Hey ya'll.

Here is our first card. On time, no less! It's 5 matches with every member of our roster. We're definitely looking for more, so I wrote this up to attract some folks who maybe thought we'd never get off the ground

I'm looking for feedback as well, since this is our first go 'round and my first real attempt at fed-heading (or at least getting a card out). Positives and negatives would be great... just don't be a dick.

"Promo Central" leads into the event.

http://www.geocities.com/neeeeed_cash/Live101107.txt

Enjoy!

Ben

Right off, I dig the style you used to put the reader right there in the action. Being from Brooklyn, NY myself I truly felt like I was at some underground spot hoping the cops wouldnt bust in and ruin everything.

The matches themselves were written well and I am anxious to see more out of NBWF.

Rest in peace Escobar Jeffries...Wherever you are. :weep: