PA's Feedback Thread

[Pegasus Angel]

Hope you liked the twist about where they actually were...

it was kinda difficult to write the Sheeta scene and make it real as she would literally not have had her senses about her after what happened and besides Shep was pretty messed up, but I still think there was a little moment there, even if it was from Shep.

Already halfway through the next epi...when this bit is over, gonna make some more interesting one off epi's hopefully with the team out on missions...

I like the Furling's...

[Adamo]

so ya beckie... since ive been out you havnt heard my reviews, haha. outta the 3 season you wrote, season 1 is still my favorite. but thats besides the point.

Fantastic writing, great story and extremely creatative. There was never a point in the read that I was turned off or lost interest... and with me thats rare. Great work babe!

I cant been sure when ill read the rest of your fanfics, but it will happen someday. lololololololololol

and on a side note... you never told me what you thought of the last section on my story!! IM SO HURT!! HAHA <3 <3 <3

[Pegasus Angel]

Ooh thanks for the nice feedback, much appreciated and yes I've been busy with 2 new seasons since you were away!

I will check out your other chapter asap

[Adamo]

3.1 ALL = read, great work Becks. you manage to take the characters and give them your own person flair. you also have a nack for the whole cliffhanger thing.

3.2 epi 1 read... EVIL FURLING LADY!!!! haha, im curious if she is going to remain the same or turn more into a Todd like character... I see the potential.

Sheeta ever going to get back together??

[Pegasus Angel]

wow thanks for reading everything of the 3 point series

Sheeta huh? Well you'll just have to wait for the next epi, quite a firecracker if I recall, got to find it first and hopefully if I do that I can start work on typing it up...already finished writing it ages back

[Adamo]

its easy to read straight through when the quality of work is so high.

[Pegasus Angel]

Aw thanks
I'm now inspired to carry on!!

[Pegasus Angel]

finally got around to finding a pic of how I picture the Furlings in my fics...although this one is female and the blue patches are over her cheeks whereas mine are over their temples...

This character is from the Star Wars books, specifically Medstar II: Jedi Healer



What do you think??

[Andrea]

looks really cool!! I like it!!!

[Pegasus Angel]

Thanks for commenting Andrea! Glad you like her...

I've got 4 more episodes on their way soon

[Andrea]

Finally was able to read epi 3. Sorry for not reading it earlier, I totally miss it I should use my eyes more often.

Awesome as always! Glad to read that Keeta is still Keeta. It's my kind of girl, I love the way she is angry and I am sorry for John. And yeah, gotta admit, I missed Sheetas problems Can't wait to read what happens next. Hope they can work it all out + more Furlings please!

[Pegasus Angel]

Ah yes the next episode has Furling's in it and more Sheeta, but it gets interesting after that episode, the next two after will be kinda more fun and a very slight spoiler
>>>>>Shep points a gun at Keeta...will he fire?!<<<<<

Thanks for reading, hope others get back into the swing of reading too, its much appreciated...

[Andrea]

Loool!! Nice!! Keeta will go crazy with her powers or what? Like she did with McKay in this epi? Otherwise why would he ..... *wonders*

Will be the next epi ready soon?