Eeee! I've gotton better! Yes! XD, Laila, you should know what I was like b

[-Never-Land-]

The manips get newer as you scroll down, lol! Annd Thunder...wow...I DO NOT like that one...

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs21/f/2007/286...elightofgod.jpg

http://delightofgod.deviantart.com/art/Thunder-67445183

http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs21/f/2007/291...elightofgod.jpg

[LittleHorseGal]

I love the first two! Amaaazing.

1. I like everything about this one, cept the subtext. I love love love the horse placing, however he might be just a tad bit big! I love it anyways.

2. Is that the horses muzzle I can see? If so, it could have been smallened, it looks to big. I love the text placing, but the subtext is too poppy. I would of lowered the opacity just a tad. Otherwise awesome job!

3. eep, the horse is way to dark for the BG Also, I would have placed a tiny splash around his back feet. The splash is okay on the front feet, but its a bit too blobby for my liking. I would of made the horse a tad smaller aswell. The tail's a bit funky, and oversmudged. Buuuuuut the text is okay, subtext is too blurry. Overall good job!

I'm looking forward to seeing moreee

[-Never-Land-]

Thanks! XD Lol! I noticed that on the Thunder one...icky.... >.< lol! Annd the horse in the third one...ew ew ew, I made a HUUGE mess on that, then I had to clean it all up...so it could have been better, lol! =P If you look closely to the right of the horse in the Jewel manip, you can see that I messed the ocean up...I placed some text there and it didn't look good, but GIMP wouldn't let me undo it, so I had to fix the water...evil GIMP! =D The horse was a bit messy too, lol. Thanks for the critiques!!