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 The Watchman's Bell, Book, And Candle, My First Completed Story
Ammom
Posted: Nov 6 2007, 05:52 AM


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Yes, I have made a story!!!

At this day and age, it's hard to complete a story. There's motivation issues, ideas, concepts, and putting everything together to worry about. I somehow managed to finish one, and I love it dearly. So much so, that I started a sequel in fact.

So on about my story.

A young girl upon her thirteenth birthday (wishing to forget the day entirely) is brought to meet her betrothed. Hiding out in the orchard, she meets up with him nonetheless, and a chance encounter with a mysterious book sends her whirling into a place unknown.

The vast castle - with endless rooms and lined with mirrors as simple as wood to delicately crafted gold - becomes her sanctuary and takes her from the simpler rules of life, and into the harsher truths of reality. It's here, inside Replicate Castle, that Marie meets up with the Watchman - a man destined to run the castle and keep order.

The Watchman shows Marie what lies beyond the mirrors, and gives glimpses into the infinite worlds. But there are threats abroad as a mysterious lord tries to sieze control of the creatures that dwell inside Replicate Castle - the Idioms. These powerful beings present a conflict as they are let loose from their paintings, and Haven is forced to make a decision to help Marie return home and give up his position - or keep it and face the destiny branded on his arm.


So that's a little summary for you. Of course, there are other details. This story still has to go through another editing (just to check that everything adds up on the pages that adds up in my head). It's a Fantasy/Adventure type, and if you're interested, then it can be found here:

the Watchman's Bell, Book, and Candle

Hope you like it, smile.gif

~Ammom


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The Divine Dragoon
Posted: Jan 2 2008, 12:33 AM


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Sounds interesting. I'm working on a few, but so far the longest is around 50 pages and could probably go through a rewrite of some areas. Others are on hold until I get my lazy ass around to rewriting them, and some have just stalled completely.

When I get more time, I'll make an account and start reading, but I have much to do and a LOT to read right now, so it may take some time. I'll let you know what I think about it.


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