, 2008 08:35 AM (GMT)
Oh cool! More form Bardock? Can't waitzzzz!!

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 7, 2008 06:54 PM (GMT)
Chapter 4 : Stopping The Saiyans

In the last edition of “Dragonball : The Tuffles Reign”, It seemed like the end for the evil, mysterious Yutaka. His power seemed nothing compared to Vegeta’s SSJ4 tranformation, however, Yutaka began to power-up, and his power level increased past Vegeta’s. He called this transformation “Super Tuffle”, and just at that moment, Yutaka forced his hand through Vegeta’s chest. Is Vegeta dead? And just how powerful is the “Super Tuffle”?

Yutaka moved his hand further through Vegeta until he was completely speared on his arm. Yutaka laughed, and held Vegeta on his arm until he stopped moving.
“Remember That promise I made you?” asked Yutaka, “Well, I intend to keep it, your body won’t go with you to hell!” Keeping Vegeta on his arm, Yutaka punched and kicked him until his whole body had bruises.

Yutaka cackled and removed Vegeta from his arm. “Honestly, this is pathetic. Noble Saiyan my ass. I expected more of a challenge, seems all Saiyans do is bullshit.” He wiped the blood from his arm. “Okay, I think I’ve figured out your technique... Haaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!!! GYARIKU HO!!”

The purple beam of Vegeta’s attack appeared to destroy him instead of his opponent. Nothing was left of Vegeta’s body. “Well then,” Yutaka thought, “I’d better get to Eudo, The Tuffle capital.”

Yutaka powered down to his normal state and began to rise in the air and began to fly towards Eudo. When he came closer to the City, he noticed it was a parculiar colour.

“SHIT! NO! THE SAIYANS ARE ALREADY THERE! ITS ON FIRE!” Yutaka rushed towards the ablazed city.

He was right. Saiyans had landed, Oozarus were there and more were coming. Yutaka landed and blasted all the Saiyans he could find, destroying Oozarus and others until he could find no more. He became excited, “YES! I did it! I stopped the Saiyans!” But that was just the beginning, the Elites were coming, in their metal-plated saiyan armour, and their swords strapped to their waists.

Yutaka grinned. This was going to be more fun than ever. He removed Kakuzo from his back and flew towards them. The Elites attempted to counter his attack, but Kakuzo sliced through them like foam. Two of the Elites were taken out in one slash, and the others attempted to attack Yutaka while he was occupied but he dodged with ease. He then slashed twice, taking out five of the Elites, only three remained. They attempted to blast him but he bounced it back with Kakuzo, finishing them off.

“Well that was a waste of time,” he thought, “Oh how the mighty Saiyan empire has fallen.” But this wasn’t over. The leader of the Elites stepped forward, said to be the greatest swordsman in the Universe.

“I congratulate you for defeating my underlings, but this ends here, you will not stop the Saiyan Empire.” The leader said.

“Oh, is that right?” asked Yutaka. He stepped forward to meet the Elite leader.

Is this Elite leader really such a great swordsman? Or has Yutaka mastered the art of swordfighting to such an extent that he is the greatest in the Universe? Find out in the next edition of “Dragonball : The Tuffle’s Reign”.

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 7, 2008 07:14 PM (GMT)
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dbzsupertrunks12 - February 8, 2008 09:22 PM (GMT)
Chapter 5 : Slashing Swords

Last time on "Dragonball : The Tuffles Reign", Yutaka finished Vegeta, and stopped what appeared to be the Saiyan army. However, that was just the beginnning, the Elite Leader challenged Yutaka to a sword fight. Who is this Elite Leader? And is he really as strong as he claims?

The Elite leader charged forward, bringing his sword towards Yutaka's neck. Yutaka sidestepped, dodging the blow and then bringing his down towards the Elite leader's neck.

"It's Over!" He cackled. Far from it, the Elite Leader dodged the blow and kicked Yutaka back. Yutaka looked confused, his power was nowhere near Yutaka's, yet his skill with a sword was legendary. Yutaka moved forward at a lightning quick pace, trying to catch the Elite Leader off guard.

It didn't work. The Elite Leader just parried his blow and sent him flying backwards. Yutaka got angry, "Who the hell are you?" he demanded.

"I? Am the Elite Leader of the Saiyan Elites, Lorta Fretto. And who might you be?" asked Lorta.

"I'm the one that will destroy you, and the whole saiyan army. Yutaka, The Tuffle." he replied, "Get Ready Saiyan bastard!!" Yutaka charged at him again, Kakuzo, stretched out. He drove it into Lorta's sword, making him fall back from the pressure. "Your sword is quite strong, Lorta. May I ask what the metal is?"

"If you need to know, it is made of Katchin, the strongest metal in the universe." Lorta replied, swiping his sword at Yutaka, who dodged backwards.

"Hmm, I'd better be careful then." Yutaka and Lorta continued exchanging blows until Kakuzo cracked, and Yutaka's stomach was deeply slashed. "Shit... Shit..." Yutaka spat up blood and held Kakuzo's hilt out, regenarating it. Lorta charged at him, and Yutaka couldn't block or dodge his sword stab. It peirced his stomach.

Yutaka fell down and hit the ground hard, "How?" he thought, "I am the greatest!" Yutaka smiled, he reached into his pocket, and removed a small drawstring bag. From it he took a strange small bean, a Senzu bean. He placed it in his mouth and swallowed it.

Lorta stood over him, his sword raised high. "I'm sorry," he said, "I must kill you now." He brought his sword down hard, but Yutaka was away before it could reach him. Yutaka charged at him, and swiped with Kakuzo, but Lorta was smarter than that, he'd figured out the secret to Kakuzo's regeneration ability.

Lorta stuck his sword through Kakuzo's hilt. Yutaka's eye widened with fear, Kakuzo disintegrated, along with it's hilt. "What did you do?" Yutaka screamed.

"I smashed through its heart." Lorta replied.

Yutaka's hair turned from black to red. The red hair shimmered for a second, and changed to silver.

He was taking no prisoners.

It seems Yutaka had another transformation up his sleeve, and with Kakuzo destroyed, his rage has hit a whole new level. What is this transformation? And what will happen to Lorta? Find out on the next edition of "Dragonball : The Tuffle's Reign".

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 9, 2008 06:41 PM (GMT)
Chapter 6 : The Super Tuffle : Unlocked!

Last Time on "Dragonball : The Tuffle's Reign", Yutaka was locked in a heated swordfight with Lorta, the Elite Leader. Lorta destroyed his sword, Kakuzo, and Yutaka's rage was pushed to new heights. What is this new transformation?

Yutaka stared at Lorta with his cold grey eyes. "He was... my only family. My only friend." Lorta began to back away, his power was no match for Yutaka's.

"Hey, calm down. I mean it was just a sword right? Right?" Lorta said, his voice shaking.

"Just a sword..." He whispered, and then repeated it at twice the volume, "JUST A SWORD? I WILL MAKE YOU SUFFER, SAIYAN BASTARD!" Yutaka flew towards Lorta so fast, Lorta couldn't block or dodge. However, Yutaka flew past Lorta and rose up above him.

"Oh, so you want air combat? Such a fool. You don't even have a sword..." Lorta flew up towards Yutaka and charged towards him, sword in front of him. He swiped his sword at Yutaka, who grabbed it, and snapped it in two.

"Lets see how you like it," he said coolly, sending a large blast towards Lorta's sword. It obliterated.

Lorta's eyes widened with fear and he began to fly away, however, Yutaka suddenly appeared in front of him, blocking his way. Lorta tried to go the other way, the same thing happened. This time Yutaka attacked, pummelling his fists into Lorta one after another at lightning quick speed. "Bastard, bastard bastard, bastard." He kept repeating that while crying.

He batted Lorta down to the floor, who was now just a bloody peice of flesh. "He's more than a sword, he's my first, and my last friend. He's like a brother." Yutaka sent a blast towards Lorta which obliterated his body. "Don't worry, I went easy on you. My unlocked form is a lot more powerful than I showed you." Yutaka powered down to his normal state.

"Hmm... King Vegeta is probably wondering what's happening down here. I'll go inform him." He grinned, and flew up towards the large ship in the sky. It wouldn't be half the battle without Kakuzo, but this was something he had to do.

He entered the ship, batting away any guards who tried to stop him. Yutaka entered the room where King Vegeta was. King Vegeta stood up, "What are you doing here? Who are you?" he asked.

Yutaka slowly walked towards the King. "I've stopped your invasion, and now I'm going to kill you." He said.

King Vegeta couldn't stop laughing. "You, kill me? Why that's the funniest thing I've heard since the Legendary Super Saiyan!" King Vegeta walked up to Yutaka and attempted to punch him, he didn't budge.

Yutaka smashed King Vegeta into the wall. He then flew outside, and charged up an enormous blast. "Sorry, Saiyan Scum." He let his blast fire, exploding the ship. Now it was over.

Yutaka flew down to ground. Everyone was dead, others evacuated. He knew they would come back not to long from now. He walked to the nearest seat that wasn't destroyed and sat down, he had done it, he had stopped the Saiyan invasion.

"Hey You! Are you the one that slaughtered the Saiyans?" Someone asked.

Without looking, Yutaka said, "Yes, why?"

"I'm going to destroy you! You Bastard!" The voice bellowed, he heard a slight noise, similar to that of the wind.

"Oh," replied Yutaka, looking up, "and who might you be?"

Standing on a building was a golden-haired Saiyan, dressed in green Saiyan armour.

Yes! That's right! Bardock, the Father of Goku has appeared, in a Super Saiyan form no different from Goku's. Will Bardock's strength be enough to save the Saiyan race? Or will he be thrown aside like the rest? Find out in the next exciting edition of "Dragonball : The Tuffle's Reign".

SSJ4Bardock - February 11, 2008 08:46 AM (GMT)
Bardock!!! BARDOCK!!!! WOOT WOOT!!! :lolgoku: hehehe

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 21, 2008 08:12 PM (GMT)
Ok, no update for a while so I thought I'd start off, converting it to script format to save time.

Chapter 7: Bardock the demon?!?

Bardock : I'm Bardock! I'm a Saiyan annd I'm going to annihilate you!

Bardock flew towards Yutaka with his fist stretched out.

Yutaka : I need more answers than just "I'm going to annihilate you".

Bardock said nothing and increased his speed, rushing towards Yutaka. Yutaka grabbed Bardock's fist and threw him back.

Bardock : HRAAAAAARRRGGHHHH!!

Bardock flew back at Yutaka.

Yutaka : Ooh. A fiesty one are we? And it appears that you have undergone the Super Saiyan transformation. I'm sorry, did my genocide of the Saiyan race upset you?

Bardock stopped in midair.

Bardock : SO IT WAS YOU?!?

Yutaka : If you didn't know it was me, why did you attack?

Bardock didn't reply, except he screamed, and the aura around him began to widen, he was undergoing another transformation.

Bardock : Just instinct.

His hair was an orange-red colour and his eyes were as black as the night sky.

Yutaka : What is this? I've never heard of this tranformation!

Bardock : It is the strongest form of a Saiyan of this time period It-

Yutaka : Wait, how do you know so much?

Bardock : My body is being possessed, by a demon from inside me.

Yutaka : That's believable...

Bardock : DON'T PISS ME OFF!

Yutaka : Okay, Mr. "Demon", why don't you finish explaining about your transformation?

Bardock : A Saiyan from this time period could only transform into it. Only those born in my years and before could tranform. The tail must have been in use for at least 30 years. I will eliminate you.

Yutaka : Sorry buddy, ain't gonna happen.

Bardock : We'll see.

Bardock moved at lightning quick speed, causing Yutaka to dive to the side.

Yutaka : Shit! He's fast!

Yutaka quickly transformed into a Super Tuffle and threw himself at Bardock, although he still wasn't fast enough to catch Bardock. Bardock landed a punch in Yutaka's stomach, but strength wasn't enough to hurt him. Yutaka grabbed his arm and threw him upwards.

Yutaka : Guuuhhh... Gyariku Ho!

Yutaka grinned, he knew it was over.

Yutaka : That was easy.

Bardock : What was? Did I miss something?

Yutaka turned around, Bardock was there.

Yutaka : What the F-

Bardock kicked Yutaka through a wall.

Yutaka : No Way!!! There's NO FUCKING WAY!!! I will NOT be Defeated!!

Bardock : Well, get used to it.

Yutaka stared at Bardock, his hair was red and there was scales growing every second. He woud haveto end ths before Bardock became a full demon.

What will happen to the fight? Find out soon on DBTR!!

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 23, 2008 08:26 PM (GMT)
Chapter 8 : Nothing will stand in my way!

Yutaka : You... really are a demon?!?

Bardock : As a Saiyan, I never lie.

Yutaka : You just told me you were a demon...

Bardock : I am still a Saiyan, for now.

Yutaka : Then I must strike you down, while you are still a Saiyan.

Bardock : We'll see...

Yutaka : You'll be the the first to witness my full power... and the first to realise...

Electricity began the appear near Yutaka, The ground began to shake.

Yutaka : Nothing will stand in my way!!

His hair turned from red, to silver.

Yutaka : Feel privilaged, you are the second person to ever see this tranformation, I call it "Unlocked Super Tuffle". Be careful, I can't control it well.

Bardock : You think a change of hair colour will beat me?

Bardock rushed towards Yutaka, throwing his fists everywhere, Yutaka dodging every one with ease.

Bardock : Quit messin' around!

Yutaka : Sure.

Yutaka planted his foot straight in Bardock's stomach, causing him to spit up blood. He slammed Bardock into the ground with his foot.

Bardock : This is... Nothin'...

Yutaka : Unleash the Tiger.

Yutaka repeated the exact same move he'd used on Vegeta, leaving Bardock extremely injured.

Yutaka : I don't blame you for being a useless fighter, you are a Saiyan after all.

Bardock : Hey, I ain't finished yet... I'm gonna win...

Yutaka : Oh please, don't.

He stared down at Bardock, the transformation was complete, Bardock was a demon.

Yutaka : His power-level is huge... but he's a Saiyan.

Tsuketo : I am the demon inside, call me Tsuketo.

Yutaka : I'd prefer to call you reptile, but whatever floats your boat.

Tsuketo appeared behind Yutaka, attempting to punch him. Yutaka swung himself to the side and kicked Tsuketo, nudging him back.

Tsuketo smirked.

Tsuketo : Looks like an even fight.

Yutaka : I still have reserves of energy beyond your power.

Tsuketo : As do I.

Yutaka : Yes, pathetic reserves.

Tsuketo : We'll see.

To anyone still left on Planet Plant, every now and then they would hear a loud crash If they ha a quick eye, they would see Yutaka and Tsuketo punching each other.

It was a marvelous battle but it would have to end soon.

To be continued...

SSJ4Bardock - February 24, 2008 01:26 PM (GMT)
You know that sword with a heart at the hilt sounds so Yu Yu Hakusho-ish but all of this is good.

vegataSSJ6 - February 24, 2008 01:33 PM (GMT)
your doing a good job with the comic! please continue!

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 24, 2008 04:50 PM (GMT)
Chapter 9 : Demon Destroyed

Tsuketo skidded in mid-air and came to a stop.

Tsuketo : This is too easy, his power-level is beyond mine, but the fight is even.

Yutaka punched Tsuketo dead in the face forcing him back.

Yutaka : Don't lose concentration!

Tsuketo : Why are you going easy on me.

Yutaka : You noticed, oh well. Because now, I'll stop playing around.

Yutaka stared at Tsuketo with an evil grin, his eyes were much more evil than the demon's.

Tsuketo : Your heart is black...

Yutaka : Really? I thought that was just Tuffle blood.

Tsuketo : You are stupid.

Yutaka : I was joking.

Yutaka punched Tsuketo into the ground.

Tsuketo : So you were holding this much power...

Tsuketo stood up, his right arm was gone.

Yutaka : Well, I was aiming for your left arm. Heh.

Yutaka rose up in the air. He threw thousand of blasts down at Tsuketo, who dodged most of them, but was battered down by the rest.

Yutaka : Hey! Are you dead yet?

Tsuketo : You... wi... wish.

Tsuketo didn't stand up this time, only his torso, left arm and head remained.

Yutaka : I'm sorry... I must end your life...

Tsuketo : N- N... NO!

Yutaka placed his arm in front of him and charged up a blast.

Yutaka : Glacier... SCREAM!

A blast of ice flew towards Tsuketo which expanded so it was impossible to dodge.

Tsuketo : GAAAAAHHH!!! AAAAAAARRGGHHH!!!

Tsuketo was frozen. Yutaka kicked the ice and it smashed, also smashing Tsuketo's body.

Yutaka : You were good, but not good enough...

Tsuketo's remains shimmered and transformed into Bardock, who lay there as a dead body.

Yutaka : I will leave your body for my people.

Yutaka walked away towards the bench he was sat on before.

Yutaka : It was a good fight, thank you... Bardock.

It was over, Yutaka had won... the Tuffles would reign.

He could now live in peace with his people.



Or could he?


The end.

The end of DBTR, coming soon Dragonball : Rebellion of the future

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 24, 2008 04:57 PM (GMT)
Preview of DB : Rebellion of the future

Yutaka : So you are the one they name _______?

______: Vegeta... everyone... You scum.

Yutaka : Hmm... You're different.

______: I will destroy you!!!

Another Preview

Yutaka : Believe it or not... This sword, Kakuzo, was destroyed... I brought it back.

______ : My sword will cut through you for what you did to my father...

Yutaka : Another swordfight... interesting...

And another

Yutaka : You're going to destroy the planet with that... You'll die!!!

_______ : I don't care... As long as I destroy you!!!!

Yutaka : So this is the legendary ____ ____...


Coming soon

SSJ4Bardock - February 25, 2008 01:55 PM (GMT)
LOL nice I know now Lgendary Super Saiyan lol kinda obvious. Or maybe not? lol hehe can't waitz!

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 25, 2008 06:04 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (SSJ4Bardock @ Feb 25 2008, 01:55 PM)
LOL nice I know now Lgendary Super Saiyan lol kinda obvious. Or maybe not? lol hehe can't waitz!

Hehe. Thanks, at the moment, here's a little profile on Yutaka:

Name : Yutaka

Race : Tuffle

Home Planet
: Planet Plant/Pluto

Special Attacks :

Unleash the Tiger

Glacier's Scream

One Thousand Stalagmites of ice

Transformations :

Super Tuffle

Machine Generated Oozaru [A one time transformation]

Unlocked Tuffle

Unlocked Super Tuffle [Same as SSJ5 but goes insane and can't control himself]

Equipment : Chains [Destroyed when fighting with Bardock], Kakuzo [Deceased xD{Although is brought back in the next volume}]

That's basically all there is to know about Yutaka. I've deleted The History of Yutaka Part 1 as a plan to create a different volume about his history.

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 25, 2008 07:16 PM (GMT)
Okay, since I can't be bothered to wait, here's the first chapter.

Dragonball : The Rebellion of the Future

Chapter 1 : Meanwhile...

Goku walked over to the door, he sensed something was wrong. Vegeta wouldn't supress his power level if there was no danger.

Gohan : Hey dad, are you leaving so soon?

Goku : Yeah, tell Videl I'm sorry...

Goku began to walk away again.

Gohan : What's wrong?

Goku : Vegeta... I think he went somewhere... to fight someone.

Gohan : I'm sure it's nothing dad.

Goku : No. Gohan, gather all of the dragonballs, get everyone to help.

Gohan : But... why?

Goku turned around and faced his son. His expression was grim.

Goku : Vegeta is dead.

Videl came running through.

Videl : What's going on here? Are you leaving Goku?

Goku : Yeah, sorry.

Goku walked out of the door without a word.

Videl : What's wrong with him.

Gohan : I don't know, but we have to do what he says. Gather everyone...

Videl : Why?

Gohan grinned.

Gohan : We're going on a dragonball hunt.

*

Goku walked until he was deep into the woods and placed two fingers on his forehead. He teleported to Capsule Corp.

Goku : Hey Bulma.

Bulma : Oh, hi Goku. You haven't seen Vegeta anywhere have you?

Goku : I need your time machine.

Bulma : Oh, so have you seen Vegeta or not?

Goku : Oh well. I was hoping to avoid telling you.

Bulma : What?!?

Goku : I can't sense Vegeta's prescence anywhere. Usually even when he has gone to a different planet, I can still sense him.

Bulma : No! That means...

Goku : Not quite.

Bulma : What do you mean not quite?!? Vegeta's dead!! You know it!! I know it!!! He's dead!!

Goku : No. It's possible he could have used your time machine to go back in time.

Bulma wiped the tears from her eyes.

Bulma : Yes, that must be it. Now that you mention it my time machine is gone!

Goku : What?!? I need it!!

Bulma : It would take at least a few weeks for me to make another. Do you really need it.

Goku : Yes. And make it so it can travel planets. Vegeta's fighting somewhere else, and he needs my help.

*

Yutaka stared into the starfull sky. Something was coming. His death could be near. An amazing power was coming his way.

To be continued....

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 27, 2008 10:21 PM (GMT)
Chapter 2 : Preperation

Goku ran towards Gohan and punched him down.

Goku : It's best not to lose concentration, Gohan.

Gohan : I am your son, you could go easy on me.

Goku : That's not what you said before the Cell Games.

Gohan : I was young, what else would be the cause of that?

Goku : Hunger for power?

Gohan sighed.

Gohan : Now, are you sure Vegeta is dead?

Goku : Yes, I'm certain.

Gohan : Well, we'd better continue training then.

Goku : Before we begin, how many of the Dragonballs have been collected?

Gohan : Videl told me Trunks and Goten were still searching for the 3rd Dragonball, so at the moment, only 2.

Goku : Damn, we need Vegeta back for this fight.

Gohan : Well, if this person was strong enough to defeat Vegeta with the power of a Super Saiyan 4, we'll need everyone we can get.

Goku : I've got an idea! Let's train on very high gravity!

Gohan : Whhaaaaat?!?

Goku walked over to the gravity machine and clicked a few buttons, the gravity became higher. They then ascended to Super saiyans and began to spar again.

*

Goten : If we don't get the third Dragonball soon, will they think we're slacking?

Trunks : Honestly? They'll be too busy preparing to notice.

Goten : Heheh.

Trunks : So, more food?

Goten : You bet!

Goten bit into a chicken leg then started laughing, after a while, Trunks joined in too. They had no idea what they were laughing at, but they enjoyed it.

??? : Having fun?

Goten and Trunks gulped, was it someone evil? They turned around.

Android 18 : Well?

Trunks : Oh, it's just you.

Android 18 banged their heads together. They collapsed.

Android 18 : Just me? That's what you get for slacking!! Now get to work!

Goten + Trunks : Yes!

With that, they flew off to find the remaining Dragonballs.

*

Goku : How about we take it up a notch? I know what you've been hiding...

Gohan : I... don't know what you mean.

Goku : Oh well, I'll just transform and attack you...

Gohan : Okay, Okay! I've perfected Super saiyan 4.

Goku : Really? There was no golden Oozaru in the city.

Gohan : Yeah, well Bulma used her equipment.

Goku : You know, that could be cheating.

Gohan : Yeah, I know...

They both transformed into Super Saiyan 4's and began intense sparring. This opponent would be tough.


To be contunued...

ss4vegeta - February 28, 2008 01:51 PM (GMT)
nice!

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 28, 2008 05:35 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (ss4vegeta @ Feb 28 2008, 01:51 PM)
nice!

Thanks! w00t

dbzsupertrunks12 - February 28, 2008 08:41 PM (GMT)
Chapter 3 : Rebirth

Goku : Whew! I can't believe you perfected Super Saiyan 4!

Gohan : Yeah, I've been secretly training in my spare time.

Goku : Hey Gohan!

Gohan : What?

Goku : Ka.... Me....

Gohan : What are you doing dad?!?

Goku : Ha.... Me.....

Gohan : Dammit dad! Ma... senko...

Goku + Gohan : HAAA!!!

Goku's Kamehameha wave quickly overpowered Gohan's Masenko, forcing him to roll out of the way. The wall of the training room burst open from the power of Goku's Kamehameha wave.

Gohan : Jeez Dad! You could have gave me more notice!!

Goku : Yeah, Sorry.

Gohan sighed.

The door burst open.

Bulma : Goku! We've found the Dragonballs!!

Goku and Gohan quickly powered down to their original states and followed Bulma to a large field. Then Shenron was awoken.

Shenron : Speak one wish, it shall be granted.

Bulma : Shenron! Bring Vegeta back to life!

Shenron's eyes glowed red, and Vegeta was revived. Of course he had to travel from Otherworld, so he wasn't there yet.

Shenron disappeared and the Dragonballs flew off.

To be continued...

Note : I have ruled out many elements included in GT because I think it was shit. That is one of the reasons why Goku is still there and Shenron is also there.

SSJ5Bardock - February 28, 2008 08:57 PM (GMT)
I totally agree with you GT was total crap.

Oh good Fanfic both of them

ss4vegeta - February 28, 2008 09:51 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (SSJ5Bardock @ Feb 28 2008, 08:57 PM)
I totally agree with you GT was total crap.

Oh good Fanfic both of them

why doyou have a GT avatar then?, :P nice chapter DST :D

SSJ4Bardock - February 29, 2008 01:00 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (SSJ5Bardock @ Feb 28 2008, 10:44 PM)
:ss: So this is :wall: the new stroy on the block I just put chapter 25: Bojack's Final Battle up and I can't seem to get comments becuase I always get one by madman af (forgot the rest of his username). And I'm about to post another one

Please don't commercial your fanfics on others thread. You won't like it if someone came and said come read my fanfic on your thread would you? I know you didn't say what I wrote but its kinda like it. madman af esf err something (LOL) enjoys reading fanfics and hes a supporitve adudience.

dbzsupertrunks12 - March 1, 2008 07:42 PM (GMT)
Finally figured out what Yutaka will look like:

user posted image

SSJ4Bardock - March 2, 2008 04:38 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (dbzsupertrunks12 @ Mar 1 2008, 07:42 PM)
Finally figured out what Yutaka will look like:

user posted image

NICCCCE!!!! :ok:

dbzsupertrunks12 - March 2, 2008 02:06 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (SSJ4Bardock @ Mar 2 2008, 04:38 AM)
QUOTE (dbzsupertrunks12 @ Mar 1 2008, 07:42 PM)
Finally figured out what Yutaka will look like:

user posted image

NICCCCE!!!! :ok:

Arigatou! w00t

dbzsupertrunks12 - March 9, 2008 03:43 PM (GMT)
Chapter 4 : A cold, deserted Planet

Trunks stared at the grey sky, it had been days, maybe even weeks. Something rustled far away. Trunks gripped his sword and stood ready.

Trunks : Okay, come out!

A man with a shotgun strolled out of some bushes.

Man : Gimme all your money! A- And food! I won't hurt you!

Trunks : Finally! A survivor!

He brushed back his hair.

Trunks : Is there others with you?

Man : Don't play dumb with me! We're the only ones left!! Now gimme your money and food!

Trunks : No.

Man : Gah! Then I'll take it by force!!

The man fired his gun at Trunks, who grabbed the flying bullet and threw it to the floor.

Trunks : Look, I'm here to help you. So just calm down.

The man's eyes widened. He fired his gun rapidly.

Man : You freak!! Stay away! Stay away!!

One of the bullets hit Trunks, and rebounded into the man's stomach. He then collapsed.

Trunks : Curse those Androids. Making everyone go mad. I'd better get going to find more people. One more dead person won't make a difference.

Trunks sighed.

Trunks : If only Piccollo was alive... we'd still have the Dragonballs...

*

Yutaka : Godammit! I'm sooooooooooooooo bored!

He started slapping himself.

Yutaka : Well, it is better than punching myself.

He strolled around for a bit and then smiled.

Yutaka : Ooh! Oooh! I know! I know! I'll go to the time when the Androids destroyed everything. Where that strange Trunks character came from. I'll kill him! He's a Saiyan, it'll be fun!! Now, where did I leave my time machine...

Yutaka stroked his chin...

Yutaka : Oh yes! Where I mutilated Vegeta!

Yutaka flew upwards and looked around.

Yutaka : Now right next to where that huge crater is!

He flew towards the crater to find his Time machine damaged.

Yutaka : Stupid Saiyan freaks!

He started stomping his feet and pulling faces.

Yutaka : I know! I'll use that repair bot capsule that I stole from Capsule Corp!

Yutaka threw the capsule at the ship and it repaired inmmedietly.

Yutaka : Where's the robot! Hey that isn't fair!!!

He stomped into the time machine, clicked a few buttons and disappeared.

His face changed from a joke smile to and evil smirk...

To be Continued...

marinos519 - March 9, 2008 04:48 PM (GMT)
Although understanding the time is hard, you do a gret job dbzsupertrunks
Keep it up.
I find your fanfic from the few that are canon....in someway :P
Again keep it up

dbzsupertrunks12 - March 9, 2008 06:16 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (marinos519 @ Mar 9 2008, 04:48 PM)
Although understanding the time is hard, you do a gret job dbzsupertrunks
Keep it up.
I find your fanfic from the few that are canon....in someway :P
Again keep it up

Thanks! ^_^

SSJ4Bardock - March 10, 2008 09:26 AM (GMT)
Ahh now I get the feeling that this will be a blood-shed fight between swords. Oh wait Yutaka lost his sword...

dbzsupertrunks12 - March 10, 2008 05:31 PM (GMT)
Ahh but no...

QUOTE
Another Preview

Yutaka : Believe it or not... This sword, Kakuzo, was destroyed... I brought it back.

______ : My sword will cut through you for what you did to my father...

Yutaka : Another swordfight... interesting...


I haven't quite figured out how he will revive it but he will. :)

SSJ4Bardock - March 11, 2008 09:09 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (dbzsupertrunks12 @ Mar 10 2008, 05:31 PM)
Ahh but no...

QUOTE
Another Preview

Yutaka : Believe it or not... This sword, Kakuzo, was destroyed... I brought it back.

Trunks : My sword will cut through you for what you did to my father...

Yutaka : Another swordfight... interesting...


I haven't quite figured out how he will revive it but he will. :)

Hehe I knew it! I just filled the puzzle in!




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