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 'Broken', Introduction
Azedenkae
Posted: Jul 1 2007, 10:08 AM


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~~~This is the introduction to a story I am writing about Digimon~~~




“Stop it from leaving!”

UlforceVeedramon boosted his way towards the stream of data, leaving the Digital World.

“Quickly, stop it!” Alphamon repeated, flying just behind UlforceVeedramon, followed by Dynasmon. Together, all 3 was chasing after the stream of data, but it seemed to be flying much faster than they were.

“QUICKLY, BEFORE IT REACHES THE BARRIER!” Alphamon shouted louder than before, trying to speed up, but he was already at his max speed, and yet it was still faster than him.

And then, it entered the barrier, only seconds before all 3 Digimons entered it too.

“God damn it!” Dynasmon swore, blasting the stream of data with his mouth, bursting the stream apart, but soon it re-gathered and continued on its path. The barrier protected anything in it from being deleted, even with the strength of all the Royal Knights combined.

“What are we supposed to do?” UlforceVeedramon asked, turning to Alphamon, hoping that their leader could come up with something.

“I… I don’t know… what we can do…” Alphamon replied, helpless, as all three stared at the stream, waiting for it to disappear. Slowly, bit by bit, the data crossed through the other side of the barrier, transferred to the human world. Bit by bit, at the angry faces of the Royal Knights.

“DAMN IT!” UlforceVeedramon shouted, too annoyed to contain himself.

“Calm down!”

“HOW CAN WE CALM DOWN?” UlforceVeedramon shouted back at his leader. “All the data on every single Digimon alive is being teleported to some unknown organization in the human world!” UlforceVeedramon panted heavily, his body pulsating from all the anger.

It all started out when a robot entered the Digital World, searching out the Royal Knights. Upon coming in contact with them, the robot stated that it was from DATS, coming here to offer help in gathering all the data of the Digimons in the Digital World, compiling it into a database for the Royal Knights.

At that time, the Digital World was in chaos, so the Royal Knights had many other things to do, thus they agreed, not knowing that the robot was not from DATS at all.

It was not until a month later that the real robot from DATS came to offer help. It was then that the Royal Knights realized they were tricked, and set off to destroy the other robot.

It was only moments later that Gallantmon stumbled upon the robot and easily slashed it apart, thinking that it was over.

But DATS had scanned the entire world and found that the robot had emitted a stream of data just before it died, the one chased by the three knights until now.

“damn it why!” UlforceVeedramon repeated again, this time only one tenth of the stream is left. “Why can’t we stop it!” He shouted for one last time, then proceeded to fly straight into the data stream, standing in between it and started to stab at it randomly, spewing data all over.

“It’s no use, don’t waste your strength.” Alphamon said, as the data returned to normal and began flowing again… just that this time it hit UlforceVeedramon’s body and splitted in two, each side flowing over and around UlforceVeedramon’s body, rejoining again behind his back.

This was when an idea came to Alphamon and quickly, he flew over to UlforceVeedramon out, placing one hand on UlforceVeedramon’s side, where the data was. It worked. The data now began to flow over Alphamon’s hand, then arm, farther and farther from UlforceVeedramon, whilst the other half went the normal way, around his body but not merging with anything, through the barrier.

Upon seeing this, Dynasmon instantly flew off and joined Alphamon’s side, so that the stream had to travel even further, and it worked. When the stream finally went around all the bodies, the other half has already traveled much further, thus it joint with a different set of data, corrupting it, and this continued until there was no data left to be teleported away.

All 3 Digimons let go of each other, sighing.

“So… will that work?” UlforceVeedramon asked.

“Possibly.”

“Hopefully.” Alphamon corrected.

“Yeah, hopefully.” Dynasmon agreed.




~~~So what ya guys think? Please critic as much as possible. This is just part 1 of the intro. The story will be about a group of humans creating another Digital World, a separate one in a different dimension, trying to create Digimons from the data they receive and... failing. :3~~~
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