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| kaci |
Posted: Jun 21 2006, 12:49 PM
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Lorelai was laying in a hospital bed... she was holding a beautiful baby girl. She had bright blue eyes... and couldn’t stop smiling. Lorelai couldn’t believe that she would never see her again. Her mother was forcing her to give her Rory up... she was forcing her daughter to give Rory up to be raised by someone else. She wanted so badly to keep Rory... but Emily had arranged for another family to take Rory the day she was born, and there was nothing Lorelai could do, after all she was still a minor, and she had to do what her parents told her, usually that didn’t stop her, but what could she do. Someone would notice if she ran out of the hospital with a baby.
Lorelai couldn’t stop staring into her daughters blue eyes, she looked so happy, but the truth was lorelai couldn’t any more upset. She was about to give her daughter up, and that was killing her. She nervously sat there... holding her daughter... knowing that the family that would take Rory, would be there any minute and this would be the last time she would ever see Rory again. Lorelai herd a soft knock on the door... she looked up and saw a young couple... in their late 20's or early 30's. They walked over to Lorelai's bed and at first said nothing... then after a few minutes of silence the women spoke up. “Hello... I’m Lena... this is my husband Derek." Lorelai said nothing... she just stared at the women who was about to take her daughter away from her... and what killed her the most was that she had no control over it. “Hi" Lorelai replied. Just as Lorelai managed to get a “hi" out... Emily walked in. “Lorelai... their here to take..." “Rory... her name is Rory" lorelai replied ... not looking up at her mother, she just looked at Rory “Rory... yes... well... their here to take her now." … To Be Continued….. Review please. |
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| GGqueen |
Posted: Jun 21 2006, 10:26 PM
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Wow! That is really good! And it's such a great idea.. you know, what would've happened had Lorelai been forced to give up Rory! Please keep going!
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| Jess_Lover |
Posted: Jun 26 2006, 01:07 AM
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This is really good! I like it a lot! Please update it soon!!
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| Cutandbleed |
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I wanna know what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-------------------- ![]() I can’t relax. I can’t sleep. I’m having nightmares about being chased around by boxes with arms and they tackle me and pile clothing on top of my face and secure it around my head with packing tape and I’m just lying there choking while you’re sitting in the corner laughing, putting gel in your hair with a switchblade! (Luke-Lost and found) |
| GGqueen |
Posted: Jul 26 2006, 05:35 PM
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Okay.. since this person obviously isn't updating their story, I'm gonna do it for them, since I think it's a really good storyline!
So, there should be an update by tomorrow.. keep watching.. =) -------------------- |
| GGqueen |
Posted: Jul 27 2006, 01:01 PM
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*a couple days later*
Lorelai gathered her things despondently. Her mother would be here any minute to take her home from the hospital, so that Lorelai could go back to her horrible life. The only thing that she had been looking forward to was having her baby, that is until her mother came in to her room only a couple of weeks before her due date and told her that she would be giving her baby up for adoption. That day had been one of the worst days of Lorelai’s life, and she’d had some pretty bad days. There was a knock at the door, and before Lorelai could mumble ‘come in’ Emily Gilmore strode in. “Lorelai, are you ready yet?” Emily asked, tapping her foot impatiently on the floor. “Yes, mother,” Lorelai said, coldly, grabbing the rest of her things. “You don’t have to be so livid, Lorelai, what I did was for your own good,” Emily replied, curtly, as the two walked out of the room. “Oh, mom, let’s not even get into this,” Lorelai said, clearly exhausted. Emily didn’t respond, and there was silence to the car, and throughout the ride home. “Richard, we’re home!” Emily called, as she and Lorelai entered the Gilmore residence. Richard came out of his study, book in hand, and said, “Hello, welcome home Lorelai.” Lorelai didn’t respond, but instead just grabbed her things and went straight to her room. When she got to her room Lorelai threw her things over by the closet, and then flopped onto her bed. She began to cry silently. Just then there was a knock on the door. It was clearly an ‘Emily Gilmore knock’. Lorelai sighed, “What is it mom?” Emily opened the door. “Lorelai, you are expected to join us for dinner,” she said shortly, and then closed the door again. Lorelai looked over at the clock on her nightstand, 6:30 it read. In half-an-hour Lorelai would have to go join her parents for dinner. Her mom didn’t even have to tell Lorelai what time dinner was at, because they had dinner at the same time every night, 7 o’clock on the dot. Lorelai grabbed this month’s Teen Beat off her nightstand and began reading. Sometime later she looked at her clock again, this time it read 7:05. “Shit,” Lorelai mumbled, quickly tearing out of her room, and running down the stairs. She knew her mom would be mad at her for being five minutes late, and it was just another thing that her mom could add to the list of reasons to hound Lorelai. Lorelai entered the dining room, and saw her mom and dad already seated with salads in front of them; her spot was empty, except for the salad. She silently entered, and sat down. “Oh Lorelai, how nice of you to join us,” Emily said. Lorelai remained silent, just staring at her salad. “The least you could do is apologize, Lorelai. You know that dinner is at seven o’clock sharp,” Emily said, angrily. “Sorry,” Lorelai mumbled, not looking up. “Sorry, what was that? I couldn’t hear you,” Emily replied, anger still in her voice. “You know what? I’m not so hungry after all!” Lorelai said angrily, standing up, and stalking off. “Lorelai, come back here!” Emily called. “No!” Lorelai called back, stomping up the stairs, and then slamming the door to her room. Emily sighed, “Jenny, come take this salad away!” Jenny, the maid that week, then came out of the kitchen, and quickly took the salad back into the kitchen. “I just don’t understand that girl,” Emily said. “Mmhmm,” Richard replied, eating some more of his salad. Lorelai flopped onto her bed again, and sighed. Then she realized she actually was very hungry. The hospital food she’d been eating for the past week had sucked. She’d actually been looking forward to a real meal. If only the meal hadn’t been with her parents. Lorelai sat up, and went over to her dresser. She opened the bottom drawer, and smiled at her stash of tootsie rolls. Actually the tootsie rolls were just a cover up, it was what was underneath that was really the secret stash, but in this instance she was glad she had the tootsie rolls. She grabbed a handful, and closed the drawer. She sat back on her bed, and while sucking on the tootsie rolls, she began reading her Teen Beat again. She found herself not being able to focus on the article about Emilio Estevez. Lorelai sighed and closed the magazine. She folded her arms across her chest, and suddenly she realized what she had to do. She had to run away. Lorelai jumped off her bed, and went over to her closet, where she began pulling things off hangers, and throwing them into her suitcase. For some people her actions might seem drastic, but for Lorelai it was the only solution. It wasn’t just the dinners, it was everything, and now that she wasn’t pregnant, and didn’t have a child, her parents would demand she go to Yale or some other prestigious Ivy League school like that, and that’s just not what she wanted. She wanted to be free; she wanted to leave the snobby-rich-country club life. Lorelai then went over to her dresser and emptied the contents of her drawers into the suitcase. She then collected anything else she thought she would need, and closed her suitcase, and stuck it underneath her bed. She sat down on her bed, as anxious as could be, and glanced at her clock; 8 o’clock, it said. Lorelai sighed, she’d have to wait at least another two hours, before her parents would be in bed, and she could be sure they wouldn’t hear her sneaking out. She figured she might as well take this time to figure out where she would go, or where she would stay. She didn’t have much money, just about one-hundred dollars, saved from babysitting jobs and birthdays. She could always stay in her car, she figured. That was the one good thing about her parents, the fact that for her sixteenth birthday they had gotten her a car, making it incredibly easy for her to run away. But she still had no idea where she would go. Well, I guess I’ll just drive and see where I end up, she thought to herself as she lay back on her bed and closed her eyes. ..to be continued, please review!! (if you review I'll update faster, hehe!) -------------------- |
| GGqueen |
Posted: Jul 30 2006, 08:56 PM
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b.u.m.p.
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| Cutandbleed |
Posted: Aug 8 2006, 05:42 PM
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P.I.M.P
-------------------- ![]() I can’t relax. I can’t sleep. I’m having nightmares about being chased around by boxes with arms and they tackle me and pile clothing on top of my face and secure it around my head with packing tape and I’m just lying there choking while you’re sitting in the corner laughing, putting gel in your hair with a switchblade! (Luke-Lost and found) |
| GGqueen |
Posted: Aug 21 2006, 12:03 PM
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Heyy.. sorry I haven't been updating.. but yeahh my friends comp sucks like a big bag of sucky things.. lol, but I should be updating soon! Do not fear!
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