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If I may speak candidly...
Your writing is atrocious. I'm starting to wonder if English is your first language or not. If it is, I pity you. The writing is so unclear, I can't tell what your points are supposed to be. Even for what this is, you don't even seem to talk about what makes the manga better other than "a crucial plot point" that remains a mystery, and the way you talk about it, it sounds more like a passing mention than an actual criticism. Overall, this review (or "expressing of opinions") is terribly written and poorly executed.
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Please, Nii and Marvealle...can't we just talk...? 
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