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 Draik Tempest
Draik Tempest
Posted: Jul 4 2007, 11:04 AM


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Chosen Child Application
Name: Draik Tempest
Nicknames:
Sex: Male
Ethnicity: American...
Age: 16
Alliance: Neutral
D-Mote Color: Dark Blue and Black
Money: 1,000 Digi Dollars

Appearance: Draik Tempest is a 5'9 white kid from America. His eyes are a weird icy blue color that doesn't match with his blond hair. His build is slim, with a weight of only 136 pounds you kind of get that when your that tall. He is normally seen wearing a black t-shirt, blue jeans, a black leather trenchcoat and a necklace and ring (pictures will be provided for these two items). Normally seen carrying a spear, a staff, or a sword in the digital world, having the money to actually afford them.

Personality: Living mostly by himself, Draik is sort of a shut in. During the days, he went to school and trained with his friends in various forms of fighting, Draik normally choosing a staff to their boken swords whenever they had the money to get the equipment from the local store. After the duels, he would normally go home to play on his computer, hacking into various low profile websites and such.

Draik had no respect for any authority figures, tending to dislike those who like to lord over others. If facing one, he won't hesitate to talk back to them and even start fights with them, which explains why he spends some time grounded every month, even though his parents were never home to enforce it.

When alone at home, he usually goes up to the roof to practices his stances with his staff, usually for a couple hours. After practicing, he chills downstairs and plays video games or goes on the computer until it was time to sleep, which was normally late at night. He never really kept any pets or anything, but he has been seen buying shrimp for the local cats and tossing them on the steps up to his apartment.

History: When Draik was younger, he was his parents dream child, being pampered and bought anything he asked. They were willing to do almost anything to make him happy, and bought him many toys and games. Everything was fine, until he grew up.

When he started going to school, other kids were mean to him, calling him various names and even beating him up and taking his stuff. His parents didn't like that, so they put him into a self defense class to learn to defend himself so it wouldn't happen anymore. After more than a few lesson, Draik's parents got a call from school saying that Draik had broken a kids arm and another kids leg. His parents were shocked by this behavior, and Draik simply told them that he was defending himself and they wouldn't stop no matter how many times they went down.

After that, Draik's parents began to be wary of their son, canceling all further martial arts lessons. That didn't stop him though, because as with anything in this day and age you can learn almost anything through the internet, and Draik continued his training by himself. His parents didn't know this, or if they did they didn't try to stop him. After all, they were a little afraid of him now.

Years passed, as did school years, and Draik began practicing with other tools, having gotten bored with hand to hand combat. He went through school bored, but not trying to much so he didn't get as good a grades as he could have gotten. If anything, he helped his friends more than himself.

When he turned sixteen, his parents congratulated him on getting his learners permit by buying him a car, which he thanked them for. He was more distracted by a program he'd found on the internet, and was examining it when a Digimote popped out of it along with a Digiegg, even though he didn't know what either one was. It was probably one of the most shocking experiences of his life though. At least until the egg hatched that is.

Digimon Partner Application
Name: Dragomon
Nicknames: Kouen
Sex: Male
Attribute: Data
Type: Dragon Human
Alliance: Neutral
Evolution Line: Tagomon - Spearedmon - Ryoumon - Dragomon - Dragoonmon
EXP: (0)

Description of Digimon:

Tagomon: Looks like a small ball with scales all over it and a mouth and eyes.

Spearedmon: Looks similar to a small ball with scales all over and a spear attached at it's head with tiny arms at it's side. Can only shoot bubbles, or poke someone with it's spear.

Ryoumon: Actually looks like a small kid with dragon-like head and scales all over it. The spear from it's earlier form is now just holstered on his back. Is able to breathe fire as well as jump high into the air.

Dragomon: Looks like a larger version of Ryoumon, Dragomon is basically a six foot tall Ryoumon wearing shoulder, arm, and leg guards. Is able to jump higher and the fire becomes hotter.

Dragoonmon: Clicky

ShiningDragoonmon: This is the Mega form

Personality: Kouen is a passive digimon, one who doesn't care about the qualms of other digimon. The only thing he does care about is finding an opponent worthy of him and defeating them. When not fighting others, he is calm and collected, and sometimes making jokes. He enjoys playing video games with Draik, and is pretty good at them, when he has actual hands. Kouen enjoys training with Draik, and anyone else who enjoys fighting.

Burst Mode Description / Picture: Raging Dragoonmon Is able to form a giant sword or a spear out of light. I'll post attacks whenever I actually get close to achieving this form.

History: Dragomon actually used to be an old warrior, traveling around and fighting others. He was gracious in victory as well as defeat. But one day, his opponent did not take Dragomon's victory well, and attempted to get back at him by tricking him. The other digimon led Dragomon to where he was told he would find a strong opponent, but instead all he found was a gang of other digimon who he had defeated, they all ganged up on him and beat him within an inch of his life.

Barely enough strength left, he escaped through a nearby terminal, the government nearly destroying him as he went through the internet. He wasn't able to retain his champion form in that state, and ended up back as a digiegg, appearing to Draik Tempest.

RPG Sample: When the egg and D-mote had appeared out of his computer, Draik had freaked and nearly fallen out of his chair trying to get away. When he'd calmed down a bit though, he approached his computer desk to examine both objects. The first thing he'd picked up was the D-mote, which suddenly glowed really brightly when he touched it, bringing up his data in a holographic image. Draik let go of it in an instant and the image disappeared, but the screen continued to glow.

The next thing he examined was the strange egg, which seemed to have a flame pattern on it's shell. He picked it up, and started wondering if he could make an omelet with it before it began to shake and crack. Draik practically dropped it and the shell cracked wide open to reveal what looked like a scaled ball. Draik went so far as to poke it, which received a growl and a snap at his fingers. It then started whining and blowing bubbles everywhere.

Draik backed away, blinking at the strangeness of all this, What the heck? What is this thing? On a whim, he grabbed the D-mote and pointed it at the creature, hitting a random button. It came up with an image of the creature and a name under it. Tagomon, huh? So it's a creature. But what is this device? Before he could think on it anymore, Tagomon started crying. Draik sighed, he knew enough about babies to know that it was probably hungry or something like that. So he went to get some food, carrying Tagomon with him, even if the little thing did try to bite him.

Deciding on a staple of his own diet, Draik made it a sandwich and fed it to Tagomon, watching his own finger so they weren't bitten off. He then got two sodas out of the fridge too and opened one for the creature and poured it into a bowl so it could drink it. When it was finished, Tagomon started glowing brightly, and Draik backed away, kind of afraid of what it was doing now. He watched as it seemed to morph into a larger creature that now had arms and what looked like a spear. It bounced up and down and looked at Draik, "Hi, I'm Spearedmon." Draik passed out five seconds later.

About a minute later, he woke up screaming, Spearedmon having struck him with the spear on it's head. "Ow, you little ball. That hurt." Spearedmon looked at Draik and said, "Your not supposed to fall asleep like that, especially not when someones trying to make friends with you." Draik gave Spearedmon a look and got up to go back to his room. Spearedmon followed, and watched as Draik grabbed the D-mote and began examining it. "Since you seem to be attached to this thing somehow, could you tell me what it is?" Spearedmon hopped onto Draik's bed and fell asleep, not responding. Draik glared at it and sighed as he began playing with buttons, actually finding out a lot about the thing in the process. He spent the rest of the day looking through the thing, and his parents came home to him sleeping with his head on the desk, Spearedmon looking like a lump with a blanket hiding him.

Extra:
Draik's Ring
user posted image
Draik in his normal clothes and wearing his necklace.user posted image
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Takashi
Posted: Jul 4 2007, 11:16 PM


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All right, the application is very good, but there a few things I want to point out. For one, your character's appearance is only four sentences long when it is required for it to be at least five sentences long. The problem also occurs on your Digimon's personality. Also, I think having your character cripple two classmates is a little over the top. I can see breaking their arm and leg, but crippling them for life?

Sorry for seeming to be so strick, but I can't make any exceptions to the rules. >.<;

Just make these changes and you'll be accepted! biggrin.gif
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Draik Tempest
Posted: Jul 5 2007, 03:37 PM


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Gack! My perfect record of flawless applications is broken. T.T

JK biggrin.gif Fixed it.
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Takashi
Posted: Jul 5 2007, 10:48 PM


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All right, you're accepted! smile.gif Oh! I forgot to point this out: you might want to change Flaremon's name - a real Digimon named Flaremon actually already exists.

(Hmm... now I'm gonna have to make some rules on creating your own Digimon...)
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Draik Tempest
Posted: Jul 13 2007, 04:23 AM


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I, er, edited it so that my digimon now has a mega form, and I changed the burst mode. It might need reapproval...
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