Talk about middle of the road character. He doesn't have anything about him that stands out. Makes sorting tougher. Oh well, first things first.
You'll need to work on your strengths and weaknesses. I only see one strength that is the type of strength I'm looking for. His ability to talk to other people and accomplish his goals. Everything else is more what he can do or what he likes. I want personality/character strengths. Do you consider narcism a strength? I would consider it a weakness unless you can give me a reason why it's a strength.
Same thing with your weakness. I need personality/character weaknesses. Fix those sections and then the sorting will begin.
Sorry about making him not stand out enough.
I tried to make him a bit stronger character.
I hope that makes things clearer.
Alright then, Welcome to Marauders' Reality. You'll be a 7th year...Hufflepuff. :)